英语(人教版必修4)教学课件：unit4period4writing.ppt

Unit 4Unit 4Body languageBody languagePeriod 4Writing 关怀信(A letter of concern)即慰问信，属于应用文它是向陷入困难或遭遇不幸的个人、团体或组织等表达关心或关爱的一种信件注意写作时语气要真诚，态度要诚恳此类信件一般采用“三段式”结构首段：描述对方所面对的困难或遭遇的不幸主体：帮助对方分析现象、原因，并表达自己对对方的关怀与关心尾段：表达祝愿或祝福常用表达常用词汇：看上去不安look upset忍受孤独suffer from loneliness厌烦某事be/get tired of sth.关心，在乎care about担心某事be concerned about sth.谨致以同情offer ones sympathy无法预料的unexpected非常，极其extremely常用语句：1We are very sorry to learn that you are sick.2I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of your illness.3In the next few days，I think you should take the doctors advice and have a good rest.4With best wishes for your quick and complete recovery.5If there is anything I can do，give me a call.6Id like to help you.7Everything will go well.写作模板Dear.，_(时间状语)I found that you looked very upset and you.I think there must be something wrong with you._(问句1)？Or is it because_(问句2)？_(称呼)，remember Im your good friend and I will be with you whatever happens to you.If you need any help，do turn to me._(提出建议或表达愿望)Best wishes to you!Yours，Li Hua假如你叫李华，今天下午你发现你的好朋友王立看起来很不安，在课堂上听课也不够认真。

你认为他一定遇到了什么事情于是你决定给他写一封信，表达你对他的关心信的内容包括：(1)是不是他的母亲又生病了；(2)是不是因为这次考试没考好而心烦；(3)提醒对方自己是他的好朋友；(4)自己是否能够帮助他Dear Wang Li，_Yours，Li Hua思路点拨时态：一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时；人称：第一人称和第二人称；写作要点：(1)首段描述对方的状况：看起来不安、听课不认真2)主体段分析对方的问题和可能的原因并表达关怀：是不是他的母亲又生病了；或者因为这次考试没考好而心烦；提醒对方自己是他的好朋友；自己是否能够帮助他3)尾段表达祝愿佳作展示Dear Wang Li，This afternoon I found that you looked very upset and in class you didnt listen to the teachers carefully enough.I think there must be something wrong with you.Is your mother ill？Or is it because you didnt get a good result in this exam？假设你是李华。

你的同班同学Albert因病住院已有两周，请你用英语给他写一封信内容包括：1.询问病情，表示关心；2.介绍你班的近况；3.祝愿早日康复注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数Dear Albert，_We are looking forward to your coming back.Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Albert，It has been two weeks since you went to hospital.All of us miss you very much.How are you feeling now？I am writing to tell you something that has happened in the last two weeks.As planned，our sports meeting was held last week.Our whole class cooperated very well to compete with other classes.The boys did very well in the track event.Unit 4 Exercise 4谢谢观看！谢谢观看！。