2025届高考英语读后续写专题之个人成长类滑冰场上的挫折-梦想与失败交织的时刻讲义.docx

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事    That day, I was going to skate a clean freestyle program for the first time in a year. I determined to land the axel (前外一周半跳) in competition.“I can make it!” I thought as I skated to the center ice. When my music sounded, I started my program with a circular step and a bright smile, followed by a beautiful combination spin. Flying camel, sit spin, layback spin. Perfection. The jump! The axel!I could do it when I practiced off-ice, but I’d only landed it on-ice approximately fourteen times in my entire life. So I was a little nervous. I’d leave it out if I could, but my Olympic dreams depended on it. My coach, Geena, put it early in my program so I could do it while my legs were not tired. Taking a deep breath, “I can succeed!” I thought.I was on the right back outside edge of my skate blade (冰刀), ready to turn forward and launch into the axel. My nerves were back, working against me. “I can do this!” I thought. I stepped into takeoff and I did… a waltz jump (半周跳). It is a jump I’d been doing since I was pretty young. It is only one-half a rotation (旋转) instead of the one and one-half that I need for the axel.I glimpsed Coach Geena’s questioning eyebrow as I glided past the door and imagined the disappointed looks on my parents’ faces. “It’s not over,” I reasoned to myself, glancing into the bleachers (露天座位). “I’d just replace the next jump with the axel.”However, it didn’t work out the way I’d hoped. I fell, and I kept falling. Never one to give up, I replaced every jump in my program with the axel, but I didn’t land one. I spent so much time on the ice that it’s like I was making sure the ice was clean for the next skater. The two minutes, fifteen seconds of my program felt like an age. By the time I was done, my dress was soaked through and I was seven seconds behind my music, so I finished skating to silence.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

As I skated toward the exit, I felt everyone was looking at me with pity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The performance going on, I rose up from the bleachers, determined to go home but my parents held me up.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意我准备在比赛中完成一次干净利落的自由滑节目，尤其是要完成对我的奥运梦想至关重要的阿克塞尔跳。

尽管我在冰下练习时能完成，但在冰上只成功过 14 次，所以有些紧张比赛中，我在做阿克塞尔跳时失误成了半周跳，之后我试图在后续动作中弥补，但一次次摔倒，最终我的节目超时且表现糟糕，在一片寂静中结束了表演五要素分析· 人物：“我”、教练吉娜、我的父母和观众· 时间：比赛期间· 地点：滑冰比赛场地· 起因：我要在比赛中完成包含阿克塞尔跳的自由滑节目· 经过：比赛中阿克塞尔跳失误，多次尝试仍失败，节目混乱· 结果：节目以失败告终几处伏笔及续写中的回应· 伏笔：我担心父母失望和教练的反应回应：第一段续写中我感受到周围人的怜悯目光，内心痛苦，对应之前的担忧· 伏笔：我对奥运梦想的执着和不放弃的精神回应：第二段续写父母和教练的鼓励，让我重新振作，为继续追求梦想铺垫续写要点第一段· 情感线：极度的羞愧、沮丧，感觉自己成为众人怜悯的对象，对自己的表现深感失望· 故事线：描述我在走向出口时承受的心理压力，周围人的目光如何加重我的负面情绪第二段· 情感线：从低落中得到些许慰藉，感受到来自家人和教练的温暖与支持· 故事线：父母和教练阻止我离开，他们的鼓励话语和拥抱给我力量主旨升华句1. Failure is not the end, but a new beginning of the journey to success.2. In the face of setbacks, the support of loved ones is the light that guides us through the darkness.3. Every stumble on the path to our dreams is an opportunity to rise stronger.4. True champions are not those who never fall, but those who keep getting up with courage.5. The value of a dream lies not only in achieving it, but also in the perseverance we show during the pursuit.写作示范第一篇As I skated toward the exit, I felt everyone was looking at me with pity. Their stares burned into me, making my cheeks flush with humiliation. I wanted to disappear. The ice that I usually loved so much now seemed like a cruel stage for my failure. I couldn't wait to get away from those eyes.The performance going on, I rose up from the bleachers, determined to go home but my parents held me up. They told me they saw my efforts and that this was just a small bump. Coach Geena nodded, saying that even champions have off days. Their words started to seep into my heart, making me feel a little less alone in my failure.第二篇As I skated toward the exit, I felt everyone was looking at me with pity. I felt like a fallen star, the spotlight now an unbearable weight. My hands trembled as I tried to hold back the tears. Each step was heavy, as if the ice was trying to hold me back in this moment of shame.The performance going on, I rose up from the bleachers, determined to go home but my parents held me up. Their arms were like a safe haven. They said they loved me regardless of the result. Coach Geena said that failure is the mother of success. Their comfort gave me the strength to face my failure.第三篇As I skated toward the exit, I felt everyone was looking at me with pity. The silence around me was deafening, amplifying my sense of failure. I could see the disappointment in the eyes of some, and it cut。