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四级经典范文及专家点评:暑期打工.docx

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    • 四级经典范文及专家点评:暑期打工走进高校,意味着从学生向社会人过渡的起先怎样在学习的同时增加自己的阅历,丰富生活,是很多高校生面临的问题假期打工成为了很多人的选择 Summer Job   The summer job is a tradition among students of American universities. Long before the end of the school year, students begin their search for jobs during vacation (June, July, and August). Students send letters to businesses, talk to employers about job opportunities during the summer, and ask friends and relatives to be on the lookout for jobs for them.① By June the students have usually solved the problem and begin to make preparations for leaving their books to enter the business world.②  Reasons for wanting a summer job are different from student to student. Some work to help pay their school expenses; others work to gain experience in their chosen professions; still others work just for the fun of it.  Typist, construction worker, salesman, lifeguard, and waiter — these are some of the more common jobs that students try to find during the summer months. But many young people find work that is a little more unusual.  [158 words]  行文点评  本文是一篇介绍summer job的文章。

      第一段重点描述高校生找工作的过程,作者在首段首句明确提出了文章的主题:暑期打工进而又指出学生找寻打工机会的不同方式,或自己投信找寻,或向同学、亲友寻求帮助其次段主要说明学生暑期打工的动机最终一段列举了学生打工中常常选择的职业  整篇文章虽然短小,但介绍全面第一段中long before the end of the school year, during the summer, by June等几个时间状语的运用使文章结构紧凑,其次段中三个排比句的运用 (some …; others…; still others),一挥而就  好文妙译暑期打工  暑期打工是美国高校生的一种传统在学年结束很早以前,学生们就起先找寻假期中(六月、七月、和八月)的工作了学生们寄信给一些公司,向老板询问暑期工作的机会,或是让亲戚、挚友帮忙打探有没有合适他们的工作到了六月,这个问题通常已经搞定,学生们也在打算着离开书本,进入工作的世界了  学生想要暑期打工的缘由各不相同有些人为了筹集学费而工作,一些人打工是为自己选择的职业积累阅历,还有些人打工仅仅是因为觉得好玩而已  打字员、建筑工人、推销员、救生员、服务生——这些都是学生在暑假几个月中通常选择的工作。

      当然,也有许多年轻人能够找到特殊一些的工作  词汇斟酌  lifeguard n. 救生员  佳句临摹  ①on the lookout for找寻,搜寻  The expedition went far away to the island on the lookout for the gold.探险队远赴小岛去找寻黄金  ②make preparations for为…做打算  Jane is making preparations for her marriage.简正在筹备她的婚礼  思如泉涌  The best preparation for good work tomorrow is to do good work today.为把明天的工作做好,的打算是把今日的工作做好  Part-time jobs not only enable students to cultivate their abilities, but also help them apply their knowledge to practice.打工不仅使学生们发掘了自己的潜力,也有助于他们学以致用  After-class work may distract the students’ attention from their studies.学生们会因为打工而分散了对学业的留意力。

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