写作如何写好高中英语作文Englishwriting.pptx

如何写好高中英语作文？How to write an excellent composition ？给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性； 暗示性2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题高中英语作文的三个层次第一层次：第二层次：第三层次：简单句基础篇短语连词升华篇从句非谓语动词终极篇稳拿及格分，略有盈余：9-11优等分数:12-13卓越得分13-15简单句基础篇Dear Tom,I remember that you told me you wanted to work in China. Now, our school needs a teacher from other countries. You can have a try.You can teach Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. You will teach high school students. You need to work 10 hours a week. You only need to teach three courses. You can also be an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. If you want to come, please tell me. I can help you. Yours, Wanglin短语连词升华篇• Dear Tom, • I remember that you informed me that you were fond of working in China. Now, our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try. • If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. Meanwhile, you need to work 10 hours a week. Besides/In addition, you can also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. • Please let me know in advance if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. I’m looking forward to your reply. • Yours, • Wanglin从句非谓语动词终极篇 • Dear Tom, • Having been informed that you were fond of working in China, I will share a piece of good news with you. Our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try. • Working 10 hours a week, you can choose three of the four courses which are Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. Besides/In addition, you can also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. • Please let me know in advance if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. I’m looking forward to your reply. • Yours, • WanglinI remember that you told me you wanted to work in China. Now, our school needs a teacher from other countries. You can have a try.I remember that you informed me that you were fond of working in China. Now, our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try.Having been informed that you were fond of working in China, I will share a piece of good news with you. Our school will employ a foreign teacher to teach some courses to senior high students. You can have a try.You can teach Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. You will teach high school students. You need to work 10 hours a week. You only need to teach three courses. You can also be an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. Meanwhile, you need to work 10 hours a week. Besides/In addition, you can also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. Working 10 hours a week, you can choose three of the four courses which are Spoken English, English Writing, Britain Today and American Today. Besides/In addition, you can also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. If you want to come, please tell me. I can help you.Please let me know in advance if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help. I’m looking forward to your reply.技 巧1. 使用高级词汇3. 使用连接词书面表达书面表达高分高分的技巧的技巧2. 使用丰富的句式定语从句英语作文常用连词First/First of all,… 首先 In the first place,… 首先 To Begin/start with,… 首先 Second/Secondly,… 其次 Last but not the least,… 最后一点，也是非常重要的—点• 条理:表举例:for instance 例如 for example 例如表对比和转折:however,… 但是 on the contrary,… 恰恰相反 nevertheless,… 尽管如此，然而 otherwise,… 否则 instead,…相反 on the one hand,… 一方面 on the other hand,… 另一方面Because (of)因为 Therefore,... 所以 As a result/consequence,... 结果 Thanks to... 因为……表因果:furthermore,… 此外而且 in addition,…此外而且 what's more,…此外而且 besides除了……,此外而且not only... but also… 不仅……而且……表递进As far as I am concerned,…就我而言 In short，... 总之 In brief，... 总之 In conclusion 总之 In summary 总之 All in all 总之 In a word 总之表总结• 语篇训练（定语从句在写作中的应用）• 以下是你们班班长李华的相关信息：• 李华是我的好朋友，她的妈妈是我的英语老师。

李华总是乐于助人，这使得她在班上很受欢迎曾经有一段时间，她因为生病学习受到影响在她的努力之下，她终于赶上了班上的同学她的梦想是成为偏远地区的一名志愿者，那里的人们非常需要帮助• 1. 李华是我的好朋友，她的妈妈是我的英语老师 • Lihua is my good friend. Her mother is my English teacher.• 2.李华总是乐于助人，这使得她在班上很受欢迎 • She is always ready to help others. It makes her popular among the whole class.• 3. 曾经有一段时间，她因为生病学习受到影响Lihua, whose mother is my English teacher, is my good friend. • She is always ready to help others, which makes her popular among the whole class.• There was a time when her study suffered because of her illness.• 她的梦想是成为偏远地区的一。