托福写作范文分析之如何写好例子丰富文段-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料托福写作范文分析之如何写好例子丰富文段-智课教育旗下智课教育在托福写作考试中，该怎样用例子来丰富自己的文段呢？本次智课 教育小编就来和大家分享一下托福写作范文分析！希望可以帮助考生备 考！ 托福写作范文分析 本节课主要分为四部分，分别是上节课内容的回顾，重点段落分析 ，总结和素材，现在就跟着智课教育小编一起来看看托福写作范文分析 吧!希望可以帮助考生在考试中取得高分! 一.回顾 1.单词 Stimulate，professional，distinction，admire，prodigious， nature，inspire 2.短语 what's more，learn from，have an amiable position， be eager to，make friends with ，in different finance situation，regardless of，educational backgrounds, social statuses, open mind, in different ways 3.句式Take my uncle as an example My uncle and his friends inspire each other in different ways, which could not have happened were they on the same level financially. 二.重点段落分析 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Two people can be good friends even if one has more money than the other. 1.处理上节课问题 What else should be included? 我们可以回扣论点，由理你引出的结论。

In this example, the financial gap has evidently(显然，明显地) fostered(培养，养育，与enhance是同义词) their friendships rather than destroy them. ①Evidently：与obviously，clearly，apparently，patently，pl ain是同义词这句话可以转述为In this example, it is obvious that financial gap has fostered their friendships rather than destroy them. ②rather than：是…而不是;与其…不如 These are political rather than social matters. The sweater she bought was beautiful rather than cheap. She enjoys singing rather than dancing. 注：并列的成分一致，并列成分可以是 名词、代词、形容词、介词 (短语)、动名词、分句、不定式、动词等。

would rather…than.宁愿…而不愿 She would rather die than lose the children. 2.Paragraph4Taking what have been discussed above into account,(结束段的标志) friendship is as(adj.) beautiful as (n.) sunlight, which can dispel(驱散，驱逐) dark clouds, bring about hope and warm people's hearts. The friendship between gentlemen is as pure as water, and no true friendship can be destroyed by disputes over money. ①take…into account把….考虑逬去，与take account of, take...into consideration， think about是同义词 ②Taking what have been discussed above into account,可以与Based on what have been discussed above into account….,或者是in sum，in a word ③as…as像…一样的，as busy as a bee 第一个as为副词，后接形容词或者副词;第二个as用作介词(后接名 词或代词) 或者连词(后接从句)She cooks as(副词) well as(连词) her mother does He doesn’t study as hard as his brother注：在否定句中，第一个as可用so，He doesn't study so hard as his brother ③dispel 的近义词是disperse, drive away ...which can disperse dark clouds.. The police dispersed the crowd. How can I drive away these feelings of sadness? ④bring about：带来，引起 The doctors couldn’t bring about a real cure. ⑤warm adj.温暖的;热情的 vi.同情;激动;变温暖 vt.使...兴奋;使…温暖;使...感兴趣 n.取暖;加热 ⑥dispute vt辩论;怀疑;阻止;抗拒 ;Vi.争论; n.辩论;争吵 Dispute over就…进行辩论 They dispute over the need for new taxes. 三.总结 Two people can be good friends even if one has more money than the other. 表明观点：agree 论点1 :金钱并不是友谊的基础 论点2 :不同经济条件下朋友互相学习，并能增进友谊结论：agree 单词: Evidently，foster，dispel ，warm 短语： rather than，as…as... ，bring about 句式： Taking what have been discussed above into account 四.素材 Paragraph2：Marx and Engels-bosom friends-Money is not the basis of true friendship. Paragraph3: my uncle and his rich learn from friends-learn from each otherFriends in different finance situation can learn from each other, thus stimulating their friendship. 第二段是名人事例，第三段是身边人的例子，那么例子该怎么用呢 ? 关于名人与身边的亲朋好友均可，但是关于名人的例子需要准确度 ，关于身边的亲朋好友的例子要客观性 注：范文阅读时，学习积累并灵活运用“别人“的例子 Marx and Engels- bosom friends 适用题目： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People with different interests and personalities cannot be friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 观点：agreeFirst of all, money is not the basis of true friendship.(此处可删去) As long as two people have the same hobbies, cherish the same ideals or follow the same path, then they will likely turn to be friends. 即此处可以改写为First of all, as long as two people have the same hobbies, cherish the same ideals or follow the same path, then they will likely turn to be friends. It is widely known that Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels were bosom friends, in spite the fact that there was a considerable financial gap between them. Although Marx lived a poverty- stricken life, plagued with cold, hunger, and debts, Engels never hesitated to try his best to help Marx out of his financial embarrassment (因为题目中并不存在关于金钱的讨论，所以这一句话可以删去)and they fought all their lives for a same goal as brothers, shoulder toshoulder.(背景介绍他们同住在伦敦时，每天下午，恩格斯总要到马克 思家里去，他们讨论各种政治事件和科学问题，一连谈上好几个小时， 各抒己见，滔滔不绝，有时候还进行激烈的争论，天气晴朗的曰子，他们就一起到郊外散步.后来他们住在两个地方，就经常通信彼此交换对政 治事件和意见和研究工作的成果，它们合作了40年，共同创造了伟大的 马克思主义。

在40年里，在向着共同目标的奋斗中，他们建立了伟大的 友谊)因此这句话可以改写为And they fought all their lives for a same goal as brothers, shoulder to shoulder. When they were both in London, they gathered together and discussed the political events and scientific problems. Sometimes their conversations would last for several hours with occasional fierce arguments. After 40 years' cooperation, they brought about the Marxism. It was their goal that joined them together to fight side by side. 以上就是智课教育小编要和大家分享的托福写作范文分析，希望可 以帮助考生提升托福写作能力!。