广东高考英语基础写作课件.ppt

考查内容考查内容: 基本的语言表达能力和基本的写作技巧评分标准评分标准: 1. 内容(完整性) 2. 语言(语法及用词的准确性和句子结构的复杂程度) 3. 文采修辞(连贯性)一.遣词方面1.措辞要贴切具体 A man is walking down the street. (走) A man is strolling down the street A man is wandering in the street A man is striding down the street. (漫步,闲逛)(徘徊,漫游)(大步走)2.使用高级词汇This is a difficult job. He learned about everything at last. I should thank you for taking so much trouble to help me. (challenging)(eventually)(grateful)schedule, available, access, annoyed, essential, occupy, fascinate 1.He was angry with his wife because the dinner was badly cooked. 2.You can not get the book now. 3. Students must have opportunities to read good books. 4.Is wealth necessary to happiness? 5.The plane arrived on time. 6.He is busy with a translation of a French novel. 7. The children showed great interest in the toys in the shop windows. (was annoyed with)(is not available)(have access to) (essential)(on schedule)(is occupied with)(were fascinated by)3.避免重复使用词汇 The chart (图表)shows the daily amount of time the students spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer. While 25 minutes is spent on sports ,only 12 minutes goes into housework.他失业了。

He is out of a job.He is out of work.He is unemployed.He is fired.He is laid off.He has lost his job.4.要善于运用短语When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything .When he was a child, he was dying/thirsty for knowledge.Hacker attackers are increasing.Hacker attackers are on the increase/rise.Your work is so good that it cannot be praised enough.Your work is beyond all praise.2.巧用非谓语动词When I walked out of the lift, I heard someone calling my name.Walking out of the lift, I heard my name called.3.巧用with的复合结构 Because so many people looked at her, she felt quite nervous.(普通) With so many people looking at her, she felt quite nervous.(高级)二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变.1.巧用复合句 What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet. The Internet enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.4.巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气等（倒装句）Only in this way can Internet bars be well used by people. (感叹句) I thought ,“How hard mum is working! She must be very tired”5.巧用排山倒海句 The purpose of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.三、谋篇方面:结构要清晰流畅,巧用过渡词下列各组表示列举的短语非常实用,对高考写作很有帮助: 1.firstly,…secondly,…thirdly,…finally,… 2.to begin with,…then,…furthermore,…finally,... 3.to start with,…next,…in addition,…finally,… 4.first and foremost…,besides…,last but not least… 5.most important of all…,moreover…,finally…如果只有两层意思,可选用下列两组中的任一组.1.On the one hand,…on the other hand…2.For one thing,…and for another thing…常用的过渡表达法:1.表增加:and ,also, in addition, furthermore, moreover2.表时间顺序:now, then, before, after, soon, gradually3.表空间顺序:near, beyond, above, around, outside4.表示比较:in the same way, just like, just as5.表示对照:but, still, yet, however, on the contrary6.表原因和结果:because, since, so, as a result, therefore7.表目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that 8.表强调:indeed, surely, without any doubt, truly9.表解释说明:for ,for example, in fact, actually10.表总结:in conclusion, in brief, in a word。