人教高中英语必修4unit1an-introduction-to-a-person课件.ppt

人物传记的写作人物传记的写作(An introduction to a person)基本信息：1. 1.此类写作是记叙文的一种，主要以人物为中此类写作是记叙文的一种，主要以人物为中心组织材料，围绕具体事件来写；心组织材料，围绕具体事件来写；2. 2.介绍人物一般以时间顺序进行叙述；介绍人物一般以时间顺序进行叙述；3. 3.以第三人称为主；以第三人称为主；4. 4.时态一般选用一般过去时时态一般选用一般过去时写作原则:文章结构：总文章结构：总————分分————总总（引入部分，正文部分，结尾部分）（引入部分，正文部分，结尾部分） 总： 总体介绍人物（姓名，身份，地位，主要成就） 成长经历，教育情况， 兴趣爱好，性格品质， 工作经历，感人事迹， 突出成绩， 功过是非 总： 总结评价人物：影响，启示 具体介绍人物： 分：人物传记的写作模式：人物传记的写作模式：（一）（一）人物简介的写作步骤；人物简介的写作步骤；( (概概, ,貌貌, ,育育, ,平平, ,评评) )概况概况））age, sex, birth-place, background外貌外貌））appearance ,character教育教育））education生平生平））big events in one’s life ( in order of time )评价评价））evaluation A. A. 概况概况 （尽量用定语从句、非谓语、同位语结构，使文（尽量用定语从句、非谓语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺章简洁，通顺) ) Lin Qiaozhi was born in/into a poor family in 1901.She is a specialist in women’s diseases.1））______________________________________ _____________________________(定语从句定语从句).2））Born in/into a ______ family in _____(地点地点) on _____(时间时间), XXX is a ________________.3) XXX , the son of a _____ family, was born in ______ (地点地点)on _____(时间时间). Lin Qiaozhi who is a specialist in women’s diseases was born in a poor family in 1901.B B．外貌．外貌, ,性格性格 ( (巧用巧用withwith做定语做定语) ) 1) 1)梁志波是个近视的男生梁志波是个近视的男生, ,他戴着一副眼镜。

他戴着一副眼镜 Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted boy _____________________________.2) 2)杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发 Yang Yang is good-looking /ordinary-looking /funny-looking____________________.with a pair of glasses on his nose with long hair C C．生平．生平 ( (尽量用复合句尽量用复合句, ,倒装倒装, ,非限制定语从句等，非限制定语从句等，润色文章润色文章) )1) 1)1 1）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣, ,而且有音乐天赋而且有音乐天赋Hou Yaowen not only is interested in science but also has a gift for music.( (用用not only …but also倒装句改写倒装句改写) )Not only_____________________________, but also________________________.2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。

祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献 (用非用非限制性定语从句表达限制性定语从句表达) )Zu Longtao set a new world record of swimming,______________________________________. is Hou Yaowen interested in science he has a gift for music which makes a great contribution to China. D.D.教育背景教育背景• •be admitted to….university be admitted to….university • •graduate from…department of…universitygraduate from…department of…university• •get a good education get a good education • •get/receive a bachelor/ master/ doctor’s degree get/receive a bachelor/ master/ doctor’s degree • •major in…major in…• •gain scholarshipgain scholarshipE E．评价．评价 （注意运用一些动词（注意运用一些动词, ,形容词等短语形容词等短语/ /词词组）组）• •think/speak highly ofthink/speak highly of……• •set a good example to sb. = set sb. a good exampleset a good example to sb. = set sb. a good example• •famous/well known at home and abroadfamous/well known at home and abroad• •make great contributions to=make a great contribution to make great contributions to=make a great contribution to ……• •be remembered as/bybe remembered as/by……foreverforever裴继升给我们作出了榜样裴继升给我们作出了榜样, , 大家都赞扬他。

大家都赞扬他Pei Jishen _________________________,so all the people ________________________him. sets us a good example speak highly of 请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文，简要介绍一下宋庆龄，可请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文，简要介绍一下宋庆龄，可适当增加细节适当增加细节 1. 1.宋庆龄（宋庆龄（Song QinglingSong Qingling））18931893年出生于上海一个富裕的家年出生于上海一个富裕的家庭，受到良好的教育，并留学美国庭，受到良好的教育，并留学美国 2.1915 2.1915年嫁给孙中山（年嫁给孙中山（Dr. Sun Yat-senDr. Sun Yat-sen）；后来成为中华人）；后来成为中华人民共和国国家名誉主席（民共和国国家名誉主席（an honorary president of the an honorary president of the PeoplePeople’’s Republic of Chinas Republic of China）。

3. 3.她一生平易近人，晚年不仅热衷于中国妇女儿童的福利事她一生平易近人，晚年不仅热衷于中国妇女儿童的福利事业，而且创办了专为妇女和儿童服务的中国福利会（业，而且创办了专为妇女和儿童服务的中国福利会（the China the China Welfare InstituteWelfare Institute））, ,并领导中国妇女联合会（并领导中国妇女联合会（the Womenthe Women’’s s FederationFederation））. . 4. 4.此外，她也为人权（此外，她也为人权（civil rightcivil right）） 、民主（、民主（democracydemocracy））与和平而努力工作与和平而努力工作 注意：字数注意：字数 100-120100-120字左右【思路点拨】 本篇文章可以从一下几方面入手：本篇文章可以从一下几方面入手： 一一. .注意文章的时态和人称；注意文章的时态和人称； 二二. .把握文章的结构把握文章的结构 1. 1.第一段：简单介绍宋庆龄。

第一段：简单介绍宋庆龄 2. 2.第二段：详细介绍宋庆龄第二段：详细介绍宋庆龄 3. 3.第三段：从客观和主观两方面对宋庆第三段：从客观和主观两方面对宋庆龄进行评价龄进行评价  Song Qingling_____________________________________________________________________________________________________. In 1915, she married Dr. Sun Yat-sen , who had a great influence on China.__________(后来),Song Qingling ____________________________ an honorary president of the People’s Republic of China. She was ___________________________________(平易近人)during her whole life. Song Qingling was born into a rich family in Shanghai in 1893, so she got a good education. And she went to study in the USA. Laterwas chosen to be warm-hearted/kind-hearted and easy-goingA.She not only _____________________ the welfare of women and children in her later years but also _________________________________the China Welfare Institute, ___________________________ serve women and children now.B.(用not only …but also 倒装句改写)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She also led the Women’s Federation._____________(此外)，she worked hard for civil rights, democracy and peace. concerned herself withstarted/founded/established/organizedwhich is designed/intended toNot only did she concern herself with the welfare of women and children in her later years, but also she started the China Welfare Institute , which is intended to serve women and children now. In additionHomework 1.Rewrite your composition and recite it.2.Review Unit 2 .(Thank you for your coming.)。