初中英语写作公开课(九年级).ppt

A Lesson of WritingExample:Imagine that you are Li Ming, write a composition about the changes taken place in your hometown. Key points:1.Topic（主题）（主题）: changes 2.who: Li Ming3.Where: Li Ming’s hometown4.tense(时态时态): past tense& present tense 一般过去时一般过去时&一般现在时一般现在时Living conditionCell phonesjobstransportationchangeshousecars(头脑风暴头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworking tools农耕工具农耕工具reasongovernmenteffortslive in a low houselive in a tall buildingplant crops with the help of farm animalsplant crops with the help of farm machinesstudy in an old schoolstudy in a modern schoolLiving conditionWorking toolseducationLiving conditionWorking toolseducationchanges(正文正文)a. Changes in living conditions.b. Changes in working tools.C. Changes in education.OutlineTitle题目题目: Changes in Li Ming’s HometownHeading开头开头：： Great changes have taken place in ……Body正文正文:a. Changes in living conditionsb. Changes in working toolsC. Changes in educationConclusion结尾结尾: Thanks to the government’s efforts(努力努力), Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.提纲提纲Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown Great changes have taken place in Li Ming’s hometown since the reform and opening-up. In the past, people lived in low houses. The farmers planted crops only with the help of farm animals. Children studied in old schools. But now, most people live in tall buildings. The farmers can plant crops with the help of farm machines. And children study in modern schools. Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.One possible version:heading开头开头body正文正文conclusion结尾结尾A Writing PracticeWrite your own composition about Great changes in my Hometown.   以以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按为题，按下列提示要求写一篇下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。

家乡的变化1、过去过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便2、现在现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善3、未来未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的 可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic 交通； convenient 方便的；Thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育；modern现代；dream about憧憬                     Requirement:1.topic: 2.who:3.Where:4.What changes：：5.Tense时态时态:great changesI / myselfmy hometownliferoadshousespast tense& present tense ……Living conditiontransportationchangeshouse(头脑风暴头脑风暴)educationroadsbuildingExample:Outline提纲提纲Title题目题目: Great changes in my HometownHeading开头：开头：Body正文正文:a. Changes in …b. Changes in …c. Changes in …Conclusion结尾结尾:LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportationnowUsed to be…Once曾经曾经pastMany years agois / areIn the pastAt presentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMake sentences.eg: 1.In the past, my hometown was poor. 2.My hometown used to be poor.Then:(时态时态)Living conditionCell phonestransportationwideroadscleancars(正文正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的方便的improveeg: 1.Many years ago, the roads in my hometown was narrow          and dirty.     2.Nowadays, the roads in my hometown are wide and clean.     3.Today,many families have cars.schoolhouse(正文正文)   以以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按为题，按下列提示要求写一篇下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。

家乡的变化1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的 可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic 交通； convenient 方便的；thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育；modern现代；dream about憧憬                     The Changes in My Hometown•    I am Li Ming, today I have interviewed my grandmother. She has lived in my hometown for more than seventy years. She has seen the changes in my hometown herself.•    In the past, my hometown was very small and poor. The roads were narrow. The people couldn’t get enough food.•    But now, the roads were so wide, and there are more and more kinds of food to satisfy people’s needs. And now, each family has telephones, TVs, computers and so on. •    I think my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future! Changes in My Hometown        My hometown used to be a backward place, because it was deep in the mountains, where there were no nice buildings and the roads were so narrow and dirty. People lived a poor life.        While in recent years, with the development of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. Now the roads are getting much wider. Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads. They can provide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutions. So the sky becomes cleaner and brighter. What’s more, you can see many modern and beautiful buildings everywhere, and the living conditions are improving. People are enjoying a comfortable life now.。