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作文之考研英语真题作文详解2005 年考研英语真题作文详解【篇一： 1991-2005 年考研英语作文所有真题及例文】1991-2005 年考研英语作文所有真题及例文1991 年考研英语真题作文directions:a、title: where to live-in the city or the country?b 、time limit:40 minutesc 、 word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given openingsentence)d 、your composition should be based on the outline below / and should start with the given opening sentence :“ manypeople appreciate the conveniences of the city.”e、your composition must be written clearly in the answersheet.outline:1、conveniences of the city2、attractions of the country3、 disadvantages of both4、my preference(15 points)===========================================【审题解题】从标题和纲要看来，这是一篇典型的选择类谈论语言。

选择类的文章能够先写 a 和 b 的利处，再写 a 和 b 的弊端（被称为交替式）；也能够先写 a 的利处和弊端，再写 b（被称为板块快）从纲要看来，这里是第一种状况这篇文章能够写成三段，第一段先写二者的长处，第二段写二者的弊端，第三点写自己的选择；可是这里最好的写法还是依据纲要写成四段，也就是将二者的长处分开来写 【中心词汇】attraction 拥有吸引力的人或物，胜地disadvantage 不利条件prefer 宁愿，更喜欢===========================================【参照范文】where to live — in the city or the country?many people appreciate the conveniences of the city. they can take less time to go to work because of the shorter distance and better transportation. they can enjoy themselves in restaurants, theaters and shopping malls. they can also get more information, better health care and better education.also country life has many attractions. fresh air, beautiful scenery, and singing birds will enable people to have a quieter and healthier life. far from large crowds of people here and there, we will be able to have a better mood and concentrate on what we are doing.however, both the city and the country have their own disadvantages. living in the city, pelple are likely to suffer heavy traffic, poor housing, air pollution and noises, while in the country, life will not be so convenient as in the city.as far as i an concerned, i prefer living in the country. i have been living in a big city for many years, and fed up with all the noises, which are a big annoyance both during the day and atnight. it is my years ’ wish to live a peaceful, healthy and relaxed life in the country.===========================================【适用词组】may peoplealso has many attractionshowever, bothand have their own disadvantagesas far as i an concerned, i prefer=========================================== 【构造评论】文章的整体写作完整依据构想睁开。

第一段在主题句以后，使用了段落写作中极为常有的方法之一的排比句来写，特别清楚先写工作，再写娱乐，再写更广阔的方面 —— 获守信息，保健和教育第二段的的第二、第三句话特别值得大家学习第二句句首的主语是平行的名词词组，紧接首句，是上句中的 attractions 的详细表现，尔后说这能够使得人们生活地寂静、健康第三句句首使用介词词组，尔后句子的骨干部分与上句在乎义上平行，是说我们能够有个好意情，并可全神贯注于我们所做的事第三段首句后只有一句话，使用了 while 来突显对照，特别简短最后一段写自己的情况，重要的是将独到之处写出来文章评论】首段中注意词、词组和句子等各个层面上的平行构造的出色用法，此中形容词比较级的平行用法最为惹人注视注意末句中 also 的用法是表示重申，也是为了在平行之中突显变化，这是一种高级技巧，望大家学习第二段第二句的平行名词词组做主语成效激烈，后来又有形容词比较级的平行第三句句首的 far from large crowds of people 让人想起哈代的名著《远离尘嚣》；句中 concentrate on what we aredoing 是个特别好的词组，意即 “全神贯注于我们所做的事 ”。

第三段的第二句除了学习 while 以外，注意前方使用的是平行构造来删繁就简，尔后边用的是比较，正好又响应首段首句末段首句是段落的主题句，以后有两句话，分别写过去和将来的情形，个性激烈第二句话中的 be fed up with 表示 “受够了 ”，后来又跟了一个非限制性定语从句后边一句中 years ’ wish 是个好词组，表示 “多年的愿望 ”，之后是三个形容词的平行，最后的 in the country 是响应本段首句，也是点题和扣纲要作者 : bamboo 时间 : 2005-11-24 01:45 pm 1992 年考研英语真题作文directions:a. title: for a better understanding between parent and childb. time limit: 40 minutesc. word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)d. your composition should be based on the outline below andshould start with the given opening sentence: “ nowadays thereis often a misunderstanding between parent and child. ”outline:1. present situation: lack of communication between parent and child2. possible reasons:1) different likes and dislikes ； 2) misunderstanding ； 3) others3. suggestions:1) for parents ；2) for children【审题解题】1992 年的考研真题完整沿用了 1991 年的做法，还是命题作文，给出了英文标题、英文纲要和文章首句，不过纲要之详细是绝无仅有的—— 第二和第三个重点分别分为三个和两个小点。

这就不单限制了篇章的安排，将段落的发展也做了规定，也就是将观察的重点基本放在了语言上边 —— 实质上这是完整没有必需的，谋篇布局也是写作很重要的方面我们能够看到，在此后的考试中再也没有出现这类状况这篇文章特别典型，属于原由 —— 方法类的文章首段是引入一个令人担忧的问题或许现象第二段是从三个方面来写可能的原由第三段是从家长和孩子两个方面来写解决问题的方法中心词汇】reasons + account for (responsible for) 原由 +解说to enhance communication 增强沟通to achieve better understanding 达到进一步的理解【参照范文】for a better understanding between parent and childnowadays there is often a lack of understanding betweenparent and child. parents often consider their children’ sbehaviors “ irrational ” while the children arealwayscomplaining about their parents ’ not understanding them.consequently, the so-called generation gap comes into being. in my opinion, 。