经典高考英语作 文公 开课

1、,执教：汪建华 （南通市高中英语学科带头人、 江苏省高考英语优秀阅卷老师） （特色阅读教学 & 作文教学） Q Q：315310858 欢迎拍砖 & 交流！,高考英语作文公开课,I Shall Not Live In Vain -Emily Dickinson If I can stop one heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life the aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Unto his nest again, I shall not live in vain.,Daily Speech,Whats the theme of the poem?,cartoon,poster,graph,photo,漫画作文,Lets develop our writing skills in cartoons!,What is a good writing？,Content: * everything needed inclu

2、ded which is related to your view.(内容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),How to write based on cartoons?,1. 读图(topics),3. 谋篇(organization),2.解意(theme),.读图：Topics of cartoons,Topics of cartoons,Environmental problems,Attitudes towards life,Social phenomenon,.解意(Theme)-to the po

3、int,Attention: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读！,1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle),. 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme),The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.,Example 1,角度 comparison 主旨 education inequality,Example 2,角度 criticize 主旨,Students and parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.,Judge the themes of the following cartoons as quickly as possible.,Lets have a competition,Come on! Choose me!,2,1,3,5,4,6,People lack commu

4、nication.,Picture1,Protect animals. No buying, no killing.,Picture2,People cant afford heavy medical fees.,Picture 3,One false move may lose the game. Think twice before we do anything.,Picture 4,Money cant buy everything. Health is the best wealth.,Picutre5,Picture6,Children suffer from too heavy burden.,.谋篇 -Organization,Step1. Description Describe what you have seen in the picture briefly. Step2. Analysis Figure out the inner meaning of the picture. Step3. Solutions Give your ideas about the

5、picture.,发现问题,解决问题,分析问题,Step 1 Description To what degree should we describe the cartoon?,Properly, briefly,Example,a country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of education,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are ,Sentence structures:,a country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of modern education,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there

6、 are ,a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education. In contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits of modern education .,As is vividly shown in the picture,Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results),Clues：描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。(referring to the given Chinese words),Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates in

7、rural country worsen the problem,Sentence structures:,1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society. 2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that 5. ,Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates in rural coun

8、try worsen the problem,Sentence structures: 1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society. 2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that,The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who

9、 manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, schools in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem.,Step 3 Solutions (your opinions /suggestions),the government all citizens Individual (从大到小) be aware of Only in this way social justice harmonious society (从意识到行动),As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view, 2. It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to 3. The government should make laws to 4. We should raise peoples awareness of 5. Everyone should make great efforts to,Only in this way can we,Sentence structures:,Can you think of some sentence structures to form you

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