人教英语必修一unit1FriendshipWriting课堂PPT.ppt

123 英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴，英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴，是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告此类信件多属于半开放建议和忠告此类信件多属于半开放性作文，要求根据所给的材料性作文，要求根据所给的材料(多为多为征求建议信征求建议信)，提出合理化建议，或，提出合理化建议，或者给出有针对性的解决办法者给出有针对性的解决办法4建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对别人的问题，给出自要求在信中针对别人的问题，给出自己的观点及解决办法，常用句式：己的观点及解决办法，常用句式： In my opinion, you should ...My opinion is ...I believe we should …I don’t think it’s necessary to ...5I advise you to ...We must decide ...I’m afraid that ...I think you should ...Don’t worry ...I agree … I don’t agree ...I think so. I don’t think so ...6格式（书信格式）；格式（书信格式）；客观地提出建议；客观地提出建议；针对对方的问题，给出你的观点；针对对方的问题，给出你的观点；语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。

表达清楚7开门见山，表明写作意图写信开门见山，表明写作意图写信人应先简单介绍自己，然后陈述人应先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因事由，表明写信的目的及原因8委婉地提出建议及改进措施，委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告或提出忠告9礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复 10Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.11Dear Miss Wang,I’m a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem, I’m not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely 12sometimes. I do want to change this situation, but I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Yours, Xiao Dong13Dear Xiao Dong, I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about ________ (建议主题）建议主题）. The following is my advice 14In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions, __________（建议的内容）（建议的内容）.15I hope you will find these proposals ______, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _____________.Yours Sincerely, …usefulfurther details16You have trouble in _____________ with others, and you do want to _______ this situation. making friendschange17You must ____________ others if you want to make friends with them. You’d better look after others more than ________. be friendly toyourself18It is important to try to make the stranger feel _______________. If you have different opinions, you can ___________ others.It’s not necessary to ____________ them. easy/comfortablediscuss withquarrel with19巧列提纲，详略得当巧列提纲，详略得当:针对问题需要提出什么样的建议，要针对问题需要提出什么样的建议，要讲哪些内容，应该先列出提纲，并要讲哪些内容，应该先列出提纲，并要做到内容重点突出、详略得当、井然做到内容重点突出、详略得当、井然有序，达到提纲挈领的作用。

有序，达到提纲挈领的作用 20Pointing out the importance of friendship.Showing your advice.21翻译要点，勾勒脉络翻译要点，勾勒脉络:列出提纲后，可以尝试将文章中涉及列出提纲后，可以尝试将文章中涉及到的建议要点或忠告翻译成相应的英到的建议要点或忠告翻译成相应的英语句子在此基础上，可增加合理的语句子在此基础上，可增加合理的想象以及适当的扩展想象以及适当的扩展22Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. You must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with them. 23Look after others more than yourself.Try to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others.It’s not necessary to quarrel with them. 24巧妙构思，浑然成篇巧妙构思，浑然成篇:增加适当的情节和一些过渡词将上增加适当的情节和一些过渡词将上述要点连接起来，加以适当润色，述要点连接起来，加以适当润色，形成一篇地道、完整的英语建议信。

形成一篇地道、完整的英语建议信 25I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.26Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. First you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others. Then, look after others more than yourself. Finally, I don’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble.27In my opinion, try to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I don’t think it’s necessary to quarrel with them. 28I don’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.29规范书写，落笔成文规范书写，落笔成文:规范书写是落笔成文的关键。

在这个规范书写是落笔成文的关键在这个环节中，切不可因为书写潦草、乱涂环节中，切不可因为书写潦草、乱涂乱改而让人看不出所以然，结果使整乱改而让人看不出所以然，结果使整篇文章黯然失色篇文章黯然失色30Dear Xiao Dong,I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.31Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with them. Then, look after others more than yourself. In my opinion, try to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I don’t think it’s necessary to quarrel with them. 32Finally, I don’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed. I hope everything goes on well with you, and you’ll make a lot of good friends.Yours truly,Miss Wang33It’s a good habit for you to keep a diary. It can help you remember past events. You can express your feelings and thoughts in it. It will help you improve your English if you write your diary in English. Why not have a try?34Jim is addicted to smoking. He wants to give up but doesn’t know how. He asks you for advice. Please write him a letter.3536。