读后续写评讲课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2024/11/13,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2024/11/13,0,读后续写,Continuation writing,第二节 读后续写（满分25分）,阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Terrible!”Sally sighed in frustration(,沮丧,),her gaze locked onto the disappointing grades in her latest math exam.It felt like failure was always there,making fun of her diligent efforts.With a swift motion,she stuffed the paper deep into her bag,not wanting her classmates to see it or say anything.,Just as she quietly wiped away her tears with the back of her hand,her teacher,Mrs.Leena,caught sight of her frustration.She came over and gently asked Sally to speak with her during the break.,Sally was nervous but curious as she waited for the lunch bell.When it finally rang,she went over to Mrs.Leena.Upon seeing Sally,the teacher asked her to take a seat.With a reassuring smile,Mrs.Leena said,“Sally,you seem frustrated.I think I know why,and if youre open to it,we can figure this out together.”,Confused,Sally replied,“Ma,am,Ive been struggling with math since the term started.No matter how much I try,I just couldnt be able to get better.Its so frustrating,”she admitted,her voice full of sadness.,Mrs.Leena smiled warmly and said,“Dont feel so discouraged.With hard work,determination,and patience,you will improve it.The first step is always the hardest,but once you are committed to pushing forward without giving up,victory awaits.Now,gather your strength,and lets tackle this challenge together.”,Inspired by her teachers words,Sally worked harder,following Mrs.Leenas guidance carefully.By the time the final exams approached,she had studied her math book thoroughly and gone through all the exercises again and again.,注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；,2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

On the exam day,a fear of failure upset her stomach.,_,A few weeks later,she passed her math exam with an unbelievable Agrade on her report card.,_,beginning,ending,theme,when,where,what,why,who,how,place,characters,events/plots,positive,Pre-writing,（,W and T,),STEP,1,time,Where,When,Characters,plots,At school,In the latest math exam,.,Sally,Mrs.Leena,Pre-writing,Climax,studied math book thoroughly and gone through all the exercises again and again,Para1:On the exam day,a fear of failure upset her stomach.,plots,明 线,emotions,暗 线,Pre-writing,Sally failed the latest math exam,frustrated,disappointed,Mrs.Leena noticed Sallys frustration,then came over and gently ask Sally to speak with her.,nervous but curious,confused,Mrs.Leena smiled warmly and encouraged Sally.,inspired,Para2:A few weeks later,she passed her math exam with an unbelievable Agrade on her report card.,?,Read for conflict,Sally has been struggling with math since the term started.No matter how much she tried,she just couldnt be able to get better.,Read for the theme,Sally passed the math exam with hard-work,patience and determination.,Solution,the theme,:,hard work,and determination help us succeed.,记住三大原则：,每段内容,三大原则,1.ActionResponse,原则,：角色,A,的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其它角色的一系列反应的。

每段对话,1-2,句，不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种,良好的反应,2.ConflictSolution,原则,：有问题的,解决方法3.NegativePositive,原则,：写作中一定要体现情感的变化，无论前面是这样的变化，最终都是积极的Paragraph 1:On the exam day,a fear of failure upset,her,stomach.,How did Sally feel?,What did Sally do?,ActionResponse,Determine a plot:2.,补充每段内容,Paragraph 2:A few weeks later,she,passed her math exam with an unbelievable A grade on her report card.,How did she feel?,What did she do?,What she got from this experience?,NegativePositive,ConflictSolution,Determine a plot:2.,补充每段内容,On the exam day,a fear of failure upset sallys stomach.,She could feel her heart racing as she sat at her desk,staring at the blank test paper in front of her.Her hands felt cold,and her mind began to fill with doubts.“What if I mess up again?”She thought.But then,remembering Mrs.Leenas encouraging words,she took a deep breath and focused on the paper.Slowly but steadily,she worked through each problem,her pencil moving with more confidence than she had ever felt before.By the time she finished,she felt a mix of relief and uncertainty,hoping all her hard work had paid off.,A few weeks later,she passed her math exam with an unbelievable A grade on her report card.,A wave of joy and disbelief washed over her.she couldnt stop smiling as she realized how far she had come.Mrs.Leena looked at her and gave her an approving nod,a silent reminder of the journey they had been on together.Sally felt a newfound sense of confidence,knowing that with hard work,patience,and determination,she could overcome any challenge.From that day forward,she approached her studies with a brighter outlook,ready to tackle whatever came her way.,19,分，内容完整，情节合理，句式丰富，卷面整洁，但有部分语法错误。

14-15,分，内容完整，语言丰富，但情节不够合理，尤其第一段不该写去找老师17-18,分，内容完整，情节合理，句式丰富，能进行点题8,分，内容不够完整，对话太多，没突出主题，字数太少，语法错误较多8,分，内容不完整，字数不足四句定框架,Paragraph 1:On the exam day,a fear of failure upset,her,stomach.,_,_,_,Paragraph 2:A few weeks later,she,passed her math exam with an unbelievable A grade on her report card.,。