英语写作常见语法错误分析课件.ppt

英语写作常见错误英语写作常见错误1010203概况三点击此处输入相关文本内容整体概况概况一点击此处输入相关文本内容概况二点击此处输入相关文本内容2 1句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整 或或句子成分多余句子成分多余 2 词性误用词性误用 3主谓不一致主谓不一致 4根据中文逐字硬译根据中文逐字硬译35. 名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用6.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆7 .动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当8. 词组搭配错误词组搭配错误9综合性语言错误综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态，有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误4 1句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生5例1There are large number of people die from the disasters. 改为1：There are a large number of people who die from the disasters. 改为2：There are a large number of people dying from the disasters. 改为3：A large number of people die from the disasters. 6例2There is a fire happened / broke out. There was occurred a fire in Honghua Hotel.改为：A fire happened / broke out / occurred. 7例3She learn knowledge depend on herself. 改为： She learns knowledge by herself. 8例4The driver of the red car was died on the spot. 改为：The driver of the red car died on the spot. 9例5Helping others we also know the significance of life. 改为： We also realize the significance of life through helping others. 10例6The public service advertisement catch everyones eyes, enable us pay more attention about our lives and societies. 改为：The public service advertisements catch everyones eyes, which enables us to pay more attention about our lives and societies. 11例7The aging of population bring some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors feel lonely and so on. 改为： The aging of population brings about some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors sense of loneliness and so on. 12例8Children take care of the seniors should meet their material needs, but this is not enough, concerning their spiritual needs is more important. 改为： When it comes to taking care of the seniors , children should meet their spiritual needs as well as material needs.13例9When your opportunity coming, you attain success will be easier. 改为： When your opportunity comes, it will be easier for you to attain success. 142 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech) “词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等例Its likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.改为1： You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.15 改为2： Its likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent. 改为3： It is likely that you are on the way to success if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.16例2You cant success without your efforts.改为1：You cant succeed without your efforts.改为2：You cant obtain success without your efforts.改为3：You cant become successful without your efforts.17改为4： Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.18例3As the development of science and technology,-改为：With the development of science and technology,- / As the science and technology develop -19例4I usually do some public services for free, trying my best to service for the public.改为： I usually do some public services for free, trying my best to serve the public.20例5 The public service advertisement is benefit to us.改为1: The public service advertisement is beneficial to us. 改为2: The public service advertisement benefits us.改为3：The public service advertisement is of great benefit to us. 21改为4: We benefits a lot from the public service advertisement. 22例6Some seniors were died because of without their childrens support.改为：Some seniors died for lack of their childrens support. 23例7The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.改为：The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. 24例8The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.改为： The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany our parents chatting . 25例9With the rapid development of economic, the conditions of our life is improving.改为： With the rapid development of economy, the conditions of our life are improving.26例10They need economical concerned , but also mental concerned.改为： They need not only financial support, but also emotional support .27例11With the development of the mordern social, more and more families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the sum of the seniors has been increase quickly.改为： With the development of the modern society, an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the rapid increase of the sum of the seniors. cause sth. cause sb. to do sth.28例12The fire was because of the wrong of electricity.改为： The fire was due to electric fault.29例13The cause of the fire includes peoples careless and dry weather.改为： The cause of the fire includes peoples carelessness and dry weather.30例14Although I am not a specialize student of computer, I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever take a part-time summer job as a sellman before.改为： Although I am not a computer major / a student majoring in computer, I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever taken a part-time summer job as a salesman before.31例15Many students choice go to the library。