大学四级英语写作解析.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,四级作文评分原则,四级考试大纲写作要求,能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料时做笔记、回答问题和写提纲，能就一定的话题或提纲在半小时内写出,120-150,词的短文，能写短信或便条，表达意思清楚，无重大语言错误四级作文评分原则,1.CET,是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则2.CET,作文题采用总体评分,(Global Scoring),方法，阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分,(reward scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分四级作文评分原则,3.,从,内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍4,.,避免趋中倾向该给高分的给高分，包括满分,;,该给低分给低分，包括零分一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数四级作文评分标准,1.,本题满分为,15,分,2.,阅卷标准共分五等,:,2,分、,5,分、,8,分、,11,分及,14,分,。

各有标准样卷一至二份3.,阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数,(,如,8,分,),相似，即定为该分数,(,即,8,分,);,若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分,(,即,9,分,),或减一分,(,即,7,分,),但不得加或减半分四级作文评分标准,4.,字数不足应酌情扣分：,累计字数,110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 49 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9,(1),如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均,不得计入所写字数2),规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分3),如果扣为,0,分，要慎重处理四级作文题目,Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:,假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。

见证书须包括以下几点：,1,车祸发生的时间及地点,2,你所见到的车祸情况,3,你对车祸原因的分析,四级作文评分标准及样卷,2,分：,条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误样卷,5,分：,基本切题表达思想不清楚，连贯性差有较多的严重语言错误样卷,8,分：,基本切题有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯,;,语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误样卷,四级作文评分标准及样卷,11,分：,切题表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言,错误样卷,14,分：,切题表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，,基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错样卷,四级作文,2,分样卷,I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road.The Traffic Accident has been at the morning,May 1 Two children by bike went to school.A car is so fast,the streel.And the car touched two children by bike,and the Traffic Accident has happened.One is touched so far way and the other is put down.Mary people come here,and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.,Wait a time,The ploiemen arriverd in the,Accident place.,My opiontoin:The car driver is so fast by car,and He didnt attendation to the children by,bike aside the road.Two children by bike didnt,heared the car come.All of above,I think the,car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.,四级作文,2,分样卷,四级作文,5,分样卷,It was 8:00 this morning,I went on my way to,school.When I just at the school gate,I saw the,terrible traffic accident happend.A student ride his bike in a high speed,and just,when he arrived the school gate,a large truck traveled,out of the gate and hit him down.He flied over 3m,before his bike hit him on the ground.Surely,the poor,boy was hurt very bad.,四级作文,5,分样卷,I think there are two reasons for the,accident.First,it was just the time we began,our first class,the bike rider perhaps did not,want to be late,he ride his bike so fast,even,didnt low down his speed at the gate.Secend,the truck is too large,and at that time,there,were too many people walk through the gate,so the bike driver have no other way to chose,but to ride in the middle of the road.,四级作文,8,分样卷,The trafic accident was taken place at the,junction of two highways when I was driving,my car home at about 4 oclock.The yellow car involed in the accident was,running at a high speed along the right-hand,when it happened.Hardly it reached the,junction when it cracked with a truck running,from another direction.There was no time for,the drivers to change the directions.,四级作文,8,分样卷,I think the accident mostly attributed to such,reasons:Firstly and the foremost,it was the,carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly,made the accidents happen.It was not too,careful for them when running a car.Secondly,the weather also should be responsible for it.,The fog made the vision of drivers vague.Last,but not the least,the constructure of the roads was,unreasonable.The trafic lights are needed at any,junctions.,四级作文,11,分样卷,It was last Friday morning.The accident happened,when I was on my way to school.It was so terrible,that I would never forget it.I was walking along the road,and there are not so,many cars on the road.Then,with a big sound,the,accident happened.The red car stoped suddenly on,the road so that the driver of following car couldnt,respond immediately.The back of the red car was badly,damaged,but fortunately there was no people injured,in this accident.,四级作文11分样卷,I think the main reasons are as follows:First,of all,the red car shouldnt stop suddenly,without any signals.Secondly,the following car,should keep a certain distance from the front,car so that the driver could have enough time,to take measurs when any badly situation.,Finally,these two drivers were careless.If they,had paid more attention to driving,this,accident wouldnt have happened.,四级作文,14,分样卷,It was the morning of April 6th,2003.At about,7:30,I went to school by bike as usual.It was a rainy,day and the road was slippery.On the way,I noticed a,boy riding in front of me,talking loudly with his,friends.He didnt wear a raincoat;instead he held an,umbrella in one hand,and rode with another hand.As,he turned left to Guangming Road,he failed to see a,car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner.,Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella,thrown away.The boy was knoc。