续写语言之历险类.docx

续写语言之历险类知识点1 遭遇危险在遭遇危险的时候，一定要描写的就是人物的心理，“害怕”一定是遭遇险境之中的第一反应，除了套话以外，可以加入更加复杂的心理表现，以A and B的形式出现（如害怕和后悔；害怕和紧张；开心与不自信等），或者加以描述出现这种心理的原因，显得描写真实、有别于他人，且代入感变强经典句式1.一阵恐惧将我包裹住心理】A wave of fear wrapped around /enveloped me2. 恐惧和后悔的泪水噙满我的眼眶行为】Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes/ welled up in my eyes.3.受到了突然的惊吓，她定在原地动弹不得心理+行为】 Badly startled at/ frightened by the sudden incident, she was frozen to the spot.巩固练习：汉译英1．我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末汉译英) 2．我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。

汉译英) 3．想到我们可能要再这样的黑暗中迷失，我不禁全身打起了冷颤汉译英) 知识点2 出现转机心理描写过后，笔触要再次落回剧情的发展来推动节奏，所以不要有太多的废话，直接描写事件出现的转机想象一下我们在一个深邃的洞穴里看到光亮，既然是转机，通常就需要交代两个事件，“深邃的洞穴”和“光亮的出现”，所以需要一个背景的铺垫，以及一个事件的主题两种句式就非常好用，第一种：介宾作状语（铺垫），主句（转机）；第二种：从句特别是时间状语从句，可以非常好的增加句子的节奏感经典句式1.仿佛过了几个世纪，我们听到了远处微弱的声音介词+宾从】 After what seemed like ages, we heard a faint voice from the distance.2. 仿佛一个世纪过去了，就在这时远处的水声引起了我们的注意力。

时间状语从句】It seemed a century had passed when the sound of water in the distance caught our attention.3. 就在我们绝望的那一刻，我们听到了远处微弱的声音时间状语从句】Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice in the distance.4.就在我们苦苦思索如果逃脱的时候，一个绝妙的想法闪过我的脑海：……【时间状语从句】Just as we were pondering upon how to seek a way out, a brilliant idea flashed through my mind: ….巩固练习：汉译英4．我抓起相机冲了出去，拍下了这只逃跑的熊的珍贵照片，使这次旅行终生难忘汉译英) 5．我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期这次西部大荒之旅给我留下了深刻的印象。

汉译英) 6．大约十分钟以后，就在兔子已经完全消失在我们的视线中的时候，我们终于意识到，我们迷路了汉译英) 7．幸运的是，我突然想到河水可以将我们引回营地汉译英) 知识点3 脱离危险在完全脱离了险境后，我们可以描写喜悦激动的心情，再写作者感想（上价值）；当然也可以适当留白，只写到险境结束的标示性场景，再以语言（上价值）作为文章结尾，都会是高效且好操作的手段经典句式1.我喜极而泣行为+心理】 I cried with great joy and excitement.2.随着农场印入眼帘，我们都长舒了一口气标志性场景】With the farm house coming into view (with sth. doing), we both breathed a sigh of relief.巩固练习：汉译英8．我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命，不再冒这样的险。

汉译英) 9．就是这次旅行改变了我，给了我全新的生活汉译英) 10．最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境汉译英)11．正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心汉译英) 知识点4 常见救援场景1.火灾救援她闻到一股刺鼻的焦味，立刻停下手中的活→ 四处查看，发现厨房已被火焰吞噬 → 她赶紧抓起，冲向大门 → 一边拨打119，一边奔向街道 → 到达安全地带后，她终于松了一口气She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing → She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames → She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door → While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street → After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief.2.地震救援他隐约听到废墟下传来微弱的呼救声→ 立即确定声源 → 找到一根铁杆作为撬杠 → 小心翼翼地挪开瓦砾 → 成功将受困者拉出 → 他背起受困者，迅速撤离到安全区域。

He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble → Immediately located the source → Found a metal rod to use as a lever → Carefully lifted away the debris → Successfully pulled the trapped person out → He carried the person to a safe area.3.落水救援她意识到自己被困在水中，无法游到岸边→ 她拼命寻找漂浮的木板 → 抓住木板，用随身携带的拨打求救 → 等待救援时，她紧紧抓住木板 → 听到远处传来直升机的声音，她的心情逐渐平静下来She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore → She desperately looked for a floating plank → Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help → While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly → Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade.4.迷路救援她发现儿子不在卧室里→ 迅速检查了整个房子 → 问了邻居，没人见过他 → 她拿起，急切地拨打家人和朋友的号码 → 最终报警，并请求帮助寻找 → 整晚她都在街上四处寻找。

She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom → Quickly checked the entire house → Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him → She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends → Finally reported to the police and asked for help → She spent the whole night searching the streets.5.野生动物救援他看到一只小狗被困在河边的泥潭里→ 判断必须用绳子才能把它拉出来 → 找到一根结实的树枝和绳子 → 小心接近小狗，安抚它别害怕 → 将绳子套在小狗身上，慢慢拉上岸 → 小狗获救后，他检查了一下它的四肢，确保没有受伤He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river → Realized he needed a rope to pull it out → Found a sturdy branch and some rope → Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down → Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety → After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sure it wasn’t injured.真题演练1.（2025·山东日照·一模）12．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of exp。