广东省中山市高中英语 Unit 1 Women of achievement（人物写作8）课件 新人教版必修4.ppt

 Einstein was born in Germany on March 14th,1879. His favourite subjects were maths and science, but he was a shy person and did not enjoy school very much. When he was 17, he went to Switzerland to study, in order to earn enough money to continue his studies, Einstein worked first as a teacher and then worked in a gover- -nment office, in 1905 he received a doctor’s degree. From 1905-1915, he began his research and studies, which led to his discoveries in physics, and by the time of 1981, Einstein had been known across the world. Einstein was the 20th century’s greatest scientist, he died on April 18th, 1955, at the age of 76. I’m Bai Yun, born in Yuexiu District, Guangzhou City, aged 27. After I graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to London University in the UK .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctor’s degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation in 2006 AFTER READING THE SAMPLE WRITINGS ABOVE, THEN SUMMARIZE AND GIVE THE RIGHT ORDER PLEASE (　　 )教教育育：： education (　　 )外外貌貌／性格／性格:appearance ,character(　　 )生生平平 :big events in his or her life ( in order of time )( 　　)评评估估 :evaluation(　　 )概概况况 :age, sex, birth-place, background 人物简介的一般步骤：人物简介的一般步骤：(　　 )教教育育：：education (　　 )外外貌貌／性格／性格:appearance ,character(　　 )生生平平 :big events in his or her life( in order of time)( 　　)评评估估 :evaluation(　　 )概概况况 : age, sex, birth-place, background１１２２３３４４５５概概,貌貌,育育,平平,评评  Let Let’ ’s have a brainstorm!s have a brainstorm! What do you think of when introducing these What do you think of when introducing these below?below?A. 概况概况：：•was born in / into a poor / rich family in ...,• when ... was young, spent one’s childhood in •as a child/ as a boy of 15…•during his/ her childhood…•live a happy/ hard life…EG: 钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一.•1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.•2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.•亚伯拉罕亚伯拉罕. .林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子，与林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子，与18091809年年2 2月月1212日出生与日出生与KentuckyKentucky。

•Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.•查理查理. .狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育•Born of a poor clerk’s family, Charles Dickens had little schooling.Practice: B. 外貌和性格特征外貌和性格特征good-looking ;funny-looking; ugly-looking; white-haired; warm-hearted ; kind-hearted ;absent-minded;bad-tempered; near-sighted ;far-sighted ; a strong will ;tall ; short ;pretty; naughty ;smart; wise ;bright ; diligent ;lazy; healthy;humorous ; charming（迷人的）（迷人的）;attractive ;talkative ; confidence ;independent ;patiencePractice:EgEg: : 我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发睛，留着长发 My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.1)梁志波是个近视的男生梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜他戴着一副眼镜 Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted /far-sighted boy___________________________________. 2)杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。

杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发 Yang Yang is good-looking /ordinary-looking /funny-looking ____________________________. be admitted to …college, receive a doctor’s degree;graduate from…department of …university;when at college, he majored in… ;go abroad for further studiesC.教育背景：教育背景： Translate into Chinese:1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies._____________________________________________2）Graduated from the department of English of Zhong -shan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree._____________________________________________ D.D.生平经历和事迹生平经历和事迹 be interested in… /be fond of…; work hard at…serve as… ; devote his lifetime/himself to…concentrate himself to… ; do research about/ into…make up one’s mind to do sth.be strict in sth. make rapid progress in …set a new world record of … ; equal the world record;be selected to/ become a member of…go through hardship; overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etcPRACTICE•Translate into Chinese:•1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.•_________________________________•2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.•__________________________________PRACTICE:PRACTICE:•Translate into Chinese:1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .__________________________________________________2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.E．评估．评估one of the best, most important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as Let’s have a practice 请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。

请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章出出 生生19231923年年5 5月，香港月，香港个人经历个人经历1 1、、7 7岁丧父，家境贫困岁丧父，家境贫困; ;2 2、、19551955年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等，成为国内外知名人士年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等，成为国内外知名人士; ;3 3、改革开放、改革开放 (the reform and open policy) (the reform and open policy) 以来，先后捐资支持以来，先后捐资支持教育、文化、体育、和福利事业款项达教育、文化、体育、和福利事业款项达100100多亿港元多亿港元影影 响响成为成为““感动中国感动中国””的人物基础写作之人物介绍基础写作之人物介绍注意事项注意事项补充材料补充材料审题的步骤是什么？审题的步骤是什么？•１１•２２•３３•４４•５５文体文体主体时态主体时态人称人称信息点整合信息点整合不要打草稿，但应有提纲不要打草稿，但应有提纲改正原则改正原则•Correct with your partners (How to correct?)•1、是否恰好五句话？是否恰好五句话？•２、是否每句都含必要信息？２、是否每句都含必要信息？•３、可否自由发挥？３、可否自由发挥？•４、４、pants纠错原则：纠错原则：•1)pattern•2)agreement•3)number•4)tense•5)spelling基础写作注意事项：基础写作注意事项： 1）能写几句就写几句，不留空白•2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性和连贯性、句子结果的正确性。

•3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档•4）连贯性共占2.5分•5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥决不要自我发挥•6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分•7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分•8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词注意注意“三写三写”，在规定的时间内完成，在规定的时间内完成。