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英语高考专题复习英语高考专题复习短短 文文 改改 错错What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有错看不出句子有错2. 看出句子出错的地方看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正但无法改正3. 知道改正句子错误的地方知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确但答案不正确How to correct？？Any skills？？Any rules？？How to correct a How to correct a compositioncomposition 短文改错短文改错Dear Ms, Donforth, I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. . heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .0606年浙江卷短文改错年浙江卷短文改错. Steps of correcting a composition:1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）浏览全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）（分句阅读，逐行找错）3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点）（检查核对，攻克难点）Dear Ms, Donforth, I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. . heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .0606年浙江卷短文改错年浙江卷短文改错. toto√itsitssosotherethereyouryourknowledgeknowledgewithwithhopehopepossiblepossible∧∧right wordMissing wordWrong wordUnnecessary word 项目项目年度年度 正确正确多多词词缺缺词词错词错词２００４２００４１１1 1００８８２００５２００５1 1１１１１７７２００６２００６１１1 1１１７７2 0 0 72 0 0 711 117改错命题改错命题统计统计高考短文改错的短文通常只有高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词个词左右，分成左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。

各种行都存在错误各种错误所占比例为错误所占比例为 1：3：6即即: : 1 1行正确；行正确； 3 3行缺词或多词；行缺词或多词； 6 6行需要找出错误并改正行需要找出错误并改正Dear Ms, Donforth, I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. . heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .0606年浙江卷短文改错年浙江卷短文改错. toto√itsitssosotherethereyouryourknowledgeknowledgewithwithhopehopepossiblepossible∧∧动词动词代词代词连词连词副词副词代词代词名词名词介词介词动词动词形容词形容词年度年度介介词词动动词词形容形容词或词或副词副词代代词词名名词词连连词词冠冠词词总总计计２００４２００４１１２２１１１１１１１１２２９９２００５２００５2321010９９２００６２００６１１222１１１１００９９2 0 0 72 0 0 712211119错误类型错误类型统计统计测试点测试点一、动词形一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的主要包括两类错误：动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误，以及错误，以及主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。

的错误2007四川卷：四川卷： But, to my surprise, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket. 2007天津卷：天津卷： In Grand Eight I took physics. In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.gotgot§2006安徽卷：安徽卷：§Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. §2006安徽卷：安徽卷：§You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out §2006天津卷：天津卷：§Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college. wishespermittedadmitted二、名词数二、名词数 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误。

常表的用法错误常表现为将名词复数写成单数现为将名词复数写成单数2007陕西卷：陕西卷：Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. 2006浙江卷：浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class lessons knowledge§2006福建卷福建卷：：§ If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. §2006陕西卷：陕西卷：§ They have all sorts of course. I’m sure you will find one you like it. §2006重庆卷：重庆卷：§In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. interestcoursessky三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副 注意注意形容词和副词形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用在句子中的作用和具体用法。

这也是高考短文改错题的常考点这也是高考短文改错题的常考点2007浙江卷：浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 2006福建卷：福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around. proudhappily§2006湖北卷：湖北卷：§A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up. §2006辽宁卷：辽宁卷：§She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed. strongusually四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一主要有现现在分词、过去分词，动名词在分词、过去分词，动名词和和不定式不定式错误2007浙江卷：浙江卷： I could not to run very fast and                         fell behind.2007宁夏卷：宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every                       day.             to2006天津卷：天津卷： You always gave me special attention and inspired to me to join in activities. 2006天津卷：天津卷： I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. becometalking1.人称代词，物主代词的使用．人称代词，物主代词的使用．２．反身代词２．反身代词oneself 的使用．的使用．３．人称代词的主格和宾格．３．人称代词的主格和宾格．４．不定代词的使用．４．不定代词的使用．５．５．Both,　　all,　　either,　　neither,　　none的使用的使用.6. Whose 和和who’s，， its和和 it’s的区别．的区别．五五、、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟（（ 2007全国全国I）） I was only about six that he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.minewhen2007全国全国II：： While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball.2007陕西：陕西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed! 2006辽宁卷：辽宁卷： She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, and she marked strictly on student’s actual performance.students’/ourtheirmyself 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭多词、少词和搭配错误。

配错误                   catch a sight of                    lose my heart                          in hurry                    in Sunday afternoon                      express us                    such many peopleaon∨∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住六、习惯用法要记住§2007陕西卷：陕西卷： They were used to write on the blackboard and asked us difficult questions. § 2007浙江卷：浙江卷：So I didn’t lose my heart and kept running. §2007浙江卷：浙江卷：I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. §2006天津卷：天津卷：Because the help you gave me that summer, My life changed. §2006福建卷：福建卷：I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. §2006福建卷：福建卷： It is so a beautiful place! fasterwithofforsuch七、句子成分多分析七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。

只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分选择不同的词语只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误析，才能找出用词不当的错误NMET 2004 : I don’t know that they don’t                                   like to talk with me. 2007天津卷：天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a                      teacher which didn’t take my                        bad grades as a judgement of                       my abilities, but …whywho / that八、逻辑错误须关注八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴张冠李戴2006四川卷：四川卷：That night，，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals.NMET 2005: Some students may also  save  up for our college or future use.  wetheir常考的错误形式有：常考的错误形式有：连词连词but，， and，， or和和so的用的用法错误，以及法错误，以及冠词冠词的用法错误等。

的用法错误等2oo7全国全国II：：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things I’m doing at the school…2007四川卷：四川卷：An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms. a a九、冠词、连词常光顾九、冠词、连词常光顾§2007浙江卷：浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.§ §2006辽宁卷：辽宁卷：She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance.§ §2007四川卷：四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. whenandandAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with hisfather to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sittingroom. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room lookedreally beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but theChristmastree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.1.2.3. 4.5.6.7.8.9.10.This passage is about______A. Jim’s family.B. Christmas lights.C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.CAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with his1._____father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._____a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!3._____They put them in the corner of the sitting4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of5._____Christmas light. The sitting room looked6. ____really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. ________a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas8. ____tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his9. ____parents singing and dancing happily.10.____＼＼was＼＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and√∧∧were动词形动词形还要注意形和副还要注意形和副动词形动词形名词数名词数冠词连词须关注冠词连词须关注短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题  四不改四不改: :　　①①标点符号不改。

标点符号不改　　②②大小写不改大小写不改　　③③词序错误不改词序错误不改　　④④在纲外生词不改在纲外生词不改 文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错 　　Practice makes perfect.  [谚谚]  熟能生巧熟能生巧Homework:          Finish Exercise paperNow here are the weather report for our city.Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperaturewill fell down below zero. The temperature will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature willbe low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a driver, you’d better be more carefully when you are driving because the strong wind.1.    2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.Now here are the weather report for our city.1. _____Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature2. _____3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature3. ______will fell down below zero. The temperature 4. _____will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there5. _____isaeveningfallafterwill be the strong wind and the temperature will6. ____be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had 7. ____better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a 8. ____driver, you’d better be more carefully when9. ____ you are driving because the strong wind.10. ____a√to＼＼＼＼carefulof∧∧§An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea§between France and England in the balloon in 1784.High               1. ________§over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The                2.________§hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the                     3._________ §balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was                 4._________§coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into                5._________    §the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise                  6.________    §higher again. So it was still too close to the water.                    7.________§Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to                    8._________§save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in               9._________§England was very surprised see this when the balloon              10._______      §landed in front of them.An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the seabetween France and England in the balloon in1784.High 76.________over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 77.__________hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 78._________ balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 79.________ coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 80._________adiscoveredkeeping√ downthe water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 81._________ higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 82._________ Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 83.________ save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 84._________ England was very surprised see this when the balloon 85.________ landed in front of them.lighterButtheirfor∧∧to错误形式与改法错误形式与改法1 改词（改词（5—6个）：个）：在文中该词下面划横线在文中该词下面划横线( ___ )；在题号后横线上写出要改的词。

在题号后横线上写出要改的词  2  添词（添词（1—2个）：个）：在文中标上添词符号（在文中标上添词符号（∧∧）；）；在题号后横线上写出要添的词在题号后横线上写出要添的词 3 去掉（去掉（1—2个）：个）：在文中用斜线在文中用斜线( \ )划掉该词；划掉该词；在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉 4 正确（正确（1个）个）:在题号后横线上写出正确符号在题号后横线上写出正确符号(√) 。