中考英语-题型解读-第8节-书面表达课件.ppt

中考题型解读中考题型解读第八节第八节 书面表达书面表达广州中考高分突破广州中考高分突破题型突破题型突破一、题型分析一、题型分析 书面表达是广州市中考中一个比较难的、也是必考的题型,要求考生根据题目的要求写一段80词左右的短文书面表达主要考查考生综合运用英语的能力,同时考查考生是否掌握所学过的语法知识、时态、句型和结构等知识 1.近几年的中考书面表达题的题材大致为： 1)与中学生学习有关的题材； 2)与中学生日常生活有关的题材； 3)与中学生交际交往有关的题材 2.评分标准：要求文章要切题并有所发挥；上下文连贯、用词造句流畅、表达得体；词汇的用量符合要求,拼写、书写格式和标点符号准确总分15分,给分标准基本上是6+6+3,即：内容+准确性+流畅性具体评分标准细则如下：要素档次内容(6分)切合题意,体现要点65.5543210.50有所发挥准确性(6分)语法65.5543210词汇机械性：大小写、拼写和格式等错误流畅性(3分)结构得体性与连贯性32.521.510.50解题技巧解题技巧 考生在考场上,可以按照以下几个步骤来完成书面表达题 第一步：认真审题,明确要求 审题是写好书面表达题的关键。

通读试题所给的每一个字,观察所给的每一幅图画,从而明确该文的题目要求,判断作文的类型、特点,了解作文的重要内容,力求写作中切中题意 1.确定体裁中考书面表达体裁不同,写法各异通过仔细观察、认真分析,确定文章的主题,然后再围绕主题进行写作,以满足中考“切中题意”的要求 2.确定格式文体不同,格式也不一样书信有书信的格式,便条有便条的格式同样都是通知,口头通知与书面通知格式也不相同因此,应根据不同的文体来确定写作时所采用的相应格式 3.确定人称因搞错人称而失分,实在令人可惜所以,在动笔之前应先确定是使用第一人称还是第三人称 4.审提示中所交待的时间、地点、人物及人物关系 第二步：依据要点第二步：依据要点,草拟提纲草拟提纲 根据内容提示,在草纸上列出各要点所用的词、短语以及句式等注意这是组织语言、形成短文的基础步骤这一步骤的要求是：根据内容提示简单地列出提纲,将所需的语言材料准备好可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型；暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、单数第三人称等词形变化 第三步：扩展成句第三步：扩展成句,连句成篇连句成篇 将上述所列出的词、词组、短语等扩展成句注意时态、语态的正确运用并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。

全文应结构紧凑,前后连贯 第四步：仔细检查第四步：仔细检查,认真修改认真修改 检查修改是书面表达解题过程中必不可少的一个重要环节检查修改的原则是大处着眼,小处着手具体应从词法、句法、语篇三个方面入手仔细检查并进行认真修改： 1.从词法角度主要检查词汇的运用是否妥当；拼写是否有误；名词、代词的数和格是否正确；词性是否混淆；词与词之间是否“搭配不当”；用词是否重复等 2.从句法角度主要检查句子结构是否完整；动词时态、语态是否正确；主谓是否一致等 3.从语篇角度主要检查文体格式是否正确；字数是否符合要求；要点是否齐全；语句是否简洁；上下文是否连贯、符合逻辑等 第五步：认真书写第五步：认真书写,讲究规范讲究规范 中考书面表达对答卷的书写问题有明确具体的要求因此,在考试中同学们应将单词写好,千万不能因为书写问题影响自己的得分另外,整洁干净的卷面,规范、美观的字体会给阅卷者好的印象,可以得到“印象分”写作模板写作模板 (2015广州)你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由注意：1.参考词汇：模型制作 model making2.词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入词数)；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest.1.审题审题 本篇书面表达要求根据图表信息，介绍学校的特色课程，写一篇文章根据提示可以这样入手：(1)分别介绍English drama, football, model making 这三个特色课程的情况及其益处或选择的理由； (2) 对于你建议的课程要发挥自己的联想,适当加以补充，并写出理由注意的问题：注意的问题：(1)因为是介绍学校的特色课程,所以时态要用一般现在时；(2)对你提出的建议特色课程时可以借助适当的情态动词或用一般将来时,也可以运用一些表示建议的句型2.确定关键词确定关键词英语戏团：English drama练习口语：practice oral English学习表演：learn performing skills足球（课程）： football course强身健体： make you strong and healthy/ be good for physical health鼓励合作：encourage teamwork/ (students) learn more about teamwork模型制作： model making 了解科学：know about science提高兴趣：(students) bee interested in. / arouse their interest理由是： the reason is that.不但而且 : not only .but also.更加重要的是,而且(表示递进)：whats more; furthermore; in addition 我希望他们能够 ：I hope they can.我们应该：We should.为什么不? :Why not .?3.连词成句连词成句 If you want to practice oral English and learn performing skills, English drama may be the first choice. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Students can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You can know about science and bee interested in it. I suggest adding a painting course because The reason is that many students like drawing. I hope they can be helpful and students would enjoy a colorful school life here!4.仔细检查仔细检查,认真修改认真修改 查时态、人称：用一般现在时,介绍特色课程时人称以第二、三人称为主,也就是you 或是students都可以。

提出建议时可以采用第一人称 查要点：对照题目里的要点,检查需要包含的内容是否介绍齐全,这篇至少包括4大要点：英语戏团、足球、模型制作、个人建议的课程，每个要点还要陈述理由或好处 查连接：是否有适当的引导词或是连接词,让文章更加顺畅自然,比如not only. but also;whats more; furthermore; in addition; as well等另外表示建议的句型的运用能够让文章增色,如：Why not add a painting course? In my opinion, I suggest adding a painting course because.等 查语法和词数：包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、单复数、主谓一致、I hope的宾语从句等；词数是否足够 5.认真书写认真书写,讲究规范讲究规范范文一：范文一： Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest.These courses will help students relax themselves after school.There are many courses for them to choose,such as English drama,football,or model making.Here is more information. If you want to improve your oral English,English drama may be the first choice.It is a good chance to practice not only oral English,but also performing skills.If you are interested in football,take the football course.It is good for your physical health.Besides,you can learn more about teamwork.What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and bee interested in it. For my part,a painting course can be added,because students like drawing so much.I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here! 范文二：范文二： Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest.It is such cheerful news because it can enrich students after school lives. Here is some information about each course.If you are keen on sports,soccer course will be a great choice.Not only can it make you strong and healthy,but also offers you a good chance to make friends and encourage teamwork. For those who are interested in science,model making is definitely their favorite.Students can get to know more about science,which will greatly arouse their interest.If you want to practice your oral English,you can take a course on English drama.When you are challenging different characters,you also learn how to perform them. In my opinio。