美国作文之美国大学申请作文.docx

美国大学申请作文【篇一：如何写美国大学申请作文】 如何写美国大学申请作文 很多美国大学提供了不同的作文题目让申请者选择，例如common application 里的基本作文题目里就列出了6个，其中一个就包括了你自己可以选题美国大学申请作文选题的技巧当让就是要选一个你最能发挥的题目下面百利天下留学教大家如何写美国大学申请作文 美国大学申请作文题目一般不难，对于申请者来说，要考虑的是写出来的东西能够让招生官员看到自己的亮点，如何利用一个简单的题目把你的信息在短短250-500字里表达出来下面百利天下留学教大家写美国大学申请作问 1、尽量避免陈腔滥调，太泛的写法 – 不要有太多的形容词形容自己有多聪明，多优秀，多完美，招生官员对这样的文章会觉得不切实际如果你真的想表现自己的优秀，必须要有实际的例子来表现 2、文章内容一定要有你自己的个性，表现出你独有的观点，而且理念要统一，不要前后矛盾在开始主题之后，记得用生动的例子来证明你的观点，才能吸引读者的兴趣你的学术程度已经在gpa和sat分数里可以看得出来，你所要在美国大学申请作文里面表现的一定是分数里面看不出来的东西，如个性，想法，领导能力等等。

3、不要拍马屁，而写一些你以为招生官员听了会很高兴的话 - 招生官员见多了文章写的尽是‘你们大学非常好，学术能力强，设备好，有某某有名教授或校友，是我从小就想进的唯一大学’等等的语言，还不如实际一点好好表现你自己的长处，或是你如何在这样竞争的环境中生存 4、不要像写简历一样的写美国大学申请作文：你的学术经历和活动过程在申请表里面都详细的填好了，尽量不要在作文里面重复已有的内容，而是让招生官员更清楚的看到你独特的观点 5、有的学生为了要充满要求的字数，想出很多不相关或是多余的词句来填补空间不管申请作文要求的是几个字，你必须要把握的是要字字珠玑 6、写完申请作文后，自己一定要读下以确定内容是否通顺，是否有表达清楚你自己的意思、拼写和文法是否正确如果只是用电脑里面的拼写检查通常是不够的，因为有的字你拼错以后如果是别的意思，word里面的拼写检查没法检测出来，也不会自动帮你修改当然要写好一篇满意的美国大学申请作文当然不是那么容易，因为每个大学要的文章不同，准备的早的学生可能会花两三个月的时间从构思开始，然后修改，复读，听取专家意见，再最终定稿要记住，一篇好的美国大学申请作文可以让招生官员看到你生动活泼的观点，而且是你除了分数之外可以帮助招生官员是否决定录取你的重要因素。

篇二：美国大学文书申请范文】 美国大学文书申请范文 i guess it was inevitable that i’d be on hockey skates at some point in my life, but i did not expect that i’d become one of a rare group of female ice hockey officials before i even reached high school. being born into a family of hockey players and figure skaters, it seemed that my destiny had already been decided. right from the beginning, my two older brothers and my father strapped me up and threw me onto the ice. i loved it and, in my mind, i was on my way to becoming a female gretzky! but my mom had to think of something fast to drag her little girl away from this sport of ruffians. enter my first hot pink figure skating dress! that was all it took to launch fifteen years of competitive figure skating. even though figure skating soon became my passion, i always had an unsatisfied yearning for ice hockey. it took a great deal of convincing from my parents that competitive figure skating and ice hockey didn’t mix.people i wasn’t related to, and that’s when my experience drastically changed. an apologetic smile and an “i’m sorry” wasn’t going to get me through games now. as i began officiating higher-level games and dealing with more arrogant coaches, i suddenly entered a new male-dominated world, a world i had never experienced before. my confidence was shot, and all i wanted to do was get through each game and be able to leave. sometimes i was even too scared to skate along the teams’ benches because i would get upset by what the coaches would yell to me. “do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” was a typical comment that coaches would spit at me during the course of a game. in their eyes, i did not belong on that ice, and they were going to do whatever they could do to make sure no women wanted to officiate their games. i was determined not to let them chase me off the ice. i made the decision to stand up for myself. i never responded rudely to the coaches, but i did not let them walk all over me and destroy my confidence anymore. i started to act and feel more like the 4-year certified atlantic district official that i am. there were still a few situations that scared me. one time i called a penalty in a championship game during the third overtime and the team i penalized ended up losing because they got scored on. i knew i had made the right call, even though i was unnerved when i saw the losingteams’ parents waiting for me at my locker room; for the moment i wished i hadn’t called that penalty. although it was scary at the time, i stood my ground and overcame my fears. that was an important stepping-stone in my officiating career and in my life. after four years of refereeing, i still can’t say it’s easy. every game hands me something new and i never know what to expect. now i have the confidence and preparation to deal with the unexpected, on and off the ice. i now also know to take everything with a grain of salt and not let it get to me. i have learned that life is just like being out on the ice; if i am prepared and act with confidence, i will be perceived as confident. these are the little lessons that i’m grateful to have learned as a woman referee. things to notice about this essay 1. the author tells an interesting story about her experiences as a referee. 2. a sense of her personality—determination, flexibility, good humor—comes through in the narration. 3. details like “do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” make the narration memorable (we’d love to hear more of these kinds of details). 4. the essay needs a faster start. the first paragraph (three sentences) says the same thing in both the first and third sentences—and gives away the essay’s surprise in the second! a good revision would delete all of paragraph one and start at paragraph two. 5. there’s too much frame here and not enough picture. the essay needs further de。