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托福高分满分作文必备结构和语言托福高分满分作文必备结构和语言2大要点详细分析 托福写作体现文章结构5要素分析 按题材划分，独立任务属于争论文，而论点、理由、论据、结论和论证是争论文的五个要素详细来说，“论点”是文章的核心，“理由”是论点成立的依据，两者构成因果关系;“论据”是对理由的详细说明，多为事例;“结论”是对观点的重申，两者一脉相承、头尾呼应;而整个写作过程就是一个“论证”的过程 要想作文得高分，这五要素就必需四平八稳，如此才能写出结构严谨、条理清楚的高分作文 托福写作提升语言功底技巧讲解 一篇高分作文在语言上，首先要保证语法正确，用词恰当，这样才能精确达意在此基础上可以追求更多样、高级的表达例如，文章开头要表现“社会发展快速，人们的生活发生了天翻地覆的改变”这一含义，最常见的表达为： Sample 1: Our society develops quickly, and people’s life has changed greatly. Sample 2: With the rapid development of society, enormous change has happened in people’s life. Sample 3: As society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life. 通过三个句子对比可知，其中“快速”的三种表达方式，quickly 最为平淡，rapid 居中，remarkable 最佳。

同样的，要表达“天翻地覆”的含义，tremendous 就要比 great 或者 enormous 好的多，其他替换的词还有 considerable，drastic，significant 等等 托福写作语言的优化须要不断的积累和练习，多记多练，不断扩充自己的语料库，唯有如此，文章才会写的越来越美丽，而许多考生之所以语言不到位，往往是因为平常不练笔，不积累语料，想单纯依靠“困难单词，黄金句型”就拿高分的偷懒备考思路所导致的，这种错误的备考观点请大家肯定要刚好改正 托福考试作文独立写作范文：要想取得胜利必需接受新观点 To be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind. (160618大陆) 6月18日托福独立写作点睛： 题目大意：要想取得胜利，人们必需要接受新的观点并且情愿变更自己原有的观点此题目选择同意比较好写，在去想分论点时，有两种方式可以用：第一种就是去想why, 理由一：接受新的观点可以更好地适应改变的环境;理由二，接受新的观点可以与别人建立良好的关系。

其次种去拆分举例，拆分职业： 第一种职业IT 行业的人;其次种职业老师 6月18日托福写作真题-独立写作 此次试题出现了A,B卷 A: A/D: To be a successful person, one must open up to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind. B: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people should be open to new ideas and change his or her mind to be successful. A卷题目是肯定词类话题;B卷题目为建议类话题/二选一话题). 留意区分处理这两类题目 以A卷题目为例：处理此类文章须要弱化肯定词，并给出其他合理的方式关于此题，可以按以下方式组织文章：1)开头段-主题段一(去肯定词做让步段处理，写我方的好处)-主题段二(要胜利的因素1)-主题段三(要胜利的因素2)-结尾段;2)开头段-主题段一(优点一)-主题段二(优点二)-主题段三(优点三)-结尾段(小让步+综合其他可以使人胜利的因素)。

范文参考一: Under the current society full of intense competitions, how to achieve success has never failed to arouse deep concern and interest among the general public. Thereof, a good deal of accomplished businessmen and elites are strong believers of the claim that to be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind.Towards such a complicated issue, I am in favor of the above claim for the following reasons. In the first place, being receptive to new ideas can help people to better adapt to the constantly changing environment and thus become successful. As is common sense, no matter what fields or areas you are engaged in, change has become the perpetual topic, which means that what you held firmly onto before may become outdated and even misleading overnight. In other words, only those people with open mind towards new things can keep pace with the changes of time and are more likely to achieve success. By contrast, rejecting any new ideas and never changing one's mind, people will be gradually surpassed or even replaced by other competitors. A good case in point is the collapse of Nokia Company, the once most famous cell phone brand. On account of showing no acceptance to the new operating system Android, the Nokia has announced bankruptcy and has been acquired by Microsoft Company. The same logic can apply to any individuals who are stubborn. Besides that, embracing new ideas can help people to build harmonious rapport with more people, leading to the higher likelihood of becoming successful. More scrutiny has made it conspicuous that an attitude of open-mindedness is strongly correlated to one's popularity among others, especially in a work team. The underlying reason is that anyone who has a willingness to listen to new thoughts tends to leave a good impression and thereof gains help or assistance from others when faced with troubles in the path to success. Also, being open-minded helps you work through interpersonal or intra-team conflicts that arise when people work in close quarters. By contrast, insisting on one' own view stubbornly usually not only build a barrier for establishing the friendship but also serves as the origin of quarrel or conflicts with other people. Put it another way, people without a spirit of listening and cooperation have difficulty in completing any projects, let alone, become successful. Indeed, accepting new ideas may make people feel uncomfortable, because they are forced to get out their comfort zone. However, the above reasoning does not bear deep analysis. To illustrate, it is an indisputable fact that success relies on nothing but innovation driven by constantly taking in original and creative ideas and thoughts. Consequently, factoring what has been mentioned above, we can conclude that showing acceptance to new ideas and changing one's mind accordingly are of great necessity for the sake of achieving success. 写作参考二: Everyone is longing for success; therefore, everyone eagerly searches for every method to reach that end. Having an inclusive and open would defini。