书面表达中使用复杂结构和高级词汇.ppt
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写作中怎样使用写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇复杂结构和高级词汇 一一. .复杂结构复杂结构: :1.1.使用适当的时态使用适当的时态2.2.适当的语态适当的语态3.3.使用不定式使用不定式4.4.使用过去分词使用过去分词5.5.使用使用V.+ingV.+ing形式形式6.6.使用名词性从使用名词性从句句 7.7.使用状语从句使用状语从句8.8.使用定语从句使用定语从句9.9.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气10.10.使用强调句使用强调句, ,倒装句倒装句, ,感叹句感叹句11.11.使用并列句使用并列句 一、怎样运用复杂结构：一、怎样运用复杂结构：1. 1. 改变时态改变时态Thebellisringingnow.Thebellisringingnow.( (一般一般) )2. 2. 改变语态改变语态PeoplesuggestthattheconferencePeoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(beputoff.(一般一般) )There goes the bell. (高高级级)It is suggested that the conference be put off.((高级高级) ) 3. 3. 使用不定式使用不定式4. 4. 使用过去分词使用过去分词Heissokindthathecanhelpme.Heissokindthathecanhelpme.( (一般一般) )He is so kind as to help me.( (高高级级) )ShewalkedoutoftheroomandmanyShewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(studentsfollowedher.(一般一般) )Followed by many students, she… .( (高级高级) )Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgottenOnceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(.(一般一般) )Once seen, it can … .((高级高级) ) 5. 5. 使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.( (一般一般) )Iftheweatherpermits,I’llcometomorrow.Iftheweatherpermits,I’llcometomorrow.( (一般一般) )On his arriving/ arrival, please give….( (高级高级) )Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow.( (高级高级) )Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.TheyNowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(teach48pupils.(一般一般) )Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils.( (高级高级) ) ItdisappointedeverybodythatheItdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.(didn’tturnup.(一般一般) )Ihappenedtohavemethim.(Ihappenedtohavemethim.(一般一般) )6. 6. 使用名词性从句使用名词性从句The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody.( (高级高级) )It happened that I had met him.( (高级高级) )Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowsTohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(somanythings.(一般一般) )What surprised him is that the girl….( (高级高级) ) 7. 7. 使用状语从句使用状语从句Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(一般一般) )Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo’clock,Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo’clock,youcangoout.(youcangoout.(一般一般) )Themealwasverynice.WeallenjoyedThemealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(itverymuch.(一般一般) )No matter what he says, I won’t believe.( (高级高级) )You can go out on condition that you come back before….( (高级高级) )The meal was so nice that we all….( (高级高级) ) 8. 8. 使用定语从句使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.HerThegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(compositionwaswellwritten.(一般一般) )The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.( (高级高级) )IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(chemistryandcomputeratschool.(一般一般) )The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English….( (高级高级) ) 9. 9. 使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气Theshipdidn’tsinkbecausetherewereTheshipdidn’tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(theeffortsofthecaptain.(一般一般) )Iwasn’tinvitedtotheparty,soIIwasn’tinvitedtotheparty,soIdidn’tattendit.(didn’tattendit.(一般一般) )If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it.( (高级高级) )But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk.( (高级高级) ) 10. 10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.( (一般一般) )It was not until 1920 that regular radio….( (高级高级) )Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.( (高高级级) )ThoughI’mweak,IwillmaketheThoughI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(effort.(一般一般) )How glad we were to see the crops and...!( (高级高级) )WeweregladtoseethecropsandWeweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell.(vegetablesgrowingverywell.(一般一般) ) 11. 11. 使用并列句使用并列句Ifyougothroughthegate,you’llfindIfyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(theentrancetoBearCountry.(一般一般) )Go through the gate, and you’ll find….( (高级高级) )I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus.( (高级高级) )Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchIgotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(theearlybus.(一般一般) )The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.( (高级高级) )Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.( (一般一般) ) 四、怎样运用高级词汇：四、怎样运用高级词汇：Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.( (一般一般) )ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.( (一般一般) )Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneyBecausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(wascomfortable.(一般一般) )The plan turned out to be a failure.( (高级高级) )She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.( (高级高级) )Thanks to the good weather, our journey….( (高级高级) ) At the news of her death,,he went….( (高级高级) )She has trouble in pronouncing the word. .( (高级高级) )Whose turn is it to be on duty today?( (高级高级) )Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpaleWhenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(withsorrow.(一般一般) )Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.( (一般一般) )Whowillbeondutytoday?(Whowillbeondutytoday?(一般一般) )怎样运用高级词汇：怎样运用高级词汇： Shedoesn’tlikesports.Shedoesn’tlikesports.She cares nothing for sports.Wehadtogohome.Wehadtogohome.What we had to do was go home. 五、常见语法错误分析：五、常见语法错误分析：1. 1. 句子缺谓语句子缺谓语1) The building like a match box.2)He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field.2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.2.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。
主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误 3.3.时态错误时态错误4.4.词性混用词性混用 1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.2) What are you doing this time yesterday?1) She enjoys study English.2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know. 5.5.介词误用介词误用6.6.冠词误用冠词误用1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize.2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.3) Don’t read under the sun.1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion.3) The history is actually a very interesting subject. 7.7.名词的数混淆名词的数混淆8.8.动词用法错误动词用法错误1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.2) There is always traffic jam.1) Where are you come from?2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.3) He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.4) The accident was happened in 1999. 9.9.习惯用法错误习惯用法错误1) The actor in this movie is very beautiful.2) I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next. 六、学会使用恰当的关联词：六、学会使用恰当的关联词：1. 1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系and，，both…and, as well as, together with, neither…nor, also, not only…but also, either…or, as well.2. 2. 表示转折关系表示转折关系but, yet, however, nevertheless (然然而而), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all. 3. 3. 表示对比关系表示对比关系4. 4. 表示因果关系表示因果关系on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same timeso, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account (理由理由) of. 5. 5. 表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系6. 6. 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系shortly afterwards, first, second…, then, next, finally, for one thing, for another, in the end, eventually(最后最后, 终终于于) besides, furthermore (此外此外), what’s more, in addition, moreover (而且而且), worse still, to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all 7. 7. 表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系8. 8. 表示结论表示结论namely (也就是也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to thisin short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally 七、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：七、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：通知：通知：开头语开头语: : 结束语结束语: :Attention, please.May I have your attention, please?I have an announcement to make.Don’t forget the time and the address.I’m sure you will have a lot of fun.That’s all, thank you. 欢迎词：欢迎词：开头语开头语: : 结束语结束语: :Welcome to …Now let me tell you something about …I’m going to give you a detailed description of…Let me show you around…I’m sure you’ll have a good trip.That’s all, thank you. 写信：写信：开头语开头语: : 结束语结束语: :I’m glad to hear from you.I’m writing to tell you something about…How are you getting along with your…?I really don’t know how to thank you for…Please give my best regards to... Remember me to your parents.I’m looking forward to hearng from you soon.Best wishes. 。
