高考英语书信类作文满分挑战---安慰建议信（精编版）.docx

高考英语书面表达之信件类型分类：安慰信1. 话题解析安慰建议信体裁属于应用文， 人称主要为第一、 第二人称， 时态主要为一般现在时、一般将来时安慰建议信一般包含三个要点：一、开头点题，表示关心 和安慰，说明写信目的二、主体部分，提出建议（一般在 2 点以上）三、巧妙收尾，表达祝愿2. 词汇积累（1） ）常用词汇发挥重要作用 exert a profound impact onmake significant/ substantial/ valuable/ outstandingcontributions to坚持 stick to/ persist in/ persevere with采取积极的态度 adopt an optimistic attitude尽管 in spite of遭受，遭遇 be confronted with因此 hence优先的事物 priority（2） ）常用句式①I am excessively(非常)sorry to hear that you are trapped in bad mood, which is because...听说你因为 而情绪低落，我深感抱歉。

① However, it wont be a hard nut to crack if you can...然而，如果你能够 的话，一切都不会太难① Having known that you are under painful state and great pressure now, I ’ m writ to express my great comfort to you.获悉你现在处境困难，压力巨大，我写信是为了表达我对你的慰藉①Words fail to convey my profound worry when I heard that...听说 之后，我的担忧无法用言语来表达① My sorrow is beyond words for hearing that听说 之后，我的悲伤无法言表①Nothing is better than...没有什么东西比 更好⑦I deem(视作，相信） it adj. to do我认为做 ......是......①It is advisable to ... / only by which can you .../ It is high time that （虚拟） /It is essential for you to .../ It is a brilliant way to...我建议 （此处不逐个翻译）3. 实战考题假定你是李华，你的朋友 Tony 刚刚升入高三，因为暑期短他没休息好，所以现在状态很差。

面临高考压力， Tony 不知所措请你给他写一封信表示安慰， 要点如下：1、表示难过和理解；2、就如何调整状态提出建议注意：1、词数 100左右2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数1） ）写作思路第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，提出建议； 第三步：表达愿望和祝愿2） ）词汇过关表达我的深刻理解extend my deep understanding/ have a strong vibe withyou/in parallel with you陷入困境trap in/ meet formidable trouble/ be puzzled about把自己沉浸在学习的氛围中immerse yourself in the study atmosphere心情不佳in low spirit/ lack of spirit别将自己沉浸在悲伤当中don’t bury yourself in a state of sadness失去动力的demotivated疲劳fatigue全心全意地wholeheartedly3. 星级句式第一段：表达理解，进行安慰? Words fail to express my sympathy when I heard that you are in bad conditions mentally and physically on account of a lack of relaxation during the short summer vacation recently.? Under the heavy burden of College Entrance Examination,we are bound to be confronted with a wide range of inevitable setbacks and upsetting difficulties.第二段：提出建议（1） ）任务分解，时间规划? Therefore, its no use worrying but do nothing, only when you clear up your complex mind and try your most to catch up with the new term can you work your problems out.? Moreover, a detailed schedule is of vital importance, which can help you strike a balance between study and your leisure time.（2） ）健康生活 ,适度运动? So its no exaggeration to say that you almost make a successonce you can maintain the equilibrium(平衡) between recreation and study.? What’ s more, time permitting, it ’alstearnsamtiavert to do sports after school.Vital as homework is, physical fitness also plays an essential role in your life.（3） ）积极心态，向老师或家人倾诉? Subsequently, on account of the great pressure, it ’ s necessary for you to refresh yourself and keep passion on the academic work.? Ultimately ， when you encounter some difficulties, both teachers and parents will give you a hand if you turn to them.第三段：希望建议有所帮助，并表达祝愿? I hope these practical suggestions mentioned above will make a difference to you.? I sincerely hope you can make flexible adjustments to fit in well with the life of Senior 3 and I will be delighted if my advice makes some differences.4. 写一篇好作文（1） ）佳作赏析：Dear Tony,I am more than sorry to know that you are in such a bad situation undergoing great pressure of your senior three ’lifse, ①due to the lack of rest during a shortholiday. ②I can t’understand you more as the same a senior student as you. But justtake it easy. In the hope of offering you some help, I make my suggestions as follows.To begin with, it ’ s essential for you to adjust your schedule, seeking a balanced style to fit the new school life, which will turn to be busy and maybe a bit of boringand tiring. Besides, to keep calm mentally is also quite necessary for you.①As the saying goes, “ Awatched pot never boiled. ” Therefo①re,it ’nos useworrying but do nothing, ① only do you clear up your complex mind and try your most to catch up with the new term can you work your problems out. Last but not least, finding ways you are fond of for your daily relaxation can be a wise choice, such as some sports, light music and some excellent articles.All in all, I sincerely wish my suggestions can ① be of your benefit and hope you can get rid of the present situation as early as possible.名师点评：① due to引导原因状语从句，简明扼要表达题目要求信息。

①“ as a结s”构的使用使文章开头便能抓住老师眼球Yours, Li Hua①添加谚语 —— 心急水不开，展示积累，与后文建议的逻辑相符，从而增强了文章的可读性常用进言谚语还有 No sweat, no sweet或.耕耘 一分收获）No pains, no gains.(一分①该句式的运用，可灵活表达自己的反对观点，还可用 there is no use 或 it is meaningless/ a waste of time to do作同义替换① only引导半倒装条件句 ,但要注意此用法系 only 修饰整个句子，若 only 修饰主语，则不用倒装① be of benefit, get rid of等课本短语的运用，显示出基础知识扎实的功底2） ）升级改写：改写前：Dear Tony,Hearing you are out of condition now,。