
高中英语写作:建议信课件.ppt
24页高考英语写作:建建议议信信学习目标1.掌握建议信写作步骤;2.按题目要求写出高分作文考频 建议信考察频次不高,近十年全国卷共考察三次2008全国II2011全国II2018全国I建议信特点:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.假定你是李华,你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1.2.3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗请你回复邮件内容包括建议信写作步骤:布局谋篇遣词造句语篇衔接一、通过审题布局谋篇审题对象、时态内容1.目的2.要点细节3.结尾建议原因/效果举例假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你 询问有关习俗请你回复邮件内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯对象第一段:写信目的 第二段:要点细节1.到达时间 2.合适的礼物 3.餐桌礼仪 第三段:表达期望 帮助Terry了解在中国做客的有关习俗 建议早到 +原因:中国传统+效果:帮忙准备饭菜/表达重视 建议带礼物+举例:水果、书、一箱牛奶 建议咀嚼时不要发出声音+原因:干扰别人 希望建议有用二、能够正确遣词造句 【造句】【内容】帮助Terry了解在中国做客的有关习俗首段【遣词】I have received your letter.I am writing to give you some advice.custom;guest;give some adviceI know that you want to learn some customs about being a guest in China.首段【造句】I have received your letter,and I know that you want to learn some customs about being a guest in China.I am writing to give you some advice.【造句】Having received your letter,I know that you want to learn some customs about being a guest in China.I am writing to inform you of some related details/constructive suggestions.【升级】非谓语动词形式;inform you of 短语升级;related information/constructive suggestions 修饰词。
首段小结【首段模板】Having received your letter,I know that you.I am writing to inform you of some related details/constructive suggestions.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.Having received your letter,I know that you are looking for some information about learning Chinese,I am writing to inform you of some constructive suggestions.【内容】建议一:早到+原因:中国传统+帮忙准备饭菜/表达重视 中间段【造句】According to our tradition,you should arrive early so that you can help prepare the dinner,and it can show the dinners importance to you.中间段【造句】According to our tradition,you should arrive early so that you can help prepare the dinner,and it can show the dinners importance to you.【升级】According to our tradition,you are supposed to arrive early so that you can help the host prepare the dinner,which means you attach importance to the visit.【内容】建议二:带礼物+举例:水果、书 和酒 中间段【造句】You can/had better bring a gift,such as some fruits,a book or wine.注:举例用such as.【遣词】gift/present;fruit;book;Chinese knot【内容】建议三:咀嚼时不要发出声音+原因:干扰别人中间段【造句】when you are enjoying the meal,you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.【遣词】chew;avoid;make noises中间段小结提建议:一、二、三;表原因:according to、due to、because of;表效果:so that、非限制性定语从句;举例子:such as、for example。
内容】希望有用、盼望回复【遣词】helpful;useful;look forward to;reply【造 句】I hope these suggestions would be useful/helpful.Looking forward to your reply.尾段三、能够正确使用语篇衔接词1.首先:Firstly/First,First of all To begin with,Above all(最重要)2.其次:Secondly/Second,Then Besides,In addition,Moreover,Furthermore,Whats more 3.结尾:Finally,At last,In the end Last but not least In conclusion,To summarize*观点:In my opinion,From my point of view,From my perspective 衔接词 范文:DearTerry,Howareyoudoing?Havingreceivedyourletter,IknowthatyouwanttolearnsomecustomsaboutbeingaguestinChina.Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelateddetails.To begin with,youaresupposedtoarriveearlysothatyoucanhelpthehostpreparethedinner,whichmeansyouattachimportancetothevisit.Besides,Youhadbetterbringagift,suchassomefruits,abookorabottleofwine.moreover,whenyouareenjoyingthemeal,youneedtoavoidmakingnoiseswhilechewingfood.Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yourssincerely,LiHua基础版范文模板:Dearxxx,Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeabout.Now,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.First/Tobeginwith,_(建议1).Thisisagoodwayof_(原因1).Besides,youhadbetterdosth.(建议2).Whatsmore/moreover,youneedtodo(建议3).Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,xxx。












