tem8作文试卷评析(上).ppt

TEM8(2009)作文试卷评析 华东理工大学 颜静兰教授,英语专业八级考试课堂,主讲人颜静兰教授简介 英语专业八级考试写作阅卷组组长 华东理工大学外国语学院副院长，硕士生导师 全国跨文化交际研究会常务理事，上海市分会副会长 研究生方向：跨文化交际、英国文学、英语教学,英语专业八级考试课堂,试卷的题型、题数、计分、比重和时间列表 (新版英语专业八级考试大纲）,英语专业八级考试课堂,考试大纲要求 VI.写作(Part VI: Writing ) 1.测试要求: 根据所给的作文题目及要求撰写各类体裁的文章，文章长度约400个单词；能做到内容充实、语言通顺、用词恰当、表达得体 2.测试形式: 本部分分为主观试题, 共一个作文题目考试时间45分钟 3.测试目的: 按照《大纲》的要求测试学生的写作能力英语专业八级考试课堂,高等学校英语专业英语教学大纲八级要求 能写各类体裁的文章，做到内容充实，语言通顺，用词恰当，表达得体 写作速度为30分钟300-400个单词英语专业八级考试课堂,全国近5年八级考试子项目得分情况一览,英语专业八级考试课堂,09年作文存在的主要问题 问题（1） 审题 在八级写作考试中要写出符合要求的作文，第一步就是审题。

审题正确，文章就成功了一半审题错误，作文肯定不及格 审题，就是认真阅读写作题目以及相关的信息和要求，准确、全面地领会题目的含义，了解题目要求，从而为构思合乎具体写作要求的文章思路及框架打下基础英语专业八级考试课堂,作文题目解析 八级作文题目一般由五个部分组成 1.情景介绍 Nowadays with the development of economy, the existing cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing. 2. 观点 What do you think is one of the major problems that may result from this process of urbanization? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic given below： 3. 标题 One Major Problem in the Process of Urbanization,英语专业八级考试课堂,4. 写作要求 In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary. 5. 评分标准 Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.,英语专业八级考试课堂,一般来讲，八级作文观点类分为三种情形：第一种是议论，即对现存观点（通常是两种）做一选择；另一种是立论，即直接提出一种观点，然后来论证它；第三种是驳论，即对现有观点进行批驳。

到目前为止，第一种文章所占的比例较高，一般会给两种较为对立的观点，考生应该选择其中的一种观点进行论述英语专业八级考试课堂,审题重要性 2006年八级考试 通过率：49.97 平均分：55.06 作文平均分：11.01 原因：题目难，审题不清,英语专业八级考试课堂,2006年的题目： Joseph Epstein, a famous writer, once said, “We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide (so) that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.” Do you agree or disagree with him? Write an essay about 400 words entitled: Ambition,英语专业八级考试课堂,注意： 审题不仅仅浏览一个标题，也要认真读和研究其他部分，联系起来，真正明确写作目的和要求。

在历年写作阅卷中发现，审题错误（跑题、部分跑题）是学生经常犯的错误 主要原因是： 只看标题不看其他部分就动手写作，从而导致对作文要求理解严重偏差，内容不符合要求 不注重研读写作项目中对篇章布局的提示，使得作文布局偏差，结构失衡英语专业八级考试课堂,2009年八级作文题目 1. 情景 Mandarin, or putonghua, is the standard service sector language in China. But recently, employees at a big city’s subway station have been busy learning dialects of other parts of the country. 2. 观点 Proponents say that using dialects in the subway is a way to provide better service. But opponents think that encouraging the use of dialects in public counters the national policy to promote putonghua. What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: 3. 标题 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?,英语专业八级考试课堂,4. 写作要求 In the first part of your essay you should present clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 5. 评分标准 Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.,英语专业八级考试课堂,观点： Proponents: using dialects in the subway is a way to provide better service. Opponents: Encouraging the use of dialects in public counters the national policy to promote putonghua. What is your opinion? Topic： Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?,英语专业八级考试课堂,讨论：作文（1） Nowadays our government has made policy to promote putonghua, and we have a special day as“Putonhua Day”to encourage people to learn putonghua. But some people thought that learning dialects of other parts of our country can better help others. I cannot support this opinion.,英语专业八级考试课堂,I think learning putonghua is very important and there are actually four advantages. First, putonghua help produce the communication barriers. As we all known, China has a big country of a large population and 56 minorities. In sequent, there are different dialects in different groups. People’s ability is limited and we cannot learn all the dialects for communication. If we all learn putonghua, we can take the barriers and say with others smoothly. Secondly, putonhua can accelerate the speed of the communication. If you are traveling to an area where people use a different dialect as you use in daily life, putonhua will help you to get information or help that you need quickly. If you speak your dialect, local people cannot understand you, and the failure of the communication may lead to disaster.,英语专业八级考试课堂,Thirdly, putonhua will help all the peoples in China to build a harmonious society. If people just stick to their own dialects, communication will be slow or。