IELTS writing task 2 第一段写作.ppt

IELTS: WritingWriting Task 2Jessica大作文总体结构nIntroduction(开篇开篇):第一段第一段nBody(论证论证):第二到第四段第二到第四段(或第二或第二,第三段第三段)nConclusion(总结总结):第五段第五段(或第四段或第四段)一边讨论型第一段写法完整版完整版:背景句背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+A观点观点+转折词转折词+B观点观点+个人观点个人观点+过渡过渡简化版简化版:背景句背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+个人观点个人观点理想版：背景句理想版：背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+个人观点个人观点+过渡过渡观点引出理由示范一nA burglar was shot dead by the owner of the house being broken into. Do you think the owner’s action was justified?nA burglar was shot dead by the owner of the house being broken into. Do you think the owner’s action was justified? Ever since this incident was reported in the newspaper there has been much controversy about it.(背景背景) After weighing all the pros and cons, I find that I agree that the owner’s action was legalized.(观点) I support my point of view with three arguments: self-defense, the sanctity of property and the need to deter criminals.(理由)观点引出理由写法两边讨论型第一段写法完整版完整版:背景句背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+A观点观点+转折词转折词+B观点观点+过渡过渡简化版简化版:背景句背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+A观点观点+B观点观点比较一边讨论型：比较一边讨论型：理想版：背景句理想版：背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+个人观点个人观点+过渡过渡两边讨论型跟一边讨论型的写作区别一：两边讨论型跟一边讨论型的写作区别一：两边讨论型第一段两边讨论型第一段一般一般无无个人观点个人观点第一段写作tips1.主题词的重复与替换：在主题词的重复与替换：在主题句主题句不断重复不断重复采用简单重复采用简单重复,同义替换同义替换,同根替换同根替换2.绝对不能抄题：同顺序连续五单词及以上绝对不能抄题：同顺序连续五单词及以上 Ever since this incident was reported in the newspaper there has been much controversy about it.(背景背景) After weighing all the pros and cons, I find that I agree that the owner’s action was legalized.(观点) I support my point of view with three arguments: self-defense, the sanctity of property and the need to deter criminals.(理由) 如何写背景句，观点句，并陈述理由如何写背景句，观点句，并陈述理由(过渡句）？过渡句）？观点引出理由写法背景句：背景句：nExplanation解释背景句解释背景句:写为复杂句写为复杂句n具体翻译为具体翻译为:…是个热点问题是个热点问题;…引起了人们的引起了人们的很大关注很大关注,…处于争议中心处于争议中心…观点句n观点句由观点词观点句由观点词+观点来完成观点来完成nAs for me, I side with the former / latter.nFrom my view, I approve …nAs far as I am concerned, nIn my opinion,nIn view of these points,nI am of the opinion that….特殊的观点表示方式n动词动词: n1.agree, believen2. consider, regard, treatn3. hold, argue, claim, insist, persist, maintain, approve, advocate, assert, n其他词性用法其他词性用法:nI am a believer in…, I am so convinced that…, As a truthful advocate in… 一边讨论型过渡句nIn the following paragraphs, I would present some reasons.nA few explanations would be presented as follows.nThus essential and persuasive evidences would be provided in the subsequent paragraphs to verify my perspective.两边讨论型过渡句People could rarely reach a consensus without a fierce debate on this issue.All the blessings and curses will be fully exposed in the following paragraphs.Consequently, I will discuss this issue from both two sides respectively.第一段写作练习2Topic: Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.Do you agree or disagree? （一边讨论型）（一边讨论型）完整版完整版:背景句背景句(介绍题目介绍题目)+A观点观点+转折词转折词+B观点观点+个个人观点人观点+过渡过渡nThe view that women are better parents than men has shown itself to be true throughout history.(背景背景) This is not to say that men are not of importance in child-rearing; indeed, they are most necessary if children are to appreciate fully the roles of both sexes.(解释背解释背景景) But women have proven themselves superior parents as a result of their nurturing and less aggressive nature and their generally better communication skills.(理由理由) 理由一：理由一：From the time they are little girls, females learn about nurturing. 理由二：理由二：Girls also appear to be less offensive than boys.理由三：理由三：Finally, women tend to be better communicators then men.模板句型的使用技巧不可不用不可不用,也最好不要全用。

也最好不要全用某些用烂的模板某些用烂的模板:Every coin has two sides:第一段模板句型：背景句 As one of the most significant invention/phenomenon in the 20th century,____ has a great application/influence in many aspects of our lives.科技发明类科技发明类 Along with the increasing development of science and economy, a great number of issues are brought to our attentions, one of which is that_. 社会类社会类背景句二No one could have failed to notice the fact that _ is a noticeable/grave/severe issue with which _ are confronted. 社会类社会类Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨讨论话题论话题) has been in the arguments and has aroused wide concern in the public.社会类社会类背景句三nThe past decades have witnessed the great popularity of …科技科技/社会社会nBeing a controversial issue, … has aroused a great deal of attention in society during the past decades. 社会类社会类nNo issue in recent years has drawn as much attention as the debate concerning…科技科技/社会社会 背景句四n一切主题都适用一切主题都适用nThere has long been puzzled/ confused /accepted that...nIt is universally puzzled/ confused/ accepted /established/ acknowledged that…nIt is obviously true/controversial that…nThere is no denying/ agreement/ consensus that… nIt is an undeniable fact that…背景句五 When concerning/arguing/talking/coming to the issue of_ , people’s ideas vary from one to another. Some people consider that…( is significant), while others deny it totally, claiming that…(is more reasonable). I side with the former/latter one.nNo issue in recent years has drawn as much attention as the debate concerning…. Some people advocate that…, while others claim that…n关于一些人的其他说法关于一些人的其他说法nTraditional/ conventional /conservative ideas, some authorized media, a famous institution, some experts/ scholars 。