高三英语对比类作文写作指导.ppt

对比类写作训练对比类作文写作指导2006年浙江省高考作文当前不少文学作品被改编成电影有人选 择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下 列要点写一篇英语短文： 1、 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 2、 读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3、 我的看法及理由 注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已 给出（不计入词数） 2、参考词汇： original work 或 book in the original （原著） 想一想：1.分几段来写？2. 每段的内容安排？3. 怎样连接这几段？（过渡，关联词 ）Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to …… than to …… The reason is that …… Besides, …… and it is easier to …… Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that …… Meanwhile, ……Personally, I agree with the second view. I think …… and what’s more, …… In a word, …… 写作框架：点题概括 （第1步）具体对比阐述 （第2步）表达观点 （第3步）1. 点题概括认真审题, 准确理解主题内容, 并用一两句话将主题概括性地导出。

2. 具体对比阐述• 今昔对比的写作要注意突出过去与现在的区别，一般通过对细节的描述展现，同时注意对比关联词的使用• 正反观点对比的写作要注意客观地介绍两方观点，不能只侧重一方而忽略另一方3. 表达观点在前两步的基础上写出自己的观点（有的题目无此要求）经典语句： 1.过去与现在对比 • I used to read the newspaper, but now I prefer to watch TV. • He once knew her, but they are no longer friends now. • Tom liked to collect stamps when he was young, although now he enjoys climbing. • Ten years ago there was only one middle school here, yet now there are five. • We played basketball in the past, while we play football now.2.正反观点对比• We’ve had the discussion about whether… (点题句）• Opinions are divided on the question… On the one hand, …( A 观点） On the other hand, … ( B 观点）• Every thing has two sides. In my opinion, … (收尾句） 1. 表示罗列增加 besides, in addition ……★ 过渡词的恰当使用2. 表示解释说明 for example, for instance……3. 表示时间顺序 firstly, to begin with ……4. 表示转折 however, on the contrary ……5.表示条件 as (so) long as, unless ……6. 表示因果 therefore, as a result (of) ……7. 表示让步 as, even if ……8. 表示强调 indeed no doubt ……9. 表示概括归纳 in a word, in short ……5.表示条件 as (so) long as, unless ……6. 表示因果 therefore, as a result (of) ……7. 表示让步 as, even if ……人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。

请你用英语 写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观 点，并表达自己的看法赞赞同的理由反对对的理由你的看法 • …… • ……………………注意: 1. 文章必须包括表中的所有内容； 2. 词数为100左右参考词汇： online friend (网络朋友), to be cheated ( 上当受骗 ）试一试吧：Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. The Internet helps make many friends. By chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not make friends online. They say making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated online.It is my opinion that students should place study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it among our classmates and other people around us. 1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldn’t go to the concert. (现在分词)2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. (过去分词)(一) 、非谓语动词的使用Being ill in hospital, Susan couldn’t……Followed by his students, the professor ……★ 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力1. He didn’t realize his danger until he was left alone.Not until2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat.Only 3.She is clever but she never works hard.ashe was left alone did he realize …by changing the plants we eat can we save…Clever she is, she never …(二)、倒装句的使用lHe didn’t realize his danger until he was left alone.lThe teacher’s words encouraged her greatly. (三)、强调句的使用It was not until he was left alone that he realized his danger.It was the teacher’s words that encouraged her greatly.1. To our surprise, he refused to take the position.2. I won’t believe what he says. What surprised us was that he refused …No matter what you say, I won’t believe.(四)、从句的使用3.When he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless.The higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt.4. We all know that China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.As is known to all, China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.1. The manager had many problems to solve. He looked worried. (with)2. When he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted.With many problems to solve, the manager looked worried.（五）、介词短语的使用On his arrival home , he found his house freshly painted. ★使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采 1. The tourists had to ask the villagers for help. The tourists had no choice but to ask the villagers for help.2. The car was expensive .I can’t afford it. The car was so expensive that it was beyond my reach.3. I had a good idea. A good idea struck me./ I came up with a good idea. /A good idea occurred to me.May yousucceed In writing。