江苏专转本英语作文评分标准及范文模板.doc

作文评分标准2 分 — 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误5 分 — 基本切题表达思想不清楚，连贯性差有较多的严重语言错误8 分 — 基本切题有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误11 分— 切题表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误14 分— 切题表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错字数不足应酌情扣分：Part One 背诵范文1．观点类作文对命运的两种看法自己的观点结论：命运掌握在自己的手中 My View on Fate(命运)Different people have different views on fate. Some people think that fate is predestined (注定)and nobody can change it, while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe all men are born equal and nobody is destined(adj. 注定的；命定的；去往…的v. 注定（destine 的过去式和过去分词）) to always succeed or fail in his life. For another, if a person is diligent(adj. 勤勉的；用功的，费尽心血的) and determined, he will realize his dream no matter how poor, humble or unlucky he may be. Just think of Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother and got seriously injured himself.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, “ Everybody is the architect of his own fortune.”2．利弊类家教的好处家教的坏处结论 Advantages and Disadvantages of Family TutoringRecently more and more people begin to engage family tutors for their children. They argue that family tutoring brings several advantages. First, family tutoring can help weak students to keep up with others in class. Second, the society is developing at a high speed and family tutoring can help the child make preparations for the future competition.Family tutoring also brings many problems. Firstly, students may not welcome family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. Secondly, the quality of the teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. Finally, the student may depend too much on family tutoring and overlook learning at school.From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the disadvantages are more obvious. Teachers and parents should help students improve efficiency both in and out of class – experience tells us that the best students need no family tutoring. 3．办法类毕业生关注找工作问题找工作的三个解决办法总结How to Get a Job After GraduationThe past decade has witnessed a more and more fierce competition in the job market. Consequently students voice growing concern over how to get a job after graduation. To this problem, in my mind, there are at least the following approaches.First of all, the main approach is to take part in grand recruiting fairs in big cities. The students hands in his resume and waits for the notice of an interview. Secondly, the student can go over the advertisements on newspapers, TV or the Internet to find a satisfactory job. Of course, he should also wait for replay after sending out applications. Finally, going directly to an ideal company is a brave behavior, which sounds pretty rare among the job hunters.Personally, I would like to choose the second method in my own practice. On the one hand, I don’t want to have a try at those companies which have not advertised in the mass media. The success rate is so rare that I cannot afford the time and energy. On the other hand, I would not like to go to those crowded recruiting fairs, which often provide only poor-paying posts which are neither challenging nor promising. As long as I am sure of making sufficient preparations and distinguishing myself during interviews, it is out of question for me to get the ideal job which I have been dreaming of.4．时政类奥运将在北京召开奥运对中国的巨大影响作为大学生我们能为奥运做什么Beijing Olympics and IThe Olympics Games will be held in Beijing on August 8, 2008. All the Chinese feel very proud of this great event. As the historic sports meeting, Beijing Olympics will not only bring along splendid sport competitions, but also offer golden opportunities for the development of China.To start with, Beijing Olympics will great boost China’s economic development. According to experts, the Olympic Games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. More importantly, Beijing Olympics will greatly enhance our international influence. During the games, large numbers of tourists will visit China and experience Chinese culture, thus improving the communication between Chinese people and people from all over the world.As college students, we should contribute our share to this historic event. For example, we can carry out Olympic education among citizens, familiarizing them with Olympic spirits and Olympic knowledge.5. 应用类-通知An English speech contest sponsored by the University English Club will be held on May 4th at the university auditorium to memorize the 86th anniversary of the May 4th Movement. Any of full-time student in this university is entitled to take part in the speech. The student interested in the activity is。