2012.12.13李辉老师写作教学分享.docx

难点：1.想到简单、好写的内容；2.造出简单、正确的句子；3.升级；4.地道；重点：一、 内容要简单a)总结常见内容的套话b) 鼓励学生想到简单好写的内容二、 结构要清晰a) 段落结构b) 篇章结构i. 书信ii. 其它应用文iii. 提纲议论文iv. 提纲记叙文v. 看图议论文vi. 看图记叙文vii. 图表作文三、 语言要精彩a) 谴词i. 换词大法（3 种）1. 晚学词2. 短语3. 衍生词ii. 添词大法（4 种）1. 名词前面加多个形容词2. 名词后面加同位语3. 在“助系情之后，实义动词之前”加副词4. 名形动副可并列b) 造句i. 前面添一添（6 个）It is clear that…清It is obvious that…明There is no doubt that…疑No one can deny…否Needless to say,…不用It goes without saying that…走ii. 后面补一补（18 个）“因为，以防，所以，为了，如果，只要，这件事儿”1、 …, for…2、 …, in that….3、 …, for the reason that…4、 …, in case….(…,lest)5、 …, for fear that…6、 …；therefore…7、 …; consequently…8、 …; accordingly,..9、 …; as a result,…10、 … in order to do sth.11、 … so as to do sth.12、 …， in order that…13、 …, so that …14、 … if…15、 …as long as…16、 …, which…17、 so… that…18、 such+a + adj+n…that…If you have really grown up, there is no doubt that you, a little teenager who cannot independently live all by yourself, are supposed to understand, respect and appreciate your kind, patient and considerate mother who gave birth to you, has brought you up and cherishes you the most in the world, so that your family would certainly be completely flooded with endless harmony and happiness, which is undoubtedly beneficial for you happy and healthy growth, in that a harmonious living environment will not only provide you with more confidence but also more encouragement.iii. 中间变一变（9 种）1. 变主语a)物b) 事 Loving you is the meaning of my life.c)It2. 变句式a)Adj 、 advb) Notc)地点d) 强调e)非谓语动词Sue, needless to say, I thank you. First and foremost, there is no doubt that you taught so well that all of us can speak English now. Additionally, it is obvious that we learned a lot; consequently, our confidence has been greatly improved. Last but not least, no one can deny we had a great time together, which we will keep in mind forever.高分作文之道英语解密之术遣词造句之法谋篇布局之要Li Hui is a teacher (teaching English) (in Beijing) (which is the capital) (of China).。