【写作公式】英语读后续写万能升华主旨句汇总.doc

写作公式】英语读后续写万能升华主旨句汇总1.读后续写的选材聚焦社会关爱、友谊和亲情，传递鼓励、关爱、理解、沟通、勇气等信息内容贴近学生生活，能够引起共鸣，可以顺利展开写作2.以情感类话题复习为主，注重学生个人的自我品德的培养和修养提升，构建积极向上的心理暗示读后续写万能升华主旨句！【方法一：首位呼应法写】2017年高考真题，讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——可爱，却心不在焉，健忘结尾时候回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，深化主题文章结尾：首尾呼应Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。

方法二：名言式结尾法】名言结尾能增添文采，凝炼中心，深化主旨，引出结论并抒情凸显主旨，渲染氛围注意：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本具体分析Just as the saying goes，“Where there is a will， there is a way.”Now I couldnt agree more with those words. 正如俗话所说，“有志者，事竟成现在我完全同意这句话方法三：情感升华法】Seeing sth , I felt as if it had been doing and saying,”........”看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”看个例子主人公“我”是个颓废少年，无意中通过自己的专长“扔标枪”，找到了自信，并成功逆袭我们怎么通过万能句型来升华呢？助人型主旨升华句Seeing the javelin, I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying, “You’ve found your talent and I’ve found you”看到标枪，我觉得它好像在鼓励我，并说，“你找到了你的天赋，我找到了你”。

这句话中，javelin是“标枪”，talent是“天赋”公式：动作+感动+感悟 助人型主旨升华句sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which sb felt deep in one’s heart. 某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来 正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点这个“动作”可以是：看到了某情景，或者拿着一样东西感动”很好理解，别人帮助了自己，产生的情绪就是“感动”，最常见的就是“眼泪往下流”感悟”这一句，往往是“爱”“善行”“付出”等关键字的励志句成长型主旨升华句“改变”和“成长”是我们读后续写一个重要主题在第二段的结尾处，我们怎样写“改变成长”型的主旨升华句呢？我们可以根据“改变”的因素来学习不同的表达比如克服困难，克服自卑等下面有七类不同的改变模式第一类学习知识促“改变”知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。

It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make moreattempts.学习永远为时不晚每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”make more attempts 做更多尝试第二类发挥天赋促“改变”认识自身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件请看下面的例句Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹分析】possess 拥有create miracles表示创造奇迹第三类追逐梦想促“改变”永远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”请看下面两个例句It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。

只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想分析】take full advantage of 充分利用， realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”第四类克服困难促“改变”只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状请看下面的例句The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛我们要勇敢面对只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）分析】smooth 表示“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties 表示“克服困难”；make every effort 表示“做出努力”；as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。

第五类战胜恐惧促“改变”我们在改变的过程中，经常需要克服自己内心的恐惧请看下面的例句：Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观分析】Determination 表示“决心”；optimism表示“乐观”conquer your fear表示“克服你的恐惧”；accomplish your goal表示“完成目标”【2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题】 In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them. Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.第六类战胜自卑促“改变”我们在改变之前，可能会有一些自卑的心理阻碍着我们成长，比如自己的外貌的缺陷，性格内向等，如何克服自卑，实现人生逆袭？请看下面的例句。

I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性分析】eventually表示“最后，终于”；personality 表示“个性”第七类战胜消极促“改变”积极的心态像太阳，照到哪里，哪里亮积极”思维，最终让我们成长改变，这种主题，是读后续写中比较常见的请看下面的例句Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.态度对我们来说比事实更重要。

我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实 然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度分析】Attitude表示“态度”；positive attitude.就是“积极的态度”方法四：用修辞手法】以下是可以用于读后续写结尾的一些美词美句，它们通过运用多种修辞手法让文章更有画面感和美感，既能点题又能大大加强文章的可读性1. Todays experience was like an everlasting flower， blooming in the river of my memories. 今天的经历将会像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵，永远绽放在我的记忆里比喻）（bloom开花）2. With laughter lingering in the room， their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades. 伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们真挚的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败比喻）（linger回荡，徘徊; blossom开花）3. Alexs beam of smile seemed to wipe off Theos frustration and he was really expecting to be the next champion. Alex的微笑冲散了Theo心中的阴霾，他又开始对下一次的胜利充满期待。

拟人，比喻）（frustration沮丧）4. His words floated in the wind like a birds happy song. 他的话语回荡在风中，就像鸟儿的歌声一样欢快动听比喻）5 Follow your dream and the universe will open doors where there are only walls. 追随你的梦想吧，宇宙会在原本只有墙的地方为你敞开大门拟人）6. Love matters more than anything， 。