2017海淀-东城-西城一模写作讲评推荐课件.ppt

海淀-东城-西城一模写作讲评2021/8/2212016-2017学年度海淀区第二学期期中练习  2017.42021/8/222第四部分第四部分 书面表达书面表达一、试题分析：第一节（15分）         假设你是红星中学高三学生李华你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划，请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 希望从事的职业； 2. 选择该职业的原因；3. 你打算为之做何准备   注意：1. 词数不少于50；             2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数   2021/8/223      假设你是红星中学高三学生李华你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划，请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 希望从事的职业； 2. 选择该职业的原因；3. 你打算为之做何准备   注意：1. 词数不少于50；           2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数   与2016北京高考类似：信息介绍类开放式写作，对语言组织、词汇积累、思维品质都有较高的要求2021/8/224思考与分析：考查什么？1、考查学生的语言能力以及知识积累；2、考查学生的品格----做一个有理想、抱负的人；基于自身现状提出理想，并提出为之付出努力的计划。

3、 考查学生的思维品质----（内容）逻辑性、创新性等2021/8/225二、范文分析：One possible version:Dear Jim,        How is everything going? I am glad to receive your e-mail, in which you asked me about my  career  plan  for  the  future. Now I am writing to share it with you in details.          Para.1 得体的问候、交际，写作目的，引出下文2021/8/2261. 问候（审题-交际语境）2. In your last letter, you asked me what I was  going  to  be/  would  do  in  the  future, now I’ll tell you about it.last是明确的过去时态时间状语，ask若用于过去时，之后的从句中必须用过去时得一种，如果与后句感觉不搭配，now之前改用句号3. 写作目的不能忘。

 注意2021/8/227      I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited the Xinhua News Agency, the top one in China, last year. I chose it as my career based on the following two reasons. Firstly, it is a job that can get me exposed使我面对 to new things every day and thus/so keep me energetic精力充沛的 and passionate充满热情的 all the time since由于 I really hate to follow the same routine例行程序 every day. Besides, working as a journalist can make my childhood dream of being a hero come true by通过 fighting against evil 与邪恶做斗争and spreading justice传播正义. Para.2:要点1：职业选择Para.2:要点2：原因、理由2021/8/228       To achieve this goal/To realize my dream, I plan to apply for the Communication University of China, whose major,  Journalism,  has  been  ranked排位 the first for many years in a row across the whole country.  After getting my Bachelor Degree学 士 学 位 of  Journalism,  I  will continue  my  study  in  a  world-famous university  to broaden my horizons so that I can better fit适应 my future post岗位.Para.3:要点3：所做准备2021/8/229       That is all about my career plan. What do you think of it? I am  looking  forward  to  hearing yours if you have got one.   Yours, Li HuaPara.4 得体的交际，话语交接意识2021/8/2210三、评分原则：第一节（15分）1．本题总分15分，按4个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或降低档次，最后给分3．评分时应考虑：内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否准确4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑减分英、美拼写及词汇用法均可以接受5．词数少于50，从总分中减去1分2021/8/2211四、发现问题1. 缺乏交际；2. 职业不具体，笼统如，应说明哪方面的工程师、具体学科教师涌现大批励志从教的学生3.“理由”空洞没有说服力，对本职业领域没有深刻的理解暴露出无职业规划4. “理由”只陈述自身优势，如：性格，兴趣；思维品质不高，全文不连贯5. 职业”准备”部分内容肤浅、单薄Eg. study hard, read more books.6. 语言能力较弱，不能准确有效传达信息2021/8/2212五、高分作文评分建议：1、”职业”要具体，不能太宽泛：    如an engineer---an environmental engineer     a teacher-----an English teacher2、在表达“原因”时，学生应考虑所选职业的特质（必须有）；学生也可以考虑个人优势、个人经历，且对优势、经历有所提炼。

鼓励学生在写作中表达出高尚情操，如心系国家、社会 考生字里行间能够透露出其内在品格3、“准备”应与第一、第二要点保持一致；优秀作文应避免描述太过笼统宽泛，如： I will study hard 最好既有信念又有行动或具体措施4、有交际意识，如开头及结尾的交际性2021/8/2213Dear Jim,        How  is  everything  going?  …Now  I  am writing to share it with you in details.          提供词汇：         ask  me  about  my  career  plan/  be interested in/  want to know something about…问候、导入问候、导入语言表述语言表述2021/8/2214       I  made  up  my  mind  to  be  a  journalist/  an English teacher/ basketball player.       或  I want to be a journalist.        或 Being a journalist is my dream job.       职业选择职业选择2021/8/2215I chose it as my career based on the following two reasons. Firstly,... Besides,…或The  reason  why  I  want  to  be  a  journalist  is that…原因、理由原因、理由2021/8/2216原因受之前经历的影响：受之前经历的影响：•I have always wanted to be a doctor since I was a child. The first time I went to hospital, how the doctors cured my disease left an incredible impression on my mind. I believe it is worthwhile to make a difference to the life of people who suffer from illness.•I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited the Xinhua News Agency, the top one in China, last year.2021/8/2217原因父母的影响父母的影响•both of my parents are doctors, so I am familiar with the job. 个人的兴趣个人的兴趣•I choose the English teacher as my ideal job for the following reasons. Firstly, I have great interest in learning English …传播中国文化传播中国文化 tour guide：  spread the traditional Chinese culture2021/8/2218“准备”      To realize my dream, what I need to do is sticking fast  to  my  belief  and  keeping  working  hard.  I  should focus  more  on  my  science  project  and  enrich  my knowledge  in  bio-chemistry  and  medicines.  After graduating from high school, I want to enter a famous medical school in China to prepare my medical skills for the future. Further more, I will use my vacation to be a volunteer in the local hospital. By taking care of those patients,  I  will  have  a  better  view  of  the  life  of  both patients and doctors. 信念坚定付诸行动具体措施后期跟进适当提炼2021/8/2219That is all about my career plan. What do you think of it? I am looking forward to hearing yours if you have got one.   Yours, Li Hua得体的交得体的交际，，话语交接意交接意识2021/8/2220六、评分标准六、评分标准 第一档第一档 （（13 – 15分）：分）：•完全完成完全完成了试题规定的任务。

了试题规定的任务•内容完整内容完整，，条理条理清楚；清楚；•交际得体交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出体现出较强较强的语言运用能力的语言运用能力•完全达到完全达到了预期的写作目的了预期的写作目的2021/8/2221第二档：第二档：9---12分分•基本完成基本完成了试题规定的任务了试题规定的任务•内容、条理和交际等方面内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合基本符合要求；要求；•所用语法和词汇所用语法和词汇满足满足了任务的要求；了任务的要求；•语法和用词方面语法和用词方面有一些错误有一些错误，但，但不影响理解不影响理解•基本达到基本达到了预期的写作目的了预期的写作目的2021/8/2222第三档：第三档：4---8分分•未恰当完成未恰当完成试题规定的任务试题规定的任务•内容内容不完整不完整；；•所用所用词汇有限词汇有限，语法或用词方面的，语法或用词方面的错误影错误影响响了对所写内容的了对所写内容的理解理解•未能清楚未能清楚地传达信息地传达信息2021/8/2223第四档：第四档：1---3分分•未完成未完成试题规定的任务试题规定的任务•写了写了少量相关信息少量相关信息；；•语法或用词方面语法或用词方面错误较多错误较多，，严重影响严重影响了对所写内了对所写内容的容的理解理解。

2021/8/2224 How’s everything going? You’ve said you want to know something about my future career plan, and I’m more than willing to share my dream job with you. Environmental Engineer is the job in my dreams. As a new career popped out突出 just in the recent years, I don’t know much about it first. However, after I got to know about it from a discussion with a friend and looked deeper into it on the web-sites, I learned that it is actually to create a better environment for citizens to live in. As we all know, the heavy smog in Beijing has aroused global concern and its harm to people’s health is yet to be measured. Suffering from the air pollution, I think of choosing this career as a direct way to help change the present situation and to give the blue sky back to this city I love. 较强的语较强的语言能力和言能力和较高的思较高的思维品质维品质2021/8/2225 To accomplish my dream, I have to work very hard to get into an university where the major of Environmental Engineering is most advanced先进. Moreover, I plan to read some books in this particular major right after my graduation to get an in-sight into this filed as well as to get a little ahead in my future study. Now that I have told you above my career plan, then why not tell me something about your career plan in your next letter? I’m looking forward to your reply. 细节添加丰富、细节添加丰富、恰当，条理清楚恰当，条理清楚.2021/8/22262014年高考写作第一节：你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1．你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2．由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3．表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

注意：1．词数不少于502．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数2014-2016北京高考书面表达第一节2021/8/22272015年高考写作第一节：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友 Jim 写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加邮件的内容  包括：    1、介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间、地点、参加者等）；    2、说明你打算参加的原因；    3、询问对方的意向       注意： 1、词数不少于 50；          2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数    提示词： 龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp2021/8/22282016年高考写作第一节：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物请你给Jim回信，内容包括：     1. 该人物是谁；      2. 该人物的主要贡献；      3. 该人物对你的影响   注意：  1. 词数不少于50；    2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2021/8/22292021/8/2230 一、考查目的：新课程标准的文化品格•在培养学生跨文化意识的同时要重视培养学生的本土文化意识、形成自己的文化立场与态度、提升文化认同感和文化鉴别能力；进而继承、弘扬中国文化。

2021/8/2231二、试题分析：第二节 （20 分） 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华上周你接待了加拿大交换生Jack请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“A Taste of Beijing Duck”为题，给校刊“英语园地”写一篇稿件，介绍你和家人陪Jack去了解、品尝北京烤鸭的过程 注意：词数不少于602021/8/2232第二节 （20 分） 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华上周你接待了加拿大交换生Jack请按照以下四幅图的先后 顺 序 ， 以 “A Taste of Beijing Duck”为题，给校刊“英语园地”写一篇稿件，介绍你和家人陪Jack去了解、品尝北京烤鸭的过程 注意：词数不少于60作者身份写作背景写作目的与体裁过程2021/8/2233到达全聚德了解历史观看制作品尝美味外观、心情……宣传墙/宣传片、历史、讲解鸭子、厨师、炉子、感受、心情如何吃、味道、赞美……2021/8/2234评分原则1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。

4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分35三、范文分析：One possible version: Last week, my family hosted an exchange student Jack from Canada and together we explored many places in Beijing, among which the experience of tasting Beijing Roast Duck in Quanjude stood out. When we arrived at the gate of Quanjude, Jack was immediately attracted by its Chinese-style architecture design. And as we walked in, he was even more surprised to find a photo wall. Seeing his confusion as well as interest, I introduced to him the long history of Beijing Roast Duck and how this time-honored brand pursued perfection in cooking, which made Jack more eager to have a try. After entering the dining hall, we immediately ordered an all-duck banquet and before it was served, the ducks being processed drew our attention. The shining color of the ducks in the hung oven was so mouth-watering and the chef’s skill of slicing the duck was just like an art performance. Seeing all these, Jack couldn’t help expressing his amazement from time to time. The moment finally came for us to really have a try! Considering Jack’s inexperience, pancake in hand, I led him to take a piece of meat, dipping it in the sweet bean sauce, and then put it in with some spring onion and cucumber. With just one bite, he fell in love and shared with us the taste of its crispy skin and tender meat melting in his mouth. We were so glad that he loved it and talked merrily over the whole dinner. This meal left Jack a deep impression and inspired his love for Chinese food as well as respect for Chinese people’s pursing perfection, which I can’t help feeling proud of and will try my best to inherit and promote.2021/8/2236 ①总 说 活 动 ： Last week, my family hosted招 待 an exchange student Jack from Canada and together we explored many places in Beijing, among which the experience of tasting Beijing Roast Duck in Quanjude stood out. （要素完整）2021/8/2237②活动开始、图1要点+细节：When we arrived at the gate of Quanjude, Jack was immediately attracted by its Chinese-style architecture design. ③图2过渡： And as we walked in, he was even more surprised to find a photo wall. ④图2要点、细节：Seeing his confusion as well as interest, I introduced to him the long history of Beijing Roast Duck and how this time-honored brand老 字 号 pursued追 求 perfection完美 in cooking, which made Jack more eager to have a try.2021/8/2238⑤图3过渡（铺垫）、要点：  After entering the dining hall, we immediately ordered an all-duck banquet宴 会 and before it was served, the ducks being processed处理 drew our attention. ⑥图3细节：The shining color of the ducks in the hung oven挂炉 was so mouth-watering令人垂涎的and the chef’s skill of slicing切片the duck was just like an art performance表演. ⑦图3细节：Seeing all these, Jack couldn’t help expressing忍 不 住 his amazement惊奇，诧异from time to time. 2021/8/2239 ⑧图4过渡、要点：  The moment finally came for us to really have a try! ⑨图4细节：Considering Jack’s inexperience, pancake in hand, I led him to take a piece of meat, dipping it in the sweet bean sauce甜面酱, and then put it in with some spring onion葱 and cucumber黄瓜. ⑩图4细节：With just one bite只咬一口, he fell in love and shared with us the taste of its crispy酥脆的 skin and tender嫩的 meat melting融化的; 熔化的; 溶解的; 混合的in his mouth. ⑪图4细节：We were so glad that he loved it and talked merrily愉快地 over the whole dinner.2021/8/2240⑫结尾、意义、感受：This meal left Jack a deep impression and inspired his love for Chinese food as well as respect for Chinese people’s pursuing追求perfection完美, which I can’t help feeling proud of and will try my best to inherit继承 and promote改进，推广.leave sb a deep impression 给某人留下深刻印象2021/8/2241四、大作文典型问题1. 头重脚轻，图1、图2描写过多，导致图3、图4余留空间有限。

2. 由于一卷用时过多，导致二卷时间不足，卷面整洁度下降3. 相关话题背景知识缺乏，如不了解烤鸭的制作过程E.g. Seeing the fire roasting the ducks as the oil streaming down the crispy skin, Jack told me he couldn’t stand his hunger.4. 相关话题词汇有限，无法准确描述制作过程，点餐单一，就一道烤鸭5. 过度添加无关细节，如加入自己的蛋糕制作经历；吃烤鸭之前的行程等6. 结尾升华不够自然2021/8/2242评分标准评分标准 第一档第一档 18 – 20分：分： 完全完成完全完成了试题规定的任务了试题规定的任务•覆盖了覆盖了所有内容要点所有内容要点；；•运用了运用了多样多样的句式和丰富的词汇；的句式和丰富的词汇；•语法或用词方面有语法或用词方面有个别个别错误，但为尽可能表达错误，但为尽可能表达丰丰 富富的内容所致；体现了的内容所致；体现了较强较强的语言运用能力；的语言运用能力；•有效有效地使用了语句间的地使用了语句间的连接连接成分，所写内容成分，所写内容连贯连贯、、结构结构紧凑紧凑。

•完全达到完全达到了预期的写作目的了预期的写作目的                         2021/8/2243第二档：第二档：15---17分分 完全完成完全完成了了试题规定的任定的任务٠覆盖了覆盖了所有内容要点所有内容要点；；٠运用的句式和运用的句式和词汇能能满足任足任务要求；要求；٠语法和用法和用词基本准确，基本准确，少少许错误主要主要为尽可尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；能表达丰富的内容所致；٠使用了使用了简单的的语句句间连接成分接成分，所写内容，所写内容连贯 达到达到了了预期的写作目的期的写作目的2021/8/2244第三档：12---14分基本完成了试题规定的任务٠覆盖了内容要点；٠运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求；٠语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解基本达到了预期的写作目的2021/8/2245第四档：第四档：6---11分分未恰当未恰当完成完成试题规定的任定的任务٠漏掉漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容；或未描述清楚主要内容；٠所用句式和所用句式和词汇有限有限；；٠语法或用法或用词方面的方面的错误影响影响了了对所写内容的所写内容的理解未能清楚未能清楚地地传达信息。

达信息2021/8/2246第五档：第五档：1---5分分未完成未完成试题规定的任定的任务٠明明显遗漏主要内容；漏主要内容；٠句式句式单调、、词汇贫乏；乏；٠语法或用法或用词方面方面错误较多，多，严重影响了重影响了对所所写内容的理解写内容的理解0分：分：未能未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关2021/8/2247评分提示：评分提示：1. 对对内容要点内容要点的要求要的要求要严格严格；；2. 对对细节细节的要求可以的要求可以宽泛宽泛；；3. 语言质量语言质量是决定档次的重要依据；是决定档次的重要依据；4. 逻辑逻辑连贯是高分作文的特征连贯是高分作文的特征先根据文章的内容要点和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分应考虑内容要点+细节支撑+语言质量（词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性）+逻辑合理2021/8/2248•内容全面，内容全面，4个要点个要点都有正确表述，且都有必要都有正确表述，且都有必要的的细节支撑细节支撑，语言达意，定为二档根据语言，语言达意，定为二档根据语言质量，升一档或降档；质量，升一档或降档；•漏写一个要点漏写一个要点（一图），（一图），降至四档降至四档（（6-11分）。

分）语言质量出色，升至且只能升至语言质量出色，升至且只能升至12分；分；•漏写两个要点漏写两个要点（两图），（两图），降至五档降至五档（（1-5 分）语言质量出色，升至且只能升至语言质量出色，升至且只能升至6分；分；•漏写三个要点漏写三个要点（三图），（三图），最多给最多给2分分；；•细节支持不够细节支持不够，在相应档次上得低分；，在相应档次上得低分；•时态时态、、人称人称的使用得当与否视为判断语言质量的使用得当与否视为判断语言质量高低的依据；高低的依据；•逻辑不通逻辑不通，相应降一档相应降一档 2021/8/2249History of Peking Roast Duck          A saying that is often heard is: "There are two things you must do in Beijing: eat Beijing Roast Duck and see the Great Wall." When roasting the duck, compressed air is injected into the duck between its skin and flesh to make the skin glossy and shiny.  The  manner  of  serving  and  eating  Beijing  Duck  is  also unique. One duck may produce about 120 very thin slices, each containing both meat and skin.          Duck has been roasted in China since the Southern and Northern Dynasties. A variation of roast duck was prepared for the Emperor of China in the Yuan Dynasty.  The dish, originally named "Shaoyazi" , was mentioned in the Complete Recipes for Dishes and Beverages (飲膳正要) manual in 1330 by OJ Li (李翰廷), an inspector of the imperial kitchen. The Peking Roast Duck that came to be associated with the term was fully developed during the later Ming Dynasty, and by then, Peking Duck was one  of  the  main  dishes  on  imperial  court  menus.  The  first restaurant  specializing  in  Peking  Duck,  Bianyifang,  was established in the Xianyukou, Qianmen area of Beijing in 1416.2021/8/2250       By the Qianlong Period (1736–1796) of the Qing Dynasty, the popularity of Peking  Duck  spread  to  the  upper  classes,  inspiring  poetry  from  poets  and scholars  who  enjoyed  the  dish.  In  1864,  the  Quanjude  restaurant  was established  in  Beijing.  Yang  Quanren  (楊全仁),  the  founder  of  Quanjude, developed  the  hung  oven  to  roast  ducks.  With  its  innovations  and  efficient management,  the  restaurant  became  well  known  in  China,  introducing  the Peking Duck to the rest of the world.        By the mid-20th century, Peking Duck had become a national symbol of China, favored by tourists and diplomats alike. For example, Henry Kissinger, the Secretary of State of the United States, met Premier Zhou Enlai  in the Great Hall of the People on July 10, 1971, during his first (secret) visit to China. After a round of inconclusive talks in the morning, the delegation was served Peking  Duck  for  lunch,  which  became  Kissinger's  favourite.  The  Americans and  Chinese  issued  a  joint  statement  the  following  day,  inviting  President Richard Nixon to visit China in 1972. Following Zhou's death in 1976, Kissinger paid  another  visit  to  Beijing  to  savor  Peking  Duck.  Peking  Duck,  at  the Quanjude  in  particular,  has  also  been  a  favorite  dish  for  various  political leaders  ranging  from  Cuban  revolutionary  Fidel  Castro  to  former  German chancellor Helmut Kohl.        Two notable restaurants in Beijing which serve this dish are Quanjude and Bianyifang, both centuries-old establishments which have become household names, each with their own style: Quanjude is known for using the hung oven roasting method, while Bianyifang uses the oldest technique of closed oven roasting. (459 words)2021/8/2251第一节（15分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你的美国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他作为交换生要要来中国学习，他将住在中国接待家庭，他询问住在中国家庭会是否会有文化差异。

请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 说明可能会遇到的文化差异；3. 提出建议注意：1．词数不少于50；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Jim,_________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua2016-2017学年度东城区第二学期期中练习  2017.42021/8/2252Possible versionDear Jim,I’m happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family. Congratulations! It will be a great chance to learn Chinese culture.However, I would like to remind you that some cultural shocks do exist. Take greeting people for example, when you first meet someone in your country, you might hug and kiss him or her. But in China it is not a common practice. I think the best way of greeting is to shake hands. Shaking hands is a friendly greeting in Chinese situation.If you are unsure what to do, it is wise to remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” and you’ll be quite well accepted by Chinese.Hope you have a pleasant stay in China.Best wishes, Li Hua2021/8/2253Possible versionDear Jim, I’m happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family. Congratulations! It will be a great chance to learn Chinese culture. However, I need to tell you that in fact there are some cultural differences between Chinese culture and American culture. If you were you, I would remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” and before you come to China, you’d better read some books on Chinese culture, which may be helpful to you/which is maybe helpful to you. Hope you have a pleasant stay in China.Best wishes, Li Hua2021/8/2254建建议1. I suggest that you (should) do sth.2. suggest doing sth.3. advise sb. to do sth.4. had better do sth.5. Why not do sth.?6. Why don’t you do sth.?7. You can/should do sth.8. 虚虚拟句句If I were you, I would do sth.2021/8/2255第二节（20分）假如你是红星中学高三1班的李华。

请按以下四幅图的顺序，给你校“英语园地”投稿，介绍上个月你们班参加学校组织的“原创诗词大赛”的比赛过程注意：词数不少于60Last month, our class took part in the Campus Poetry Contest held in our school.内容要点：1．获悉比赛2．创作、排练3．朗诵表演4．公布成绩2021/8/22562021/8/2257 One possible version Last month, our class took part in the Campus Poetry Contest held in our school.2021/8/2258 Our headmaster announced the start of the contest and the topic–Our Colorful School Life. He also required that every class should create one poem of any length and any type and then present it in front of the whole school. We listened attentively专注地, showing great interest.2021/8/2259 When we were back to our classroom, we discussed what to write about our poem. Some of my classmates contributed brilliant ideas集思广益, others set about着手 writing. Right after our poem was completed, we started to practice for the coming show. Everybody worked hard and did our bit. Our teacher also offered us help.2021/8/2260 Finally the big day came. The hall was full of excitement. When it was our turn, I, standing on the stage with my classmates, led the reading of our poem. 2021/8/2261 In the end, when our headmaster announced the winners, the whole place burst out with clapping鼓掌 and cheering. It was really fun! 2021/8/22622016-2017学年度西城区第二学期期中练习  2017.4第一节（15分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想看一个关于中国文化方面的展提到他想看一个关于中国文化方面的展览，并请你推荐请给他回信，内容包括：1. 介绍展览的相关内容（例如：时间、地点地点、主主题等）；2. 说明你推荐该展览的原因原因；3. 询问对方的意向意向注意： 1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua2021/8/2263One possible version:Dear Jim, How’s it going? It’s great to hear from you. Knowing you want to see an exhibition about Chinese culture, I’d like to recommend推荐推荐 one to you. 2021/8/2264 The exhibition of Chinese folk arts and crafts手工制品 is now on at the Capital Museum and will last until April 30th with free admission免费入场. Artists from all over the country bring their masterpieces杰作杰作: Nianhua paintings from Tianjin, kites from Weifang, paper-cuts from Shanxi, and so on.2021/8/2265 I strongly suggest you（should）visit this exhibition, for因为 it will totally immerse使沉迷…中you in Chinese culture. You will have a great chance to watch the artists create their works up close近距离地. Moreover, there is even a hands-on area for you to make your own art.2021/8/2266 Does this exhibition appeal to you? If you are interested, log登录 onto the museum’s official website to make a reservation预约. You won’t be disappointed, I promise!Yours,Li Huaappeal to 向…呼吁; 对…有吸引力2021/8/2267第二节（20分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

上周爷爷过生日，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇周记记述你自制相册作为礼物并送出的过程注意：词数不少于60内容要点：1. 记起生日 2. 思考礼物3. 制作相册 4. 送出相册2021/8/22682021/8/2269 One possible version Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was approaching来临. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?2021/8/2270 While I was racking my brain绞尽脑汁 for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all flooded涌出，泛滥 back. It suddenly hit me that I could make a photo album to record those precious宝贵的 moments. 2021/8/2271 Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, an album of love was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.2021/8/2272 At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately亲切地, tears welling up in his eyes热泪盈眶. My parents smiled happily.2021/8/2273 The album not only served as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminded me that I should spend more time with him.2021/8/2274。