英语书面表达之漫画写作[1].ppt

英语书面表达之漫画写作§ 2010年江苏高考作文新增图画型作 文，这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题 的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐考生 应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇， 不容易得到高分此类作文首先要描述 图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题 ，最后联系实际发表自己的观点漫画作文（议论类）攻略：读图，解意，谋篇1. 读图 1）. 漫画的题目 眼睛 2）. 漫画的画面 细节 3）. 漫画的文字 观点 4）. 漫画的夸张 寓意2. 解意 1）. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 ２）. 联系生活，明晰主旨 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要 信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！ 3. 谋篇（3 parts:） 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenonSome usefull sentence structures: Part 1 Describe the picture The picture is talking about/shows… The picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing… The picture above is about … …Let’s look at the picture above/first.Part 2 Interpret the picture It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… The picture indicate that we… Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that… This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…Part 3 Give your opinions I think/believe that As far as I’m concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, …should… It is better/advisable to… I consider it necessary…PartC Polish up your article! 1. To use linking words if necessary 表示平行、对等或选择关系and, as well as, together with, not only…but also... 表示转折关系but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand... 表示因果关系so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间顺序关系first, second…,then, next, finally, for one thing ...for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on 表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion2. To use complicated structures if possible Part D 注意 1. 保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 ２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 1)误解图意 大忌！ 2)企图幽默 可笑！ 3)不明寓意 白写！ 4)中心不明 混乱！ ３. 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） ４. 结尾要精辟！！Conclusion: 一篇好的英语漫画作文: 仔细审题, 准确立义, 规范行文, 整洁书写注意：1 ）仔细品味图中文字的幽默 、无奈，要适当发挥想象，不要做简 单描述。

2 ）词数150 左右§ To most of the parents , it is no easy job to keep their children away from the personal computer. § Nearly all parents are thinking of the most effective ways to make the Internet safer for their children . Their solutions are as follows . Some of them think advanced hardware can be equipped into computers for network security while some parents prefer security software available on the Internet．If these don’t work , they will cover the screen with underwear to protect their children from harmful information.§ Nowadays it is well known that teenager network security has become so serious that the whole society focuses on it . In my opinion ，much attention should be paid to this issue . As parents , they are supposed to communicate with their children to help them make good use of the Internet with their study. § Additionally, it is our government’s responsibilities to take actions to create a greener Internet environment. As for ourselves , we should build up strong self-awareness . It is important for us to concentrate on the useful information rather than computer games and so on . If only I could keep a real bird!下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。

请你根据对 下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这 种现象，说明其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的 看法 § Nowadays, human beings are faced with an embarrassing situation. § In the cartoon, we can see a man talking to a paper bird kept in his cage and beside him is a vast desert dotted with endless tree roots. Obviously, birds have lost their homes as people have cut down all the trees. As a result, humans have lost their animal friends. § The scene may seem ridiculous and unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the future if we go on developing economy regardless of the§ damage caused to the environment. Now in some places, trees have been cut down without limits. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years and many species will die out. It is really a terrible thing. § Therefore, we should realize the importance of environmental protection and live in harmony with our animal friends. 随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。

三鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注：商家的社会责任感与企 业道德，人们健康的相关法律保证 根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文可以切合题意有所发 挥短文首句已给出，不记入总词数§ As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying in vain to make excuses for the misconduct. After careful consideration, we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attention to the lack of social responsibility and business ethics. § With the change of people’s ideology, people take it for granted that we make a fortune. Driven by the pursuit of profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providing§ the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in point is “Sanlu milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical. As a result。