2022年高三语文读后续写话题(二）亲情类话题素材积累.docx

读后续写话题（二）亲情感悟篇语料积累亲情感悟篇的续写文章主题： 亲情感悟一般属于人与社会中的主题语境，亲情感悟类话题主要涉及到亲人之间发生的日常生活事件，包括纪念重要日子（如举办惊喜生日派对，送生日礼物，母亲节，父亲节等）和父亲教孩子学习新技能，孩子为长辈解决困难，照看妹妹等情亲感悟类话题也涉及到亲人间的矛盾，如：父女之间缺乏沟通，父亲把自己的意志强加给子女，财产分配问题导致手足决裂，子女觉得父亲偏心，孩子想要帮父母却帮倒忙等这个话题引导考生思考亲人间的关系，让考生们领悟拥有一个爱的家庭比物质上富足更让人快乐，或是亲人之间的平等、有效沟通，相互尊重，相互关爱是非常重要，或是要珍惜亲人间看似平淡却又温暖的亲情亲情感悟篇的续写文章特点： 亲情感悟类的续写文章，通常会涉及到矛盾冲突产生原因，如性格原因，环境原因，经济原因等接下去是想办法解决矛盾冲突，续写原文往往会用较多笔墨交代冲突解决过程，为续写冲突的解决埋下伏笔冲突解决的过程往往是按照时间顺序描写重要事件，来增加过程的复杂性和悬念性续写往往要求考生能够用续写原文的伏笔，让冲突得到化解，化解可以是弥补，解释，道歉，回忆等如果是纪念重要节日，如生日惊喜派对，往往会是派对的描写，热闹，充满欢笑的场面描写加上我的收获，开心，感恩等。

如果是亲人间的矛盾、误会，结尾往往会亲人间冰释前嫌，握手言和亲情感悟类文章的结尾应该由主题提升包括亲情感悟，事件评论等此类题目备考温馨建议：1.多积累相关话题语料库，写作过程中做到信手拈来，活学活用；2. 多构思相关话题的续写文章，做到心里有数，总结共同点；使用需要注意的问题：1.避免生搬硬套，拒绝套句；2.注意时态语态绿皮大书参考同类话题1. 第一节（1）2021.06新高考全国卷 a Mother’s Day Surprise (母亲节惊喜)2. 第二节（2）My Dad’s best Flower 爸爸最美的花3. 第二节（3）Going Home 回家一、 亲情类的人物外貌&性格、品质描写：1. 但你知道爸爸为打扰别人而感到内疚But you know how Dad feel guilty to bother others.2. 他从来都不爱说话他没有在餐桌上或我们去公园散步时讲述自己的故事他是一个私密的人，似乎想保持这种状态He was never too much of a talker. He didn’t tell stories at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.3.他在困难面前表现出来的巨大的毅力也让我影响深刻。

I was also impressed by the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty.4.具有讽刺意味的是，我们非常相似：我们都有脾气暴躁、快速宽容的性格The irony is that we are very much alike: we share the hot-tempered and fast-forgiving personality. 5.有着棕色卷发、圆眼睛和中国娃娃脸的露露非常可爱With her brown curls, round eyes, and China doll face, Lulu was desperately cute.6.露露没有听话，而是走到外面，以一种富有挑战性的方式面对我 Instead of being obedient, Lulu stepped outside, facing me in a challenging way. 7. 然而露露摇了摇头，眼里流露出固执的神情2021 年11 月 绍 兴 一模）However. Lulu shook her head eyes._.stubborn look in her eyes._. 8. 但爷爷固执地宣称，“我能！”当然，他这是耍孩子气。

2022.03潍坊一模)But Grandpa declared stubbornly，“I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. 9. 他爱他的父亲，最想得到他的认可 2021年9 月 嘉兴模拟考) He loved his father, and wanted his approval more than anything in the world. 10. 我的童年充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——慈爱、甜蜜，但心不在焉、健忘It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. (2017.11 浙江高考)二．亲情类的有关冲突产生、寻找解决方法、冲突解决的场面描写冲突产生：1. Uncle Richard had not been speaking with Prissy or her father since the two brothers’ quarrel about (关于…的争吵)the division of a piece of property eight years ago. The fault had been mainly on Richard's side, but he was too stubborn to admit it(太固执而没有承认它。

) 2. I thought it was going to be a special day filled with fun and presents (充满礼物和乐趣), but all I received was a “Happy Birthday.” (2022.04 绍兴二模) 3. All of a sudden, the electricity was cut off and there was a complete darkness(一片黑)in the house . I couldn’t do anything. Therefore, I decided to go to sleep and end the unlucky day (结束这不幸的一天). 4.Dad was sitting at the dinner table and he suddenly slapped his forehead (拍他的前额)“I just realized that I am going to be 50 in June. Let’s just quietly forget about it. I want to mourn(哀悼) the passing of his youth (青春的流逝) in private.”5.I stood there silently (静静地站在那)for a second. Then, I turned around, went out of the house, and set out in the cold to tackle the enemy(对付敌人) that lay in my driveway. But I couldn’t clam down (冷静). I was really angry that she would leave me to battle this alone (让我独自一人战斗). 6.My father, being an athlete himself, was absorbed in(全神贯注于)her show. I was sad that no one was playing with me: no one was watching me. I became bored and jealous (厌烦和嫉妒) watching her show off. 7. 我被这一发现深深地感动了，但我知道，我这样冲进她的房间，剥夺了她在圣诞节看到我既惊讶又高兴的快乐,我又感到难过。

I was deeply moved by the discovery and yet sickened by the knowledge that, bursting into her room like this I had robbed her of her pleasure(剥夺了她的快乐)of seeing me astonished and delighted on Christmas day.8. When I tried to pull her away from the piano, she began yelling, crying and kicking angrily (愤怒地大喊，大哭，和踢)9. A helpless expression flashed across his face (在他脸上闪现). Grandma explained that his health was declining quickly(正在快速的下降)and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever. 寻找解决方法：1.Together, they brainstormed a list of ideas（集思广益，想出了一系列点子）when suddenly Jenny murmured, “what’s Dad’s resolution for the new year?”2. I gathered up my courage(鼓起勇气) and started heading for the basement. 3. Why not cook a meal for Uncle Richard? So miserable was he that he had to bear a cold bites(忍受冰冷的饭菜) ! （2022.04 杭二中4月模拟）4．Under the guidance of his father (在爸爸的指导下), Jenna stirred the eggs and poured it on the pan. Several minutes later, it was fully cooked. To avoid the hot pot burning his fingers (烫伤他的手指头), Jeff took his father’s tips and picked the pot by a wet cloth. (2021.06新高考卷) 5. I fought tirelessly, my short arms swinging from side to side(左右晃动)while the wind cut against my cheeks.我不知疲倦地战斗着，我的短胳膊在风刮着脸颊时左右摆动6. I even started practicing the surprised face (练习吃惊的表情)in front of the mirror, testing exclamations of delight:"Wow!"7. M。