
河南省中考英语复习第三部分中考题型过关题型六书面表达课件.ppt
15页中 考英 语2019第三部分 中考题型过关题型六 书面表达CONTENTS目 录PART 01考情帮PART 02方法帮PART 01考情帮命题点考情总结 考情帮 分析河南近十年中考真题可知,书面表达主要有以下命题特点:1.多为命题或半命题作文,且有写作提示2.文体主要为记叙文和说明文3.话题贴近学生生活,普适性强,学生有话可说PART 02方法帮方法帮1.1.审题审题:即审写作要点、文体、时态、人称等2.2.列提纲列提纲:即构思写作框架常见作文框架:方法帮 3.3.遣词造句遣词造句, ,连句成篇连句成篇★遣词:在提纲的基础上选用词汇、短语避免用词重复,做到用词准确★造句:在写句子时,尽可能地变换句式和结构,即尝试使用复合句(宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句),并尝试变化语态★连句成篇:巧用过渡词,使行文更加流畅,逻辑更加清晰,不要单句罗列方法帮 •中考作文常用过渡词•表示并列:and; also; as well as; both...and...; either...or...; neither...nor...;not only...but also...; at the same time•表示递进:what's more; what's worse; even; especially•表示转折:but; however; yet; instead•表示让步:although; though; after all; even though•表示因果:as; for; because; because of; so; as a result; thanks to•表示目的:so that; in order that•表示对比:on the one hand...on the other hand; different from; unlike; prefer to do...rather than do方法帮 •表示举例:like; for example; such as; take...as an example•表示顺序:first(ly); first of all; second(ly); next; then; finally; in the end; at last; last but not least•表示强调:certainly; surely; truly; no doubt; without any doubt•表示陈述事实:in fact; as a matter of fact; actually•表示个人观点:as far as I know; in my opinion; to tell the truth; to be honest; as for me•表示总结:in a word; all in all; in short方法帮 4.4.修改润色修改润色★修改:主要针对写作疏忽所致的错误,包括对用词错误、语法错误、句法错误进行纠正。
①用词错误涉及单词拼写错误、搭配错误、词性误用等②语法错误涉及主谓不一致、名词单复数错用、时态和语态误用等③句法错误涉及there be句型出现双谓语、主从复合句只出现从句而无主句、并列句无连词而直接用逗号隔开等★润色:对文章进行更高层次的美化,考虑行文连贯性,使行文紧凑、逻辑清楚方法帮 5.5.规范抄写规范抄写:保持卷面干净、清晰悦目,尽量不做涂改在平时的训练中要坚持做到书写工整、卷面整洁,养成良好习惯方法帮 【典例】【典例】 [2018河南]每个人都生活在一个特定的环境请以"What I like about where I live"为题,并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文,描述你生活的环境1.要点:1)你生活在什么样的环境; 2)你喜欢这个环境的什么; 3)你对这个环境有何期望2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 2)词数80左右What I like about where I live _________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 方法帮 【审题指导】【审题指导】★审题 要点:①生活的环境;②喜欢的原因;③对未来的期望 文体:说明文 时态:一般现在时 人称:第一人称+第三人称★列提纲★遣词造句,连句成篇①需要用到的词汇 live; quiet; cars; seldom; enjoy; slow; peaceful; like; problems; high-speed train; hope; travel; easily; be late for②过渡词 different from; and; however; so that方法帮 【参考范文】What I like about where I live I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, she has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People here are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city. However, my city has her problems. She has no high-speed train. I hope she will soon have high-speed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily! 方法帮 【评分标准】【评分标准】 书面表达,15分。
考生应根据题目要求,采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语,完整、准确地表达所要求的内容分四档评分:第一档:符合题目要求,内容完整,层次结构清晰,表达清楚,语言无误13—15分第二档:基本符合题目要求,内容较完整,层次结构较清晰,表达较清楚,语言有少量错误9—12分第三档:部分内容符合题目要求,内容不够完整,层次结构不够清晰,表达不够清楚,语言有较多错误4—8分第四档:不符合题目要求,整篇表达不清楚,或照抄、拼凑几个词语0—3分。
