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陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（3）附参考范文【2016高考训练题】书面表达（总分值25分）假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Bob给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下中国高中生对于大 学的选择意向，于是你在班里进行了一次调查清根据下表的信息，给Bob回复一封电子邮 件，告诉他调杳结果，并说明原因选择意向和比例原因省内大学25%录取机会大；生活习惯相似省外大学70%培养独立性；可选学校多国外大学5%了解外国文化；有助于学外语注意：1 ,词数100左右;2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Bob,Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】书面表达Dear Bob,Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose. Now I'm writing to tell you the results.Twenty-five percent of my classmates want to choose universities in our province. They say they arc more likely to be admitted if they apply to these universities. And they needn't change their lifestyle too much. Seventy percent of them would like to choose universities in other provinces. Being away from home, they can become more independent and there are more universities for them to choose from. The rest five percent of my classmates plan to choose foreign universities. One reason why they want to go abroad is that they can learn more about different cultures. Besides, it will be a great help to their foreign language study.Yours,Li Hua假设你校在举办征文活动，题目为"How to Overcome Test Anxiety: 请你用英语写一篇短文, 谈谈你自己的具体做法，以供同学们借鉴。

注意：1.词数100左右2 .做法不少于四点3 . 参考诃汇： well-prepared, lake a deep breath, positive thoughts, concentrate on, repeat4 .开头已给出Whoever takes exams will feel more or less tense and anxious...【参考范文】How to Overcome Test AnxietyWhoever takes exams will feel more or less tense and anxious.So how to overcome test anxiety is very important and a problem in desperate want of being solved. Personally, the following may be of help to you.First, make sure (hat you're well-prepared for the exam, which will make you feel conOdent that you can do it. Second, once you take your scat, take a few minutes to relax, such as letting your arms hang loosely, moving your fingers as well as taking a few deep breaths. Third, push away the negative thoughts and turn them into positive ones. Fourth, concentrating on the exam may also benefit you a lot and don't pay attention to the people around you. Besides, if you are sitting for an oral exam, smile a lot and imagine you are having the nicest conversation in a long time. Of course, when you start feeling tense and anxious again during the exam, repeating the exercise to relax yourself is essential.[2014界黑龙江省哈三中高三上第三次验收考试】书面表达（总分值25分）假设你是张林，你班来自英国的交流学生John因病住院已两周，请你用英文给他写封信,主要内容包括：1 .询问病情，表示关切：2 .介绍班级近期活动，学习等情况；3 .表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3 .信的格式已给出，不计入总词数Dear John,Yours,Zhang Lin【参考范文】Dear John,How are you getting along these days? It's two weeks since you went to hospital. And we're informed that you are diagnosed with a severe disease and have to be in hospital for a period of time. We are concerned about your health and miss you much. The students are engaged in reviewing lessons. We've had an exam and the majority of us have made progress steadily. Surrounded by an academic atmosphere, we encourage each other and spare no effort. Don't worry about your studies, we assure you that well help you to make up for the lessons you missed.Cheer up! We are convinced and confident that you can overcome the disease and be with us soon. We are waiting for your backward!Best wishes!YoursZhang Lin2016书面表达训练假如你叫李华，不久前参加了美国文化委员会举办的一次语言竞赛活动，作为获奖者你得到 了暑假去美国免费学习英语的机会。

以下是校方寄给你的课程安排表，请你阅读课表，按要 求给对方负责人Mr. Smith回一封信Schedule For EFLS Summer English CoursesEnglish CoursesTotal Hours of StudyDatefive-week course60July7—August 2three-week course40July 12—August 8注意：L信的开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；2 .可适当增加细节一，以使行文连贯；3 .词数：100左右Dear Mr. Smith,Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.【参考范文】Dear Mr. Smith.Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.As for my choice of the two courses, Td certainly prefer the three-week course for 40 hours, although it's from July 12th to August 8. This would allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I'd like to make a few new friends.Of all the subjects I'm learning at school, I like English best. I've been learning English for six years and now I'm able (o listen, speak, read and write. I hope to lake this chance to improve spoken English as much as possible. I believe I'll have a wonderful time in America this summer.[2013界虹口区质量监控测试题】Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请认真观察下面的漫画，然后简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，谈谈自己的思考和看法。

参考词汇：缸：vat； 漏出来：leak out； 漏洞：loophole【参考范文】作文：In the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However; with so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, they'll never stor。