
奶粉生产中上_下排风塔的效果比较.doc
3页Owing to the fierce competion in job market, certificate craze becomes a tendency on campus. For example many undergraduates participate in all kinds of certificates, such as COMPUTER RANK, CET4, CET6 and even BEC LEVEL CERTIFICATE. During their campus life, they are exhausted to prepare for these exams. Several reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Initially, many companies place much emphasis on certificates, by which the capability of graduates can be measured to some extent,leading to the craze of certificate. Second, due to the fierce competition of job market, the graduates are forced to obtain all kinds of certificates for acquiring the ideal job in the limited occupations. Certificate craze, from my perspective, can be solved by both our society and our individuals. Companies should attach much importance on the real capacity of graduates instead of certificates. After all, certificate can not completely prove the capacity of graduates. Meanwhile,the graduates are expected to equip themselves with solid knowledge and take more practice in their study field. 分析:第一段:背景+举例 + 过渡句第一句:因为职场的激烈竞争,热衷考证书变成大学校园的普遍趋势第二句:举例子 计算机等级证 cet4 cet6 甚至 BEC等级证书等第三句:学生在大学中疲于奔命的准备各种各样的考试。
第二段:原因分析段落主题句+第一个原因 +第二个原因第一句:有如下几个原因导致了这种现象第二句:第一,很多公司用证书来估量学生的能力,这是学生疯狂追求证书的主要原因第三句:第二,在职场激烈竞争的情况下,为了获得理想工作,学生不得不去考各种证 第三段:我的观点---只有社会和个人的共同努力才能解决这个问题第一句:主题句第二句:社会应该更多注重学生的真实能力而不是证书,毕竟证书并不能完全证明学生的能力第三句:学生应该更加重视扎实知识和实践的积嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎个嘎嘎嘎嘎2008.06六级写作真题范文胡平原创!!(2011-06-03 09:50:51) 转载标签: 杂谈Is a test of spoken English necessary? 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是…… 2. 也有人持不同的意见,…… 3. 我的看法和打算• Some people are in favor of spoken English test owing to the fact that English is a language, whose prime function is to communicate with others. To begin with, with the globalization of economy, spoken English is the basic requirement in college students’ job hunting of western enterprises. Furthermore, if spoken English test becomes a must, much emphasis is expected to spoken English by public instead of emphasis on dead English such as reading or writing. Others, while, argue that spoken English test is unnecessary due to the overburden of students. At the same time, spoken English, as a communication skill,is a kind of survival English. As long as the counterpart can understand what the one has expressed, fluency is secondary. In addition,body language can be added to the communication. Spoken English test,from my perspective,should be an optional examination rather than a compulsory one. If some students need it to find an ideal job, the test can be available.第一段:一些人赞成3句话 第一句:一些人赞成是因为英语作为一种语言,交流才是其真正的目的。
第二句:随着经济全球化,口语成为进入外资企业的基本要求 第三句:如果口语考试成为一种必须,公众会更加重视口语,而不是重视哑巴英语,比如阅读和写作 第二段:另一些人反对4句 第一句:因为学生负担太重,不能再增加额外的考试 第二句:口语作为一种交流手段只是生存英语 第三句:只要对方听得懂,流畅性是次要的 第四句:何况我们在交流中还可以加入身体语言 第三段:我的观点两句 第一句:在我看来口语考试应该是可选,而不是必须 第二句:如果有学生需要考试结果来找好工作的话,他可以参加这类考试潜在意:不需要的则可以不考)总评:Some…others…I 类型的文章很好写。
