中国雅思考生高分(8分)范文赏析.docx

雅思考生经典 8 分范文一（一） Are zoos necessary? 指导老师：英赛特雅思写作主讲吴建业 Recently there has arisen a heated debate over whether zoos are necessary. People retain diverse attitudes towards this hot issue. Before presenting my view, I intend to discuss both sides of the argument. Advocates of zoos hold the belief that the benefits of zoos to any community are conservational, educational and recreational. To begin with, it is an effective way to preserve some rare animals and endangered species in zoos. The natural environment is no longer a suitable habitat for some species which are on the verge of extinction due to the deterioration of environment and hunting. Zoos help increase the population of endangered species and thus maintain the ecological balance. Moreover, zoos also serve as an ideal scientific research center where scientists can conduct experiments to find out the causes of some diseases that have been troubling animals and discover the cures. In addition, it is also possible that scientists breed more new species. Besides protecting endangered species, zoos play an important role in improving the public knowledge of animals. Animals in zoos keep people in touch with a more natural and animal world. Last of all, zoos are a place of entertainment and recreation. They are also a great tourist attraction which boosts the local tourism. Some other people, however, are strongly against zoos for several sound reasons. Primarily, it is morally wrong to take an animal from its home, confine it in unnatural settings and use it for our entertainment. The nature of zoos reflects a worldwide human arrogance towards other species and fosters a disregard for all life. Furthermore, overcrowding and unnatural groupings of animals can create stress and lead to severe injury and even death and deaths from aggression, disease, stress and ill treatment are common. Worst of all, adults and children visiting zoos will be given the subliminal message that it is OK to use animals for our own ends, though it impinges on their freedom or quality of life; thus zoos will encourage poor treatment of animals more generally. In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter. I believe that animals belong to their natural habitat in the wild and it is a breach of their natural rights to take them by force into captivity for our own purposes; therefore zoos should be discouraged. 范文赏析： 1．文章采用了雅思议论文典型的等分式结构（ COUNTER-ARGUMENT） 。

第一段开门见山，引出争论的话题：动物园有没有存在的必要？第二和第三段对争论2．整篇文章的关键部位均能较好地运用套句，为读者指明文章发展的方向恰当地使用这些佳句，一方面起到 SIGNPOST 的作用，同时使文章条理清晰，层次感强 3．文章用词多样化，句式各异作者对复杂句式把握得恰倒好处，善于换用不同的表达方式，用词精确 4．能够熟练运用十大原则进行构思，较好地吸收了《最新雅思考试胜策 -写作》中的观点和词汇经典高分范文二（2）Do as the Romans do when in Rome?作者：欧杨（华南师范大学学生）雅思写作 8 分得主指导老师：英赛特雅思写作主讲吴建业 Recently, the debate over whether people who have been in a foreign country should accept the new culture or form a separate minority with different values and lifestyle has aroused wide concern. People retain diverse attitudes towards this hot issue. Before presenting my view, I intend to explore both sides of the argument. Many people claim that people living in a new country should accept the new culture and adapt to their new environment. To begin with, by accepting the new notions and lifestyle, you can easily survive and enjoy a comfortable life and be well adaptable. Moreover, it is a necessity for overseas students to adapt to the new culture and society, because it may impose an adverse influence on their living and study if they cannot be socially adaptable. Furthermore, to form a separate minority may bring out negative outcomes such as hostility and resentment. It will undoubtedly exert a negative impact on relationship between people from different nations. Some other people, however, strongly hold that it is necessary to form a group with their own values and lifestyle for several sound reasons. Firstly, they are in a foreign country and are actually a minority with little power, many of which even have no equal rights. Therefore, it is wise for them to join together to enhance their strength to cope with social problems. Secondly, by helping each other in the group, people can adapt to the new community and society more easily and lead a better life. Thirdly, students in a new environment may more or less have physical or psychological problems, so it is helpful for students to get together to help each other. From the above discussion, we can see that there is actually some truth in both statements. Personally, I am in favor of the former view. Adaptability is an important quality for people especially students who are going abroad to further their education. After all, even if you form a separate minority, you still have to accept the new culture and adapt to the new settings. 范文赏析： 1.篇章结构合理，布局错落有致。

第一段引出话题，第二和第三段分别陈述正反双方意见，最后一段采用“卒章显志”的手法 （结尾才表达作者的明确立场）层次清晰，逻辑严密，说服力强 2.遣词到位, 用词精准，搭配合理善于换用同义或近义表达避免重复，使行文紧凑如： in a forei。