新外研版英语八年级上册module 2 unit 3 writing.ppt

Module 2My hometown and my countryLondon is old.Beijing is older than London.China is _______ (big) than Australia.biggerSanya is ________ (hot) than Beijing.hotterNew York is a(n) _______ and ______ city than Washington D.C.biggerbusierShanghai has a(n) _______ population than Beijing. Beijing is ______ than Shanghai. largerolderIt is in the north part of the world. It’s famous for Big Ben, Buckingham Palace, Tower of Bridge and Cambridge University.It is never very hot in summer nor very cold in winter.What place is this?It’s England.It is in the north part of the world. It has a population of over 1.3 billionIt is famous for many places of interest, such as…What place is this?It’s China.coldplacePlace Place weatherhistorypopulationsizewarmoldnewlarge smalllargesmallBrainstormNameChinaWhere is it?What is its population?What’s it famous for?How old is it?What’s the weather like?in the north part of the worldOver 1,300,000,000the Palace Museum the Summer Palace The Great Wallover 5000 years oldFour seasons are different, warm in spring, hot in summer, cool in fall, cold in winter.Let’s try to write a passage! SampleHello! Everyone! My name is Tony. Today I’d like to introduce my country to you.China is in the north part of the world and it is about over 5000 years old. It has a population of over 1.3 billion , so it is the first largest and oldest country of the world. it is famous for many places of interest, such as the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, the Great Wall and so on. These places are the most famous and interesting in China, so millions of people go to China every day. When you are in China ,you will feel comfortable , because the weather is very enjoyable, it is warm in spring, hot in summer, cool in fall and cold in winter, four seasons are very different, It is also a good place to take a vocation. What’s more, People here are kind and friendly . In short, China is a good place to visit. Welcome to China, I believe you will have a good time here. beginningbodyendingcivilized city美丽惠东Hello,boys and girls. I am going to visit Huidong. Can you tell me something about Huidong? Huidong is ____________ （南部）of China.Locationin the south of The weather in Huidong is good ______( 全年）and it is never too ___ or ____all yearcoldhot WeatherIt is famous for Xunliao Bay, Nine-Dragon Mountain, Nanhu Park and so on.Famous places惠东正在争创全国文明城市，构建和谐惠东。

想来参观 惠东，来之前想了解下惠东，请根据内容提示用英语写一封信， 简要介绍惠东，不少于80词 1.惠东的位置（惠州南），人口(120多万)，历史(1700多年) 2.惠东的气候如何 3.介绍惠东比较著名的地方详细介绍2-3个方面)Writing practiceDear President Xi,I’m glad to hear that you are coming to visit Huidong. Let me tell you something about Huidong.__________________________________________ __________________________________________ _________________________________Welcome to Huidong, I believe you will have a good time here. Yours, Mary beginningbodyending写作前：认真审题，划出要点写作时：注意要求，规范写作写作后：反复检查，追求完美查（check by yourself）Read your passage aloud, then check it by yourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？大声朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚， 几乎没有语言错误。

第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚， 但有少量语言错误 第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 , 但有一些语言错误以上为及格线）第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子， 但表达不连贯，语言错误较多 第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不 清楚评分档次和要求：时态： 一般现在时Beginning开头部分EndingBody正文 （已给出部分）（1分）（满分13分）其他（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法、过渡词） 酌情加减分（3分）1.惠东的位置，人口(120多万)，历史(1700多 年) ，气候如何 （1个点1分，共 4分） 3.介绍惠东比较著名的地方详细介绍2-3个 方面）（ 1个点1分，共 6分）小组讨论互评，作文满分15分Beginning开头部分Body正文 Beginning开头部分EndingBody正文 Beginning开头部分Post-writingEndingBody正文 Beginning开头部分3 祝愿旅途愉快 （1分）小组活动：小组选出一篇作文进行欣赏并打分15分标准 ）欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求：人称，时态2.要点齐全3.结构：开头，正文，结尾4.好词好句注意（作文通用修改符号：优美句子~，漏词∧ ，错词O，去掉/ ）展示（show your passage）Sample Dear President Xi,I’m glad to hear that you are coming to visit Huidong . Let me tell you something about Huidong.Huidong is in the south of Huizhou. and it is about over 1700 years old. It has a population of over1.2 million. it is famous for many places of interest, such as Xunliao Bay, Nine-Dragon Mountain, Nanhu Park and so on. These places are very famous and interesting, If you come to Huidong, you will feel comfortable, because the weather is very enjoyable, it is neither hot in summer, nor cold in winter, so four seasons are very different. What’s more, People here are kind and friendly .In short, China is a good place to visit. Welcome to China, I believe you will have a good time here. Yours, MarybeginningbodyendingSummary: * How to write a composition abouta place?* Read the demands(要求）carefully.* Don't miss any points while writing.* Collect it by yourself when you finish writing, try to make it better and better.请把课堂上写给的介 绍家乡惠东的信修改补充完 整。