高考英语书面表达六步法.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing skills,How to improve your writing,刘瑞春,2009-12-23,主要特点,记叙,为主,稍加,议论,旁带,说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,逻辑顺序,能力要求,书面表达,六 步 法,抄,改,连,扩,抓,审,书面,表达,书面表达六步法,幻灯片 23,书面表达六步法,一、审题,认真读题然后找出,基本要素:5,W,1,H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为,何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态、语态及搭配的副词、介词等,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节,连贯 呼应,词与词搭配 句与句相连,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“,半截话,”吗？,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分，,卷面潦草,一定要扣分,！,逻辑角度,合适的过渡性词汇,时间顺序,first,second,then,finally/at last,soon immediately,suddenly,空间顺序,here,there,on one sideon the other side,in front of,at the back of,next to,对称顺序,for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other hand,转折顺序,but,however,while,though,otherwise,因果顺序,because,since,as,thanks to,as a result(of),条件顺序,as long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unless,让步顺序,though,as,even if/though,whether,who (what,when,where)ever,递进顺序,whats more,besides,to make matters worse,whats worse,过渡性插入语,I think,Im afraid,you know,As we all know,如何使用恰当的连接词,May 25,Sunday Cloudy,This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday.The salesgirl treated me coldly.She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop.She said that I made it dirty.She gave various excuses to refuse my request.I quarreled with her.The manager turned up.He asked what was the matter.He knew all about this,he apologized to me and criticized(批评)the salesgirl.They changed another coat for me.I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,May 25,Sunday Cloudy,This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday._The salesgirl treated me coldly._She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop._She said that I made it dirty._She gave various excuses to refuse my request._I quarreled with her._The manager turned up.He asked what was the matter._He knew all about this,he apologized to me and criticized(批评)the salesgirl.They changed another coat for me.I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,Later,In a word,I got so angry that,After that/As soon as/The moment,Just at that moment,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!,This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.,People here are richer than before.,Now it is taking on a new look.,This village is,a small one with/which has,nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978,and has been developing very fast.,People here,live a much better life,than before.,书面表达,：例 1,Now it is taking on a new look.,In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.,The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village,.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.,Thank you.,In the past,the school here was very small,and most children couldnt afford to go to school,.,But,now it has been rebuilt,and,which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one,in the village.,All the school-age children can study here.,Whats more,they enjoy free education.,May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/,May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,返回,How to enrich your writing,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）,2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句),3.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(使用强调句型),4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What surprises him is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Have a try,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5.,She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词),6.,They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing形式),7.,I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）,8,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）,9,He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,看图作文举例,Picture 1,go over,go to bed,nine oclock,stay up,wake up,get up,Picture 2,get dressed,wash oneself,rush into,get my schoolbag,prepare,go to school,breakfast,brush teeth,wash face,Picture 3,ran out,get on my bike,ride to school,as fast as,Picture 4,get to,to my surprise,close,realize,Sunday,find,the school gate,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I often stay up late.,I often stay up late,to,go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.,I go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.,to。