
专题25 书面表达.docx
13页专题 25 书面表达之概要写作序号内容Part 1题型总览题型综述答题策略Part 2真题感悟品读范文 提分词汇 亮点句型Part 3专题强化真题自测自测模拟Part 1题型总览【题型综述】概要写作是一种“阅读+写作”的复合型任务,测试学生的阅读理解、概括归纳和书面表达方面的综合能 力选材上,提供一篇350词以内的短文,一般以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主,要求考生写出一篇60 词 左右的内容概要(注意:少于 40 或多于 80 词扣两分),而新写的语篇,既要做到在结构、衔接和连贯性 等方面与原文保持一致,又要做到简明扼要、意义完整、结构严密和语句通顺答题策略】1•读懂原文,明确篇章结构写概要之前,一定要先通读原文, 确定文章的体裁和主题在正确把握文章主旨和段落大意后,明确 原文的篇章结构 根据意义划分文中的自然段,意义段的数量对应的就是要点的数量注意一个自然段不一定是一个要点,有时几个自然段说明一个要点,有时一个自然段包含数个要点2•去次留精,提炼关键信息•明确全文的篇章结构后,就要处理原文的内容,目的是保留主要内容,删除次要内容•先找出主题句,同时标注与主题相关的关键词,最后归纳的要点往往是这些词句的同义转述。
• 原文描述性的语言、细节性的信息如列举数字和列举的事例等无须在概要中一一列出3•归纳要点合理表达明确每个意义段的关键信息后,接下来应用自己的语言准确地表达各意义段的要点 为避免和原文的 句子重复,可利用同义转述和句式转换这两种形式归纳要点各要点的词数应根据文中对应内容的篇幅来 定,分清主次4・句式多样注意过渡 在概要中合理使用非谓语、从句和特殊句式等使句式丰富多样,但句子结构不可过长,也不要用太复杂的 句子结构同时选用适当的过渡衔接词衔接上下文,保证概要部分内容的连贯性Part 2真题感悟Passage 1【真题详解】【2019 •浙江卷】阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus校 园)like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache ifyou rule out now the things that you don't like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know unless you actually visit.Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It's a chance tochat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and it won't cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at . While visiting an online college fair can't take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend.答案】It's really worthwhile to pay a visit to their desired colleges personally before applying. Undoubtedl should visit their local colleges, which may be included in applications. At least, they should visit the school and figure out its real conditions in advance. For students who are short of money and time, registering for the online college fair is a good alternative to help them better understand schools.【分析】 本文要求阅读短文,根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要,即用尽可能少的词汇集中展现原材料的主要 思想和观点。
这主要是考查学生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及总结概括能力,熟练掌握从句、 非谓语动词等语法知识和遣词造句的能力详解】1. 要先读懂、读透原作这是准确再现原文、写好概要的前提动笔前多读两遍原文,直至弄懂读透2. 抓住文中的关键句,确定写作主题开头 It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply 点明了本文 主题;But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one. There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area 说 明了去大学看看的必要性和可行性; If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply,at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend.在时间上提供 了更多选择;if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive为不能亲自去大学看的学生提供了另外一种方法。
3. 拟好提纲有了提纲,写概要时就会有章法,也不会遗漏原作中的要点4. 快速成文,反复推敲按照文章要求和拟好的提纲一气呵成,写完初稿5. 对照修改润色,再读原文,查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要内容用词是否恰当,可有可无的删掉注意 词类、时态、语态的适当调整点睛】范文观点明确,重点突出,语言简练,词数适当作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句which may be included in applications.和 who are short of money and time.动名词 registering online 作主语,显示了很 高的驾驭英语的能力提分词汇】1. undoubtedly adv.确实地,毋庸置疑地2. applications n.申请3. figure out 算出【亮点句型】1. It's really worthwhile to pay a visit to their desired colleges personally before applying.在申请之前亲 自参观 一下自己心仪的大学是非常值得的2. For students who are short of money and time, registering for the online college fair is a good alternative to help them better understand schools.对于那些缺乏资金和时间的学生来说,报名参加网上高校招聘会是一个很好的 选择,可以帮助他们更好地了解学校。
Passage 2【真题详解】【2019 •上海卷】Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Where are the bees?Bees are essential to the pro。
