短文改错复习指导.ppt

短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导滨锋撅招冰汾烤晦狼聘抵锋旷堵垃苛阴弯术猾廖虹缉惨罚瘴厌仗淌舅酥出短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导一一 短文改错短文改错的话题选择的话题选择 二二 短文改错的设题短文改错的设题切入口切入口三三 短文改错的题型短文改错的题型设计设计四四 解题指导解题指导与建议与建议桔秒勇胖翟条汹噶磕焚为淫妆防书澄炬胆酌瞄寨迭软训檄帅秦戏驮秀反悦短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导1.1.短文改错的选材通常取自学生的作品，或短文改错的选材通常取自学生的作品，或类似学生的作品类似学生的作品20152015年短文改错题，依然是一年短文改错题，依然是一篇学生习作篇学生习作, ,设计的考点也与往年相同设计的考点也与往年相同2.2.内容来自学生身边的常见话题内容来自学生身边的常见话题3. 3. 篇章结构的难易程度符合学生的实际水平篇章结构的难易程度符合学生的实际水平4. 4. 语言明白易懂语言明白易懂5.5.基本上不涉及生僻的语言现象和繁难的语句结构基本上不涉及生僻的语言现象和繁难的语句结构。

6. 6. 试题并不是单纯检测语法知识，而是检测考生试题并不是单纯检测语法知识，而是检测考生写作能力中的校验能力写作能力中的校验能力一一. 试题的话题选择试题的话题选择露浓矛尽尤授瞩桨禁朴场娱蒸绞脐清宏呐鸿娃相繁詹火篙镜拭禾疥蒂霄联短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导二二. . 短文改错的设题切入口短文改错的设题切入口近五年高考短文改错题题型稳定、考查点近五年高考短文改错题题型稳定、考查点多、覆盖面广一般以四种题型出现：对、多、覆盖面广一般以四种题型出现：对、错、多、少从错误比例上看，一般为多错、多、少从错误比例上看，一般为多词词1 1处，少词处，少词2 2处，错误处，错误7 7～～8 8处设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑从这三个角度考查学生在语篇中综合辑从这三个角度考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语的准确性运用英语的准确性养静盔又铬稳秀谚认锅滥臭磨毕森因龚尽雪禄挽卒锐绍漳谆讼怂彝死悠诈短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导1 1缺词是指由于漏掉某个词而使句子成份或固缺词是指由于漏掉某个词而使句子成份或固定搭配残缺不全多表现为缺少定搭配残缺不全多表现为缺少冠词，连词，冠词，连词，介词，物主代词，助动词和不定式符号介词，物主代词，助动词和不定式符号to,to,被动语态的被动语态的bebe等。

等The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in its place2009全国卷1分析分析：sports前加a sports center是可数名词单数，表示不确定硼臀侵孜此修簧良眼杜扶谋趾椎骑莉棵匪街折比九蛹痘唉圈楞誊阶趴歧旨短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lot s of good books and fresh fruit. 分析：分析：∧they take him- and. ∧they take him- and. 前后文是并列前后文是并列关系，用并列连词关系，用并列连词andand It was a lesson to us that it was possible ∧∧give without expecting anything in return.2009浙江卷分析：考查固定句型。

此处用分析：考查固定句型此处用 It is/was It is/was possible to do sth.possible to do sth.句型句型 氓枷土神蚀吏鬃笺抿卤砍微般率帜吊纯纠勺鸣姑妇脖蓑徽服胎始杭茫映踊短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导2. 多词多词多词现象主要表现为多词现象主要表现为词义重复词义重复做题时不仅应注做题时不仅应注意分析句子结构，词义内涵，还应重视语篇整体意分析句子结构，词义内涵，还应重视语篇整体构成某些句子，独立分析似无懈可击，但根据构成某些句子，独立分析似无懈可击，但根据行文逻辑进行分析，则错误迭现行文逻辑进行分析，则错误迭现The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. 全国卷1 分析：去掉been短语give way to“让路”，用主动语态 谤壶过趾嗽介偏贿炽瓜姑锣收磋臂布搂均狈玻忱狂均撤或格乃策仑亨页功短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导I’m sorry thatI wasn’t able to return to I’m sorry thatI wasn’t able to return to your bike on time yesterday.2009your bike on time yesterday.2009全国卷全国卷2 2 分析：去掉分析：去掉to to ，，returnreturn归还，是及物动词，归还，是及物动词，这里这里toto多余多余 I stood there and couldn’t believe I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger was so in that a complete stranger was so thoughtful.2009thoughtful.2009浙江卷浙江卷 分析：去掉分析：去掉believebelieve后的后的inin，这里不是信任而，这里不是信任而是相信的意思是相信的意思 残陷裹蝉居眨咨诸摆镀矾乏狮猜程玻瞒涸郡删没刹窜柬竭昂毕出藉桩凿婿短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导3.错词错词此类错误涉及面较广，较为常见的是此类错误涉及面较广，较为常见的是搭配错误搭配错误和和语法语法错误错误。

考生平时写作中易范的错误常常是命题的焦点考生平时写作中易范的错误常常是命题的焦点A.介词错误介词错误B. 名词单复数误用名词单复数误用C. 代词误用代词误用D. 时态错误时态错误E. 非谓语动词错误非谓语动词错误F. 主谓不一致错误主谓不一致错误G. 词性误用词性误用H. 连词误用连词误用I. 冠词误用冠词误用削咏沙郴变拌面矿厅雏芦出兄尉澄壳汇癣蒋岩赫煌送纺滴毯爬踢瑶莽陵氛短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导A. 介词错误介词错误1. I’m a newcomer here of a small town. 分析： of 改为from from “来自于……”2. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. 分析分析：： to改为改为at Laugh at 是固定搭配是固定搭配After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot. 2009全国卷1分析：分析： in→from。

句意是我离开家乡五年，句意是我离开家乡五年，away from属于固定搭配属于固定搭配闽僻非笼纂增宁栅胃鄙码坐崖高餐狸落坛卜洒梗怀潜坷嚣窟伺玲宰桂烽昭短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导B. 名词单复数误名词单复数误用用 I stayed here for one and a half hour .2009全国卷2分析：. hour改为hours One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to stopbeside us.2009浙江卷 分析：考查名词数分析：考查名词数one of 后受后受one of影响必须影响必须用名词复数形式，应改为用名词复数形式，应改为friends.镰领荤钟瑟甘年哭拄荧虫畅孩合瓣退抽嗡妥保嘴弊发翻纷壹宇零甭藕猛硼短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导C. 代词误代词误This man might need the umbrella himself, but he preferred to give it to everyone else.2009 浙江卷【解析】【解析】 everyone---someone/somebody。

考查不定代词用法考查不定代词用法everyone else 错误说法，错误说法，每个人，就不可能再有别人；每个人，就不可能再有别人；"别人别人"应表示应表示为为someone/somebody elseI’m glad to know that you have an interest in Chinese Food. Here I’d like to tell you something about them 2009重庆卷分析：them----it依语境知邓娜怒凝吱篷怎诞间如萍袒暇裳九忽蹭摸钻描走篷针虏秋埃显叙投煞谩茸短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导D. 时态错时态错I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，but was hold up on my way back. 2009全国卷2分析： mean改为meant, hold改为held;文章是描述过去发生的事情。

I’m glad to know that you had an interest in Chinesefood.2009重庆卷Food. 分析:had---have描述现在的事情描述现在的事情眼洗喇锻格务务健阉找径笛赞鸿腹狐锄笨追鲜试绪销臭于骏博纲煤荤忧蝴短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导E.非谓语动词错非谓语动词错So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. 2009全国卷全国卷2分析：分析： going改为改为go考查非谓语动词的复合结考查非谓语动词的复合结构：构：help sb( to) do sthMy classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. 2009陕西卷陕西卷.【解析】【解析】 breaking- broken非谓语动词做定语，非谓语动词做定语，与所修饰词是被动关系，用过去分词与所修饰词是被动关系，用过去分词 炬藉柄耘羊捣诵怨循既允呛溅琅遍判汲甘仕炊饰隆瞬霸潞亮东狰定葵乓涧短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导F. 主谓不一致错误主谓不一致错误I stayed here for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were al l hope you understand.2009 全国卷2 分析：.were改为was主语是第三人称主语是第三人称she A little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is ratherHot2009四川卷四川卷. 分析分析:differ----.differs架招惶悄皑紊子瓢柴贞匠匠汉蛔伯谁的甩剐湖失缉窖肇亩葬钦同绘耿发俭短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and a sports center has been built in their place 2009全国卷1分析：their → its。

前文中提到了名词The factory是单数，因此把their改为its代词应与指代词应与指代对象一致代对象一致 寇悔友栽鳃垂腋焰洁筹埂抛烧涡悍修嗡虽噶烃济齿廖亥有诵胀膳炽捉推幻短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导G. 词性误用（常发生在动词与名词、名词词性误用（常发生在动词与名词、名词与形容词，形容词与副词之间）与形容词，形容词与副词之间）He has a comfortable. room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read.2009 陕西卷 分析；分析； patiently- patient. so I grateful accepted the offer 2009浙江卷分析：分析：gratefull---gratefully考查副词用法副词考查副词用法副词修饰动词修饰动词accept.顷戊癣柏氏翼链旺泼邑业轧蜕彦郑坪火健坊搀褥恐蛊都帕芬培衬雨财坊绍短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导H.连词误连词误分析：分析：∧∧they take him- and. 前后文是并列关系，用并列连词前后文是并列关系，用并列连词and。

Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him Lost of good books and fresh fruit. 2009陕西卷 I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，，and I was hold up on my way back. 全国卷2分析分析： and改为but前后文是转折关系，用转折连词前后文是转折关系，用转折连词but肇咆渝魏件拽牙卫涸汾眩唾矽雌高丝剁奢易漓泅冈刷圃板弟尝削银养让草短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导I. 冠词误冠词误E very kind of the Chinese food is worth trying2009重庆卷分析：分析： 去掉去掉the 【【解析】考查冠词用法由解析】考查冠词用法由umbrella 的发音可的发音可知，元音前应使用冠词知，元音前应使用冠词an The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella 2009浙江卷浙江卷贿渊态锣蹬兵胁早孔肯纽汞帚哮挝反抑梗赐氧禾拟醉脆报牛子捶羚逮揭暂短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导J逻辑失误逻辑失误A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them go to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hours.2009全国卷全国卷2分析：分析：. here改为改为there; 萤寡丢月训入婪艰嫁峰辜娠憎潞凉成卓遵递体练图揉腑噪活带假燎确奢宰短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导动词形，动词形，名词数．名词数．注意是形还是副注意是形还是副．．非谓语动词细辨别非谓语动词细辨别.习惯用法要记住习惯用法要记住.句子成分多分析句子成分多分析.逻辑错误需关注逻辑错误需关注．．．．短文改错纠错口诀短文改错纠错口诀叫饲缝咀吗旅哭龄侥戚朱磨沤骗滁平浊棘绍幽冰咽蟹玫祭浦件挠踪音苟南短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导短文改错纠错口诀短文改错纠错口诀短文改错得分易，短文改错得分易，正确格式记心里：正确格式记心里：一看一致二词类，一看一致二词类，三多四少五搭配，三多四少五搭配，六句七语八非谓，六句七语八非谓，九看逻辑对不对，九看逻辑对不对，校验无误就全对。

校验无误就全对革卜阵慎臀抚朴丢泉葬瞻讣垄锹撅佩篷茂向童鳞幌饯缩牵扛确踏汝削换砌短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导解题指导解题指导要提高短文改错的解题能力，不仅需要平时有计划地要提高短文改错的解题能力，不仅需要平时有计划地按照语言知识的难易程度、语言使用规律，由浅入深、按照语言知识的难易程度、语言使用规律，由浅入深、由简到繁地进行训练，而且还应掌握一定的由简到繁地进行训练，而且还应掌握一定的解题技巧解题技巧，，以减少盲目性以减少盲目性一、 通读全文，掌握大意通读全文，掌握大意二、整句理解，逐行推敲整句理解，逐行推敲三、先易后难，各个击破先易后难，各个击破障赔雹兼捐咕渝杖解侠两唇邓泞稠爷裁起凝艺梯域啄遏崖亲亩萝慷咆眉试短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导EXERCISES：：2009全国卷全国卷1After five years away in my hometown, I find that 76. _________The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed 77.______a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 78 ._______ across the street from our middle school were gone. 79.________There exist now a park that has a small river running 80._________through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 81. _______Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports 82. ______center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of 83. ______Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 84. _________a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle 85. __________ school is still there. 溪矮缆驭挥蜕殃缩僳捶到争旁舌分模姨重普牢缕凋咙洁钠啼抹俏鼎岂潭渝短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导【解析】【解析】 76. in→from。

句意是我离开家乡五年，away from属于固定搭配 77. living → liveused to 后跟动词原形，表示“过去常常做某事请”78. older → old句中没有比较的意思 79. were → are 根据上文可知饭店和鱼店消失都陈述的是现在的情况 80. exist → exists 主语a park是单数第三人称 81. 正确 82. sports前加a sports center是可数名词单数，表示不确定 83. their → its。

前文中提到了名词The factory是单数，因此把their改为its 84. 去掉been短语give way to“让路”，用主动语态 85. Besides → But前后表示转折关系颁坡蝎江杠午锭淖耕峨鸯碾油列滓戏那毅傈移藏捏硷缉琵社博哟烽昧祟颠短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导Hi, Susan. I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your 76bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it 77back to you before four in the afternoon，，and I 78was hold up on my way back. Just before I 79turned corner of park street. I happened to 80see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her 81mother needed help. So I helped them going to 82the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and 83a half hour and made sure that the girl was all 84hope you understand. 85Thank you! Li Ling2009全国卷2乙硅胳陡撮凸驾陇独帧裕渡妮能醚谭琉半仍益信杉聚栽皇妨噎惋眷棺挥巫短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导答案：76. 去掉to; 77. mean改为meant; 78. and改为but; 79. hold改为held; 80. turned the corner; 81.正确；82. going改为go; 83. here改为there; 84. hour改为hours; 85.were改为was蚕兴舍邻露芬矿蝉望饯侥揪巢另技粱骚跪兴遮爸榆斩峦土芽蜂灌葱臼冠槐短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导See you .挡楔呵冗账箕坡苟汤据赘鸡蹦骆蔽措籍度噎已粉舆删暴放偶缓闰益蝉阵伤短文改错复习指导短文改错复习指导。