英语专业四级写作辅.ppt

英语专业四级写作课堂篇Writing Practice for TEM-4Part 1 . TEM-4写作测试要求与形式 TEM-4写作部分测试为主观试题，共25分，时间45分 钟，总字数为250字左右,分Section A 和Section BSection A: Composition (15分)本部分为命题作文(提供题目或提纲或数据图表)，要 求35分钟内完成200字左右的作文，体裁为说明文、议论 文或记叙文基本要求是内容切题、完整，条理清楚，结 构逻辑清晰，语言表达正确得体，基本无语法错误Section B: Note-writing (10分)本部分为便条（通知、请柬等）写作(50-60词)，要求 10分钟内完成，格式正确，语言得体TEM-4命题作文评分原则来取总体评分，就文章 的总体印象给分及奖励分（14分；11分；8分；5分 ；2分；0分五档，可根据优劣加减1分），而不是 按语言点的错误数目扣分《高等学校英语专业高 年级英语教学大纲》规定的作文评分标准规定：思想内容占50% (Write thoughtfully: with abundant thoughts or ideas)组织结构占10%(Write formally: with accurate form and structure)语法占15% (Write correctly: without grammatical errors or mistakes).文体占5% (Write naturally: write in a way that comes naturally.) Writing Practice:Please write a 200-word composition on the topic below:Harmony 写作临场发挥“三要素”：1.抓住一点“大题小作”(如：“和谐社会 ”……)；2.想方设法将主题往自己熟悉的方向 靠 (如：“和谐家庭”、 “和谐校园”、“和谐班级 ”、“和谐寝室”……)；3.熟记套路：引题自然(提出自己的观点，尽 量套用经典句型)→ 分层论述(提出三个分论点, 简单阐述,并分别举一个例子说明)→结尾自然。

Note-wringExample 1. A letter of application (申请信)Feb 15, 2009Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to you to inquire if there would be any position available for me to work as an English teacher in your department. Please allow me to give you my brief reference….I’m looking forward to your kind early reply. (or Your kind early reply would be very much appreciated.) If you need any further information, please feel free to ask. Many thanks.Yours sincerely, Ding ChenExample 2. A letter of complaint (投诉信—小可以视为Note-writing, 大可以视为Composition writing)Feb. 15, 2009 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain of the No. 3 Chemical Works, which seriously pollutes the city environment. The major problems are as follows. In the first place,… Secondly, … Finally, … As a result, …I think several urgent measures should be taken to solve the problems. On the one hand, … On the other hand, …It is my sincere hope that the pollution problems caused by the works will be looked into thoroughly and solved as soon as possible. I’m looking forward to your early reply. With lots of thanks. Yours truly,Ding Chen Pre-note-writing (50-60 words):Suppose you are Mr. Ding, who missed a lecture. Please write to the monitor that Mr. Ding will make it up…A MessageFeb. 25Dear Monitor,I’m sorry to have missed your writing lecture due to an important meeting at headquarter of the University this Monday. I decide to make it up on Tuesday evening. Please inform your classmates to attend the lecture in Room 3221 at 18:30. Thanks and best regards!Ding Zhibin (53 words)链接——2000-2008年全国英语专业四级统测Note-writinghttp://210.43.64.31/jpkc/C167/Course/Index.htmNote-writing 语言特点：以口语体来表述。

功能分类：邀请；祝贺；感谢；道歉；举荐；倡议；申 请；告示；通知…… 例子说明： Letter of Invitation(邀请信) Content: A) 诚挚邀请对方来参加某项活动B) 概括介绍活动的内容和安排C) 再次表示诚意 Letter of Acceptance(接受信) A) 感谢 B) 表示确切会准时邀 I’m delight to accept…; I’m appreciated that I am invited to…; It is with great pleasure…; We are sincerely happy to join your…Classroom practice:Please write and invite your friend to attend our cultural exchange.(50-60 words within 6 minutes)An Informal Invitation Feb. 30, 2009Linda, There will be an cultural exchange group at our campus during Nov. 1st to 3rd , concerning sightseeing, Mandarin, shadowboxing, paper cutting, Chinese traditional medicine, Chinese tea art, Chinese philosophy, Tujia museum, English corner, and making Jiaozi, etc. I hope you may join us. If you’d like to come, please ring me.Jack(56 words)Letter of Refusal(拒绝信)A) 收到邀请 B)表示感谢 C) 阐述不能赴邀的原因 D) 表示遗憾和美好的祝愿 E.g.: I shall have to say no to your kind invitation….Very regretfully,…Unfortunately, it will be impossible….Due to …, we find we cannot …. Letter of Apology (道歉信) (A. Make an Apology B. Cause C. Wish )I write to apologize for having caused…Please accept my apology for…I am writing to express my apology for…I am sorry for…It is my entire fault I have made you…I regret I have caused…Letter of thanks (感谢信)A) 对于收信人的恵助表示感谢 B) 解释感谢的原因或因对方的帮助给自己带来的 好处 C) 再次表示诚挚谢意 I don’t know how to express my gratitude for you…(谢意,感谢:thanks, thankfulness, gratitude, gratefulness, appreciation…)I cannot tell you how much I owe you…It was thoughtful (more than kind, generous, etc) of you…Thank you again for your generosity (hospitality, generous help, timely-rain help, etc)…Writing practice: You lost your favorite walkman on Oct 29th. Your friend found it and brought it back to you yesterday evening. Please write a thank-letter to her/him. March. 10Linda,I really don’t know how to express my gratitude to you when you brought back my lost walkman last night. The walkman is my favorite because it is the best gift from my special friend. You cannot imagine how sad I would be if I made it lost. I’ll treat you tomorrow evening!With hearty thanks!Jack(60 words)Composition Practice for TEM 4:学生弑师案频发，谁的责任？(自拟题目，200词)学生弑师案频发，谁的责任？ 写作提示（Hints） Topic: 必须言简意赅，体现文章主题。

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