2020版高考英语二轮复习 第一部分 板块三 二 提升作文档次的技巧——让作文靓起来课件.ppt
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第一部分专项增分练板块三写作板块——书面表达二、提升作文档次的技巧——让作文靓起来 (一一)要点呈要点呈现多多样化，适当化，适当扩充要点充要点1．．追加成分追加成分 在在要要点点基基础上上适适当当增增加加合合乎乎逻辑的的附附加加成成分分，，如如定定语(从从句句)、、状状语(从从句句)、、非非谓语动词、、独独立立主主格格结构构等等不不仅增增加加了了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出 住在中国十六年，一直学英 住在中国十六年，一直学英语2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅰ)First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings. (演演讲注意事注意事项)要面要面带微笑；要微笑；要讲慢，慢，讲清楚。
清楚Be sure to wear a smile on your face when you speak, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges. 2．．补加语句补加语句 根根据据行行文文走走向向，，适适当当增增加加一一些些与与主主题相相关关的的语句句，，或或由由要要点点衍衍生生的的句句子子，，既既能能起起到到前前引引后后联的的作作用用，，又又能能补充充一一些些相关信息，帮助相关信息，帮助读者理解所写内容者理解所写内容 每每一一支支参参赛队伍伍都都非非常常出出色色，，为比比赛做做好好了了准准备2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅱ)Every participating team is great and ready for the game. It can be predicted that this is a close match. (谈论善款用途善款用途)募捐得来的募捐得来的钱将被送将被送给急需的人。
急需的人The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness. 3．．添加过渡添加过渡 根根据据行行文文或或段段落落需需要要，，在在句句与与句句或或段段与与段段之之间适适当当增增加加过渡渡词语，，甚甚至至过渡渡句句，，可可以以使使文文章章浑然然一一体体，，同同时能能充充实文章 话题：：对西西方方绘画画艺术感感兴趣趣的的原原因因(2019·高高考考天天津卷津卷)Personally，，I'd want to learn about western painting.Several reasons may account for my preference.For one thing，，I'm interested to learn how western painting has developed into what it is today through history，，and the most influential artists in each period of its development.Additionally，，I'm crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings，，and it can't be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint. 话题：学生体育运：学生体育运动情况情况 (2018·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ)I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself. 书信信中中““适适当当的的结尾尾””也也是是必必需需的的，，它它不不仅符符合合书信信习惯，，而而且且还可可增增加加词数数。
缺缺失失就就会会影影响响文文章章结构构，，从从而而影影响响得得分分书信常用的信常用的结束束语如下：如下：I'm looking forward to .../Looking forward to .../Look forward to ...I'm waiting for your early reply.Best wishes to you.I would be grateful if you.../I'd appreciate it if you...4．．不忘收尾不忘收尾 【【跟踪训练跟踪训练】】(词数扩充升格练习词数扩充升格练习)A(2019·唐唐山山五五校校联联考考)假假定定你你是是李李华，，当当前前在在伦敦敦的的孔孔子子学学院院(Confucius Institute)做做志志愿愿者者你你的的英英国国朋朋友友Henry对孔孔子子特特别感感兴趣趣，，请你你写写封封邮件件邀邀请他他参参观孔孔子子学学院院，，要要点点如下：如下：1．．简述孔子及中国文化在世界上的影响；述孔子及中国文化在世界上的影响；2．告知参．告知参观时间：：11月月6日日(本周六本周六)上午上午8点；点；3．介．介绍参加活参加活动：：汉语班，剪班，剪纸，，书法。
法 注意：注意：1.词数数100左右；左右；2．可以适当增加．可以适当增加细节，以使行文，以使行文连贯参考参考词汇：剪：剪纸papercutting 书法法calligraphy [考生作文考生作文]Dear Henry，， I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and Chinese culture.Confucius is considered the greatest ancient educator. An increasing number of foreigners want to learn Chinese culture.I'd like to invite you to visit the Confucius Institute at 8：：00 a．．m.on Saturday，，November 6. We can attend some Chinese classes. I sincerely hope that you will accept this invitation.Looking forward to your reply.(67 words)Yours truly，，Li Hua [参考范文参考范文]Dear Henry，， I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and Chinese culture.Confucius，，whose ideas have a great impact on Chinese culture，， is considered the greatest ancient educator.As an increasing number of foreigners want to learn Chinese culture，，the Confucius Institutes are set up in many foreign countries. Since I am a volunteer working in the Confucius Institute in London，，I'd like to invite you to visit it at 8：：00 a．．m.on Saturday，，November 6.During our visit，，we can attend some Chinese classes，，which will be followed by some activities such as papercutting and Chinese calligraphy.I sincerely hope that you will accept this invitation.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，，Li Hua B假假定定你你是是新新华中中学学的的高高三三学学生生李李华，，打打算算做做志志愿愿者者，，参参加加假假期期中中外外学学生生交交流流活活动。
请给市市国国际交交流流中中心心写写一一封封申申请信，内容包括：信，内容包括：1．性格特点；．性格特点；2．英．英语水平；水平；3．．乐于于传播中国文化播中国文化注意：注意：1.词数数100左右；左右；2．可以适当增加．可以适当增加细节，以使行文，以使行文连贯；；3．开．开头语和和结束束语已已给出，不出，不计入入总词数 [考生作文考生作文]Dear Sir/Madam，， I'm Li Hua, a student of Senior Three from Xinhua High School. I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer and join in the students' exchange program in the coming vacation. I am kind, friendly and easygoing. This is very suitable for the job. My English level is high, so I can communicate with foreign students easily. I am interested in telling foreigners about Chinese culture. I hope I can get the position.(62 words)Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，，Li Hua [参考范文参考范文]Dear Sir/Madam，， I'm Li Hua, a student of Senior Three from Xinhua High School. I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer in the students' exchange program during the coming vacation. In my opinion, I am qualified for the job. To begin with, I am kind, friendly and easygoing, which enables me to get along well with my classmates. In addition, I have a good command of English so that it's easy for me to communicate with foreign students. What is the most important is that I am crazy about Chinese culture. Not only can I teach foreign students calligraphy but also how to celebrate traditional Chinese festivals. I'm sure they will benefit a lot.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，，Li Hua (二二)词句表达句表达靓一一靓何何为高高级词汇？？众众所所周周知知，，词汇本本来来并并没没有有““高高低低贵贱””之之分分，，但但某某个个词一一旦旦得得到到使使用用，，放放在在了了具具体体语境境中中，，使使用用得得极极为得得当当，，体体现了了该词的的美美妙妙价价值，，为句句子子增增色色，，让文文章章添添彩彩，，它它就就是是高高级词汇；；相相反反，，使使用用时体体现的的价价值平平平平，，没没有有创意，它就是低意，它就是低级词汇。
巧用巧用4招，以招，以实现由低由低级向高向高级的的转化 1．．““语语””众不同，避免人云亦云众不同，避免人云亦云 写写作作时恰恰当当得得体体地地使使用用别人人可可能能想想不不到到的的词汇来来表表达达，，会会给阅卷老卷老师耳目一新的感耳目一新的感觉 I learn English and Chinese well, which is good for introducing Chinese paintings.→I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.(2019·高高考考全全国国卷卷Ⅰ) Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful to you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.→Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help to you. I hold the firm belief that you will have a great time. (2018·高高考全国卷考全国卷Ⅰ) I'm busy with my lessons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. →I'm occupied with my lessons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is round the corner/on the way. (2017• •高考天津卷高考天津卷) So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.→So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter. I should be free any time after school next week.→I should be available any time after school next week. 2．更新换代，避免重复．更新换代，避免重复 写写作作时应尽尽量量避避免免重重复复使使用用相相同同的的词语，，要要用用贴切切多多样的的词语来来展展示示自自己己的的水水平平。
用用词不不同同、、表表达达方方式式迥迥异异，，也也是是高高级用法 The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. →The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. (2017• •高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ) We may have different opinions on organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation. →We may have a variety of opinions on organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.→We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be. 3．单词与短语巧妙互用．单词与短语巧妙互用 一一般般情情况况下下短短语优先先，，应多多使使用用词组、、习语来来代代替替一一些些单词，，以以增增加加文文采采。
但但有有时单词比比短短语更更生生动，，亦亦可可““一一词传神神”” However, we should still prepare for the match, and try to be the winner.→However, we should still make preparations for the match, and take pains to be the winner.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅱ) Meanwhile, I'm also interested to learn some folk dances from you in your lecture, which will help me improve my dancing.→At the same time, I'm also interested to learn some folk dances from you in your lecture, which will do me a favor to improve my dancing.(2019·高考天津卷高考天津卷) We need your help very much，，so as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us.→We are desperately/badly in need of your help，，so as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us.(2018·高高考考天天津津卷卷) Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.→Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem. As the number of English learners is increasing, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.→As the number of English learners is on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. We can look at this problem in many ways.→We can view this problem in many ways. 4．尽量用高中阶段学到的词代替初中阶段学到的词．尽量用高中阶段学到的词代替初中阶段学到的词 I believe that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results.→I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results. (2018·高考天津卷高考天津卷) Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.→Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017·高高考考天天津津卷卷) As scheduled, we joined in several instructive activities.→As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it important to obey traffic rules.→What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules. [注注意意] 高高级级词词汇汇的的使使用用一一定定要要遵遵循循““准准确确、、恰恰当当””的的原原则则，，一一定定要要注注意意词词汇汇使使用用是是否否合合适适，，并并不不一一定定难难词词就就是是高高级级词词汇汇，，例如：例如：一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。
一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太过于书面化，改为太过于书面化，改为bought更地道更地道) 【【跟踪训练跟踪训练】】Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换加黑的低级词汇用高级词汇替换加黑的低级词汇1．．He should have driven more slowly.→He have driven more slowly.2．． Because of the good weather，， our journey was comfortable.→ the good weather，，our journey was comfortable.3．．Most of the students are shortsighted.→ the students are shortsighted.is supposed toThanks toThe majority of 4．．The rain was heavy，，and as a result the road was flooded.→The rain was heavy，，and the road was flooded.5．．Jack is very clever，，who often thinks of new ideas.→Jack is very clever，，who often new ideas.6．．They wanted to hide themselves behind the trees.→They to hide themselves behind the trees.consequentlycomes up withsought 7．．Some students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.→Some students think that they should some of their pocket money for books.8．．I'm very glad to learn that you are coming in September.→I'm glad to learn that you are coming in September.set asidemore than 9．．Would you please help me to turn down the radio?→Would you please to turn down the radio?10．．During the mountainclimbing，，please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.→ the mountainclimbing，，please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.11．．After five hours' nonstop work，，we were all tired.→After five hours' nonstop work，，we were all .do me a favorIn the course ofworn out Ⅱ.根据提示用高级词汇升级下列句子根据提示用高级词汇升级下列句子1．．As a result, the plan was a failure.(turn)→2．．I believe that our country will become stronger and stronger.(convince)→3．．He spends all his spare time in reading.(devote)→The plan turned out to be a failure.I am convinced that our country will become stronger and stronger.He devotes all his spare time to reading. 4．．As soon as he arrived，，he began his research.(介介词短短语作作状状语)5．．The summer vacation is coming.(介介词短短语作表作表语)6．．Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.(occur)→On his arrival, he began his research.The summer vacation is round the corner. An idea occurred to me that/It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. 7．．Developing a good habit is also important.(of＋＋n.)→8．．The number of English learners is increasing.(介介词短短语作作表表语)→9．．I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.(take)→Developing a good habit is also of importance/significance.The number of English learners is on the rise.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account. 10．．More and more Americans are curious about Chinese culture.(number)→An increasing number of Americans are curious about Chinese culture. Ⅲ.作文升级作文升级(2019·郑郑州州高高三三一一模模)假假定定你你是是李李华，，你你所所在在的的运运动俱俱乐部部将将面面向向外外国国朋朋友友开开设太太极极(Tai Chi)课。
请写写一一封封邮件件，，邀邀请你你校的英国交校的英国交换生生Peter参加，要点如下：参加，要点如下：1．上．上课时间与地点；与地点；2．．报名的截止日期名的截止日期注意：注意：1.词数数100左右；左右；2．可以适当增加．可以适当增加细节，以使行文，以使行文连贯 【【考生习作考生习作】】Dear Peter，， How's everything going? I'm Li Hua，，writing to invite you to attend a Tai Chi class held by our sports club. ①①Tai Chi，， begun in China，， is very popular.Anyone，，regardless of age or level of fitness，，can practice and benefit from Tai Chi.Practicing Tai Chi，，you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements.②②I'm sure you will become interested in this gentle exercise.The class starts between 5：：00 and 6：：00 p．．m.every Monday in our school gym next month.The closing date for entries is next Tuesday.③③Please let me know if you want to sign your name.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，，Li Hua 【【词汇升级词汇升级】】 通过升级加黑词汇改写句子 通过升级加黑词汇改写句子①①②②③③Tai Chi, originated in China, enjoys great popularity.I'm sure you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise. Please keep me informed if you want to sign your name. (三三)句式要句式要““高高””，句子要，句子要““鲜””一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次(一一)增加亮点的定语从句增加亮点的定语从句1．．定定语从从句句的的应用用可可以以非非常常有有效效地地提提升升表表达达档档次次，，在在写写作作中中如如果果我我们可可以以把把两两个个简单句句合合并并为一一个个定定语从从句句，，就就是是从从低低级到高到高级的表达。
的表达 Firstly, the festival will start at 9：：00 a．．m.on August 15th，，and it will last 3 hours.→Firstly, the festival will start at 9：：00 a．．m.on August 15th, which will last 3 hours.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ) Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture.It turned out to be extremely rewarding.→Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.(2018·高考北京卷高考北京卷) 2．．定定语从从句句有有多多种种形形式式，，引引导词也也有有若若干干，，但但最最常常用用、、最最能能增增加加亮亮点点的的是是as和和which引引导的的非非限限制制性性定定语从从句句以以及及““介介词＋＋which””引引导的定的定语从句。
从句1)在在表表达达““正正如如……”……”这一一含含义时，，我我们常常用用as引引导的的非非限限制性定制性定语从句常见的句式有：的句式有：①①As we all know.../As is known to all...②②As he pointed out...③③As we can see from...④④As the famous saying goes... As we all know, friendship always comes first.(2019·高高考全国卷考全国卷Ⅱ)(2)which引引导定定语从从句句时，，可可以以指指代代某某个个词，，也也可可以以指指代代整整个主句 Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅱ) (3)““介介词＋＋which”” 引引导的定的定语从句 It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. (二二)吸引眼球的状语从句吸引眼球的状语从句 在在英英语写写作作中中，，状状语从从句句是是经常常被被用用到到的的，，它它的的灵灵活活运运用能使作文更具吸引力。
用能使作文更具吸引力 When it comes to the season I like best, spring will always occur to me in no time. We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. (三三)提升档次的名词性从句提升档次的名词性从句1．．名名词性性从从句句包包括括主主语从从句句、、宾语从从句句、、表表语从从句句和和同同位位语从从句句尤尤其其what, that所所引引导的的名名词性性从从句句是是写写作作中中常常见的高的高级表达方式表达方式 I have good news to tell you that an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. (同同位位语从从句句)(2018·高高考考全国卷全国卷 Ⅱ) Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.(宾语从句从句) What we need most are popular science books. (主主语从句从句) Today is what we can hold and make use of.(表表语从句从句) 2．．在在写写作作中中我我们如如果果能能够把把两两个个简单句句合合并并为一一个个含含有有名名词性性从从句句的的复复合合句句，，或或者者把把一一个个简单句句扩展展成成为含含有有名名词性性从句的复合句，从句的复合句，对写作都是一种写作都是一种质的升的升华。
He said a lot at the meeting. His words were very attractive.→What he said at the meeting was very attractive. One man's meat is another man's poison.→What is one man's meat is another man's poison. 二、常用二、常用8大句式，考场驾轻就熟大句式，考场驾轻就熟1．．强调句型强调句型强强调句句型型的的使使用用是是为了了强强调句句子子的的某某一一成成分分，，其其构构成成为：：It is/was＋被＋被强强调部分＋部分＋that/who＋其他在在写写作作中中，，我我们可可以以通通过强强调句句型型将将句句子子提提高高到到一一个个新新的的层次 Because it's a good chance for you to learn the natural knowledge of China and make new friends, we really wish you can join us.→It is because it's a good chance for you to learn the natural knowledge of China and make new friends that we really wish you can join us.(2017·高考浙江卷高考浙江卷) It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.[注注意意] 被被强强调调的的是是时时间间或或地地点点状状语语时时，，不不要要用用when或或where，而应用，而应用that。
It was in the park that (不不用用where) I came across my previous English teacher. 2．．倒装句倒装句在在写写作作中中倒倒装装句句应用用比比较广广泛泛，，涉涉及及的的句句型型也也比比较多多，，包包括括部分倒装和全部倒装常部分倒装和全部倒装常见的有：的有：(1)““only＋状＋状语(从句从句)””置于句首置于句首时，句子用部分倒装句子用部分倒装 Only in this way can we students study happily and effectively. (2)由由none, neither, nor, not, never, hardly, little, seldom等等否否定定词，，以以及及no构构成成的的否否定定短短语如如at no time, by no means等置于句首等置于句首时，句子用部分倒装句子用部分倒装 Not only does it affect our daily life, but it also puts people's lives at risk. (3)在在so/such ... that ...结构构中中，，当当so/such ...位位于于句句首首时，，其其后的句子用部分倒装。
后的句子用部分倒装 So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. (4)由由here, there, now, then, out, in, up, down, on the wall, in the room等等表表示示地地点点、、时间或或方方位位的的副副词或或介介词短短语置于句首，且主置于句首，且主语是名是名词而不是代而不是代词时，句子用全部倒装句子用全部倒装 In that picture, around the table with three books on it sit three students.在写作中，我在写作中，我们可以通可以通过倒装倒装让句子更高句子更高级 We can help to construct an energysaving society only with joint efforts.→Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energysaving society. 3．．省略句省略句省省略略句句的的应用用可可以以使使句句子子更更简洁明明快快。
写写作作中中主主要要用用到到的的有有状状语从句的省略和不定式从句的省略和不定式to后成分的省略后成分的省略 If (it is) not, let me know what time suits you best. As (it is) scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 p．．m.to 8 p．．m.next Sunday.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ) 4．．虚拟语气虚拟语气写写作作中中虚虚拟语气气的的使使用用可可以以使使表表达达更更委委婉婉，，更更具具可可读性性写写作中常作中常见的有以下几种：的有以下几种：(1)wish型虚型虚拟语气气 Besides, I wish there wouldn't be too many students in a class.(2)if only型虚型虚拟语气气 If only I could go back and reset my goals. (3)It's (high/about) time (that) ...型虚型虚拟语气气 It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes. 5．．非谓语动词非谓语动词写写作作中中非非谓语动词的的应用用标志志着着写写作作水水平平上上升升了了一一个个档档次次，，写作中常用到的是非写作中常用到的是非谓语动词作状作状语和定和定语。
(1)非非谓语动词作状作状语 To get some working experience, I plan to find a parttime job in a foreign capital company. So I'm writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and suggestions. Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help. (2)非非谓语动词作定作定语 It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. 6．．with复合结构复合结构with复复合合结构构可可以以使使文文章章简洁紧凑凑，，一一篇篇文文章章如如果果能能恰恰当当地地使用一两个使用一两个with复合复合结构，可以使文章增色不少构，可以使文章增色不少 Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2018·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ) With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them. 7．．并列句型并列句型并并列列句句型型是是用用连词把把两两个个或或两两个个以以上上的的简单句句连接接起起来来，，在在这一一句句型型中中要要注注意意连接接并并列列主主语时，，有有些些句句型型采采取取““就就近近原原则””。
写作中常用到的有以下几种：写作中常用到的有以下几种： (1)while表示表示对比关系，意比关系，意为““然而，可是然而，可是”” It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.(2)not only...but (also)．．..““不不仅…………而且而且……”……” It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. (2018·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅱ) (3)not...but...““不是不是…………，而是，而是……”……” To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. 8．．it句型句型it的的应用用可可以以使使句句子子更更平平衡衡，，更更符符合合英英语习惯。
常常见的的有有以以下几种：下几种：(1)it作形式主作形式主语 Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest. (2)it作形式作形式宾语 And you also should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.(3)it在某些固定句式中的在某些固定句式中的应用用 I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅰ) 【【跟踪训练跟踪训练】】Ⅰ.根据提示用高级句式升级下列句子根据提示用高级句式升级下列句子1．．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强强调句句)2．．We can live a happy life only by this means.(倒装倒装) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.Only by this means can we live a happy life. 3．．He fell asleep.The lights were still on.(with复合复合结构构)4．．The environment will not improve until everybody takes care of it.(倒装倒装)5．．The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(定定语从句从句)He fell asleep with lights still on.Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 6．．After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，，we strongly desired to be the winner.(分分词短短语作作状状语)7．． Above all，， we must take some measures to stop pollution.(被被动语态)Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.Above all, some measures must be taken to stop pollution. 8．．There are a lot of trees and flowers in our school and our school looks like a big garden.(with复合复合结构构)9．．They didn't realize the importance of environmental protection until all the fish in the river died out.(倒装倒装)With a lot of trees and flowers in our school, our school looks like a big garden.Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the importance of environmental protection. 10．．We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country.(被被动语态)More attention should be paid to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country. Ⅱ.根据提示用高级句式翻译下列句子根据提示用高级句式翻译下列句子1．我．我们发现河水太河水太脏无法无法钓鱼。
so...that...句型句型)2．．我我们到到达达了了一一座座山山，，山山脚脚下下有有一一条条小小河河在在流流淌淌定定语从从句句)3．通．通过做运做运动，我，我们能能够始始终保持健康保持健康by＋＋doing)We found the water was so dirty that we could not catch fish in it.We arrived at a hill, at the foot of which there flows a small river.By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 4．．一一听听到到这个个出出乎乎意意料料的的消消息息，，他他惊惊讶到到说不不出出话来来upon/on doing) 5．．毫毫无无疑疑问，，你你有有困困难时，，会会得得到到别人人的的帮帮助助 (there is no doubt that...)Upon/On hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't say a word.There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties. 6．．我我们必必须种种树的的原原因因是是它它们能能供供应我我们新新鲜的的空空气气。
the reason why...is that...)7．如果你方便的．如果你方便的话，咱，咱们8：：30校校门口口见吧！吧！(if)The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.If it's convenient for you，，let's meet at 8：：30 outside the school gate. 8．．只只要要我我们有有强强大大的的信信念念，，就就能能够克克服服任任何何困困难as long as)As long as we have a strong will, we'll be able to get over any difficulty. (2019·天天津津高高三三模模拟拟)假假定定你你是是李李华，，你你的的朋朋友友李李芳芳向向你你询问你你校校新新开开设的的iPad课程程(iPad class)请你你给她她写写封封回回信信，，向她介向她介绍iPad课程很受学生程很受学生欢迎的原因，要点如下：迎的原因，要点如下：1．．资源丰富；源丰富；2．促．促进交流；交流；3．利于．利于环保。
保Ⅲ.按要求升级作文按要求升级作文 【【考生习作考生习作】】Dear Li Fang，， ①①I'm very glad to receive your last letter. ②②In your letter you enquired about our newly opened iPad classes. The class is very popular among the students, and the reasons are as follows. To begin with, everyone learns in a respective way. Students can refer to their iPads for materials that suit their level and learning style to meet their different needs. ③③In addition, when they are connected to the Internet, students can communicate with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently, and it will contribute to their progress. ④④Lastly, we also consider that it is environmentally friendly to open iPad classes, for paper is no longer a necessity. Looking forward to your attending our iPad classes.Yours sincerely，，Li Hua 【【句式升级句式升级】】1．用非限制性定语从句升级句．用非限制性定语从句升级句①②①②I'm very glad to receive your last letter, .2．用状语从句的省略和非限制性定语从句升级句．用状语从句的省略和非限制性定语从句升级句③③In addition, , students can communicate with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently, .in which youenquired about our newly opened iPad classeswhen connected to the Internetwhich will contribute to their progress 3．用．用it作形式作形式宾语升升级句句④④Lastly, we also , for paper is no longer a necessity.consider it environmentally friendly to openiPad classes (四四)衔接要接要““巧巧””，，过渡要渡要““妙妙””创造良好开端创造良好开端[常用开头词汇常用开头词汇] 表表示示““启启””的的词汇常常用用在在段段落落或或文文章章的的开开头，，用用于于开开篇篇引引出出扩展展句句。
常常见的的词汇有有：：first/firstly, first of all, at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to等 First of all, we must make full use of every 45minute lesson. Nowadays/Recently, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. To begin/start with, smoking should be banned in public areas. As the proverb says/As the saying goes, “Time is money.” With the development of the Internet, computers play an important role in people's life. It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. It is believed that health is above wealth. [常用开头句式常用开头句式] [满分作文选粹满分作文选粹] First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 p．．m.and last for roughly 3 hours.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷ⅡⅡ) I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper. First of all, I'd like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class. As is known to all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. 顺势承上启下顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇常用顺承词汇] 表表示示““承承””的的词词汇汇常常用用于于承承接接主主题题句句或或第第一一个个扩扩展展句句。
常常见见的的词词汇汇有有：：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, what's more, furthermore, moreover, what's worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time等 Besides, developing a good habit of learning can help you improve your learning effectively. What's more, good books can help us to develop good characters. In addition, we shouldn't neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. Meanwhile/At the same time, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy. What is more serious is that we don't cherish wildlife. As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity. [常用顺承句式常用顺承句式] To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, you'd better bring some gifts, such as a special food or drink from your country. What's more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.(2018·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅰ) [满分作文选粹满分作文选粹] Worse still, I don't even know much about the word and format of the enclosure. In addition, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ) 巧妙转折过渡巧妙转折过渡[常用转折词汇常用转折词汇] 表表示示““转转””的的词词汇汇常常用用来来表表示示不不同同或或相相反反的的意意见见或或情情况况。
常常见见的的词词汇汇有有：：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of等 Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road. (2018·高高考考浙浙江江卷卷) On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages. On the contrary, the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth. Contrary to what I had originally said, the trip turned out to be fun. Whatever/No matter what you say, he won't believe you. Whether you believe it or not, it is true.[满分作文选粹满分作文选粹] However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. [常用转折句式常用转折句式] 完美结束全文完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇常用结尾词汇] 表表示示““合合””的的词词汇汇常常用用于于总总结结上上文文的的内内容容，，引引导导最最后后一一个个扩扩展展句句或或引引导导结结尾尾句句表表示示段段落落的的结结束束。
常常见见的的词词汇汇有有：：finally, last but not least, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等 All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.(2018·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅲ) In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. On the whole, I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle. In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success. To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and healthily. I'd appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible. It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted. We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world. [常用结尾句式常用结尾句式] To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.(2019·高考全国卷高考全国卷Ⅱ) In a word, I like everything in spring, especially the feelings bathed in the rain and sunshine. In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting. [满分作文选粹满分作文选粹] Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting. Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students. 【【跟踪训练跟踪训练】】Ⅰ.用过渡词汇或句式补全句子用过渡词汇或句式补全句子1．． (况况且且), listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.2．． (总之之), changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.3．． (事事实上上), advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.Besides/In addition/What's more/MoreoverIn a word/In conclusion/In short/In briefAs a matter of fact/In fact 4．．I lost my way in the forest and (更糟的是更糟的是), it became dark.5．． (首首先先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.6．． (因因此此), I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.to make mattersworse/worse stillFirst of all/To begin withTherefore Ⅱ.翻译下列开头和结尾句翻译下列开头和结尾句1．我代表学生会．我代表学生会给您写信您写信请求帮助我求帮助我们的校友。
的校友2．如果方便的．如果方便的话，我希望你能接受我，我希望你能接受我们的邀的邀请3．我写信申．我写信申请在您的大学里学在您的大学里学习I am writing to you, on behalf of the Students' Union, to ask for help for our schoolmates.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.I'm writing to apply to study in your university. 4．我写信告．我写信告诉您我的您我的问题，，这个个问题困困扰了我很了我很长时间5．我的确希望你能考．我的确希望你能考虑我的建我的建议6．我．我为给你你带来来这么大的麻么大的麻烦再次向你道歉再次向你道歉I am writing to tell you my problem, which has troubled me for a long time.I do hope you will consider my suggestion.I apologize to you again for having put you in such great trouble. 7．我想向你致以最．我想向你致以最诚挚的祝的祝贺。
8．如果你能．如果你能认真真对待我的投待我的投诉，我会非常高，我会非常高兴I would like to congratulate you with all my heart.I would be very delighted if you could consider my complaint seriously. Ⅲ.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡词汇填空阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡词汇填空in my opinion，， recently，， worse still，， on the one hand，， on the other hand，， however 1．． many schools have taken tough measures to forbid students to bring their mobile phones to school. 2. , some students break this rule and some even play with their mobile phones in class.RecentlyHowever The disadvantages of students bringing mobile phones to school are obvious. 3. , mobile phones can distract students' attention. 4. , some students may get access to some unhealthy websites, which are bad for their development. 5. , some students are likely to compare the brands of their mobile phones with their classmates'.On the one handOn the other handWorse still 6．． , I strongly support banning mobile phones in schools.Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.In my opinion 。
