专题13 读后续写：高级句型训练.docx

专题13读后续写：高级句型训练（解析版）读后续写十大高级表达：复合句类（三大从句）（定语从句、名词性从句、状语 从句），简单句类（非谓语、介词短语、名词化表达、感慨句），特殊句式（倒装句、 强调句），虚拟语气（虚拟句）10.强咖型:It was螭加分 that住语）+谓语….L （Doing…作状语），主♦谓…9.时间状语，主+调2.主+谓….（doing/done…作伴骸状语）读后续写常用句式8.全部8眼句一地点状语或表示运动方 向的副词♦谓（vi）+主（名词）3.主 1+谓….（i2+doing/done...） 有时独立主格成分放在句首：（主 2+doing/done,）主1 十词”・7.（句子副词修饰整句），主+谭“4,主+JHL..,（滑2..・，）and 调 3语动词），主+调…5.（情®主+遍・.（1）非限制性定语从句结构1：格式:,which made/forced/allowed sb to do;,which made/forced/allowed sb 感情词特点：以整个主句为先行词功能1：表达主句导致的原因或结果功能2：表达主句带来的情感影响建议使用位置：续写第一段或第二段的开头例句：就在这时，我们听到了 UnclePaul远处传来的微弱声音，这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。

Just at the moment, we heard the faint voice in the distance from UnclePaul, which allowed us to light the hope returning home.练习：简不得不单独待在森林里度过另一个夜晚，这让她既害怕又懊悔20XX浙江）Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night, which madeher frightened andregretted.结构2：格式:，whichIf I hadn't had a fight with my husband, I would not have lost my way.没有你的帮助，我就不会成功Without your help, I wouldn't have succeeded.再给我一次时机，我就不会让我的父母失望了Given one more chance, I wouldn't let my parents down.再给我一次时机，我会做得更好Given one more chance, I would make it better.再给我一次时机，我会毫不犹豫地和他提供我的食物。

Given one more chance, I would share with him my food without anyhesitation.要不是和汤姆吵架我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险Hadn't quarreled with Tom, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place,confronted with the danger of death.技巧一：用高分句型激活人物“感官”1. At the sight/thought of…，sb…一看到/想到,某人At the thought of spending another night in the wild by herself, she felt herself thrown intoa world of hopelessness. 一想到又要单独一人在野外度过一个晚上，她感觉自己陷入 了完全的绝望当中1) At the sight of the fierce wolf, one of them froze with terror/fright, too frightened to move. 一看到那凶恶的狼，他们中的一个被吓得呆住了，动弹不得。

2. To one's+情感名词，sb… 令某人的是，他/她To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. (20XX年10月浙江卷)令她惊讶的是，她只看到了一片森林，还有远处积雪覆盖 的山顶1) To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. (20XX 年 10 月 浙江卷)令她极其高 兴的是，她还见到了一片浆果林3. With sth+doing/介词短语，sb…(伴随着),某人With tears welling up in his eyes, the little boy slowly fell asleep.小男孩慢慢睡着 了， 眼睛里噫满了泪水1) With joy on their faces, the children were running after each other. 孩子们在互相追 逐，脸上洋溢着喜悦4. Seeing/ Hearing/ Thinking/ Feeling/ Knowing/ Realizing---, sb… 看至lj/听至U/想至U/感到 /得知……，某人……Seeing the helicopter overhead, she began to wave her yellow blouse violently, thinking that she would successfully catch the attention of the people on the plane. ——看至U头顶的 直升飞机，她就开始用力挥舞手中的黄色衬衫，想着要成功吸引机上人员的注意力。

1) Thinking that she had to spend another night in the wild by herself, she felt herself thrown into a world of hopelessness. 一想到又要单独一人在野外度过一个晚上，她感 觉自己陷入了完全的绝望当中2) Realizing that her children had understood the way and the true meaning of helping others, Mrs Meredith felt quite satisfied and proud.意识到孩子们懂得了帮助人的方法 与助人的真正意义，Mrs Meredith很是满足与自豪5.情感类形容词，sb…感到，某人Scared and shocked, Betty hid herself behind the big tree, holding her breath. Betty 既害怕又震惊，躲在大树后边，大气都不敢出1) Ashamed and self-blamed/condemned, I pushed the door open, ready to sincerely apologize to my mother.我感到羞愧又自责，推开门准备真诚地向母亲抱歉。

模拟训练01—读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事There was once a wonderful old man who loved everything: animals , spiders , insects and all sorts of living things.One day while walking through the woods , the old man found a cocoon(茧), He decided to take the cocoon home to watch its beautiful transformation from a little cocoon to a beautiful butterfly.A few days later , the cocoon started to move. It moved frantically! He sat and watched it struggle and struggle for several hours. But it seemed not to make any progress. Then the old man felt sony for the little butterfly inside , and rushed to its aid. With a pair of scissors and gently , he cut a little opening in the cocoon so the butterfly could come out. And then the butterfly came out of its cocoon. It had a swollen body and small , fragile wings , but it never was able to fly.He was quite puzzled. Had he accidentally killed the little butterfly? No, it was still moving a little bit. Maybe it was sick. Then he decided that the best thing he could do for the butterfly was to place it gently back into its cocoon. He did so , and placed a drop of honey on it to seal the cocoon , leaving the butterfly to nestle（处在）in its natural state.The next day he noticed that the cocoon was moving again. It struggled and struggled. Finally the butterfly broke free from its cocoon and stretched its wings out. Its beautiful wings were filed with wonderful colors! It took off! It was flying!The wonderful butterfly flew and flew till it was almost out of the old man's sight. What a joy! He exclaimed! But then he started to think: what did I do wrong by trying to help that beautiful little butterfly out at first?Paragraph 1:Finally the answer came.Paragraph 2:Sometimes struggles are what we need in our life.翻译小练习：1 ,。