人教版初中八年级英语上册期末复习书面表达30题.docx

2023-2024学年 书面表达30题（解析版）<1>寒假将至，英语老师要求每个同学写一篇寒假计划，请根据以下要点提示，以“My plan for the winter holiday”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文要点提示：1. 好好休息和放松；2. 读一些好书；3. 看望爷爷奶奶，帮父母做家务（housework）；4. 补充一两点有关想法写作要求：1. 必须包含所提示的所有要点，并补充一点有关想法；2. 词数不少于70，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息My plan for the winter holidayThe winter holiday is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】                                                                     My plans for the winter holiday      The winter holiday is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do. It’s my pleasure to share my holiday plans with you.      First of all, I want to have a good rest, because I can become more energetic after resting. Therefore, I’m going to a park with my friends to get relaxed. Besides, I plan to visit my grandparents. I miss them and they’ll be very happy to see me. I’ll also help my parents do some housework at home. What’s more, I intend to read some good books so that I can broaden my horizons. At last, I plan to do exercise regularly in order to keep fit.      I’m sure I’ll have a good holiday.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇议论文；②时态：主要为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中需要补充的相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图引出“我的寒假计划”这个话题第二步，具体阐述写作内容从信息提示中“休息、读书、看望爷爷奶奶、帮父母做家务等”几个重点方面进行计划，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点第三步，书写结语表达“我相信我会度过一个愉快的假期”[亮点词汇]①energetic有能量的②regularly定期地③broaden my horizons开拓视野[高分句型]①It’s my pleasure to share my holiday plans with you.（it作形式主语）②I intend to read some good books so that I can broaden my horizons.（so that引导目的状语从句）③I want to have a good rest, because I can become more energetic after resting. （because引导原因状语从句）<2>近来，某校针对中学生使用互联网情况做了一项调查请根据图片内容，向大家说明下调查情况，并对此提出有关如何正确使用互联网的建议。

要求: 1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，可适当发挥；2. 不少于 80 词； 3. 注意书写规范，大小写及标点How to use the Internet correctly? 1. spend less time on games2. protect your personal (个人的) information3. …The InternetThe Internet is changing the world. It is becoming an important part of our lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】The Internet      The Internet is changing the world. It is becoming an important part of our lives. There is a survey about how students use the Internet. The result is as follows.      About 55% of students prefer to play games on the Internet. And 30% of students choose to chat online. Only 8% of students use the Internet to study. The rest of students do something else online. From the result above, many students use the Internet incorrectly. Therefore, it’s of great importance to use the Internet in the right way. At first, we should spend less time on games, because it is meaningless and bad for our eyes. Besides, we are expected to protect our personal Information instead of giving it away to others online. As for students, we are supposed to get the latest information and useful learning materials on the Internet.       All in all, I hope every student can use the Internet in a right way and make good use of it.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇议论文；②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“说明调查情况”和省略处需要补充相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图表达出“网络的重要性”以及引出“调查结果”这个话题第二步，具体阐述写作内容从信息提示中“说明调查情况和如何正确使用互联网等”重点方面进行描述和提出建议第三步，书写结语表达“希望每个学生都能正确科学地使用互联网”[亮点词汇]①prefer to do sth偏爱做某事②meaningless没有意义的③give away泄露[高分句型]①I hope every student can use the Internet in a right way and make good use of it.（宾语从句）②it’s of great importance to。