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考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表 第二段---解释寓意 第三段---给出评论第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注描述图画注意： 第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置 第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述 第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述模式： 在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）第二句----总结① The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。

② The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么第二段第一句----观点的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。

或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ）万能观点：① 图画主题的重要性Nothing can be compared with······is not only necessary , but also indispensable ······remains to be an integral part in···② 图画主题的有害性Nothing is more harmful or damaging.···is not only harmful , but also damaging.···in large measure detrimental.第二句----进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视） (1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题 . (2) The public attach due attention to 重要主题 .give priority to···优先考虑··· attach attention to···对··注意 emphasize the importance of··· 强调···的重要性 stress the fundamental role of··· 强调···的根本作用第三句---对主题进行展开 （3-4句） By doing so , 十一个角度平行展开···（也可用科学论据法或举例法）(一)、十一个万能理由（角度）物质回报：① 主题 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles.② The industrious and insightful people will never fail to profits from (benefit from) doing 主题.时间角度 节约时间① It can make the most of one’s time , chance and technology.② 主题(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupying spare time so constructively , makes a person contented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon. 浪费时间As all known , the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主题 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills an even murders youngster’s prime time.效率角度① 主题（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makes people weary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement .② One’s energy gradually wears off and one’s thought , creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主题 .方便和快捷① 主题 （e.g. Wide World Web）provides people with up-to-date , concrete and accurate and vivid information .② 主题 （e.g. MSN and other instant messengers）can shrink the distance between cities and even continents ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people .安全角度① 主题 can secure his food and shelter.② 主题 can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury , robbery , assaults to traffic accidents .身心健康① （主题）can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems , stress , isolation and solitude .② By doing (主题) people stay healthy , and therefore prevent heart diseases , hypertension , diabetes or fattiness .③ (主题) can also have added benefit of increasing one’s knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world .生活娱乐① It’s a major means of entertainment that relieves one’s pressure , boredom , stress and burden .表“受益”的词组：Broaden one’s mind Enrich one’s experienceEnhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to one’s work② It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information , but a source of imagination as well.③ It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy , enthusiasm and charm . It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious , routine and monotonous life .有助成长和成功（自己和他人）① People can obtain financial aids , material support , mental comfort , or spiritual back from your support .② They can draw on experience from you . Through your speeches , instructions or assistance , they can broaden their minds , increase their income .③ Through your encouragement , they cultivate the spirit of competition , participation and cooperation and finally find th。