高中英语复习北师大版必修三《Unit 7拓展写作智能批改讲评课》 课件 (共22张PPT)

1、Unit 7 Communication Workshop Extended Writing 期中考试书面表达智批讲评,Objectives,You learn to examine and analyze the topic and requirements of the composition. You try to improve and polish the composition by checking and correcting the mistakes online through group discussion and individual work. You accumulate vocabulary and linking expressions concerning the relevant topic to form well-structured compositions free of spelling and grammatical mistakes.,Yangtze Finless Porpoises, are under threats of hu

2、mans and are likely to die out/become extinct soon, of which the number has fallen to no more than 1000.,Lead-in,Analysis of the composition,调查显示，中国长江江豚(Yangtze Finless Porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只,江豚的生存环境十分糟糕，航运(shipping)、非法捕捞、气候变化、水污染等是导致江豚死亡的主要原因，假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一情况并提供帮助。内容应包括： 说明写信目的 简述江豚现状及其原因。 希望WWF如何帮助，比如: 资助江豚保护项目（a special fund organization）等 表示感谢并期待回复,Relevant expressions,Human activities owe the endangered speices an apology.,shipping,illegal fishing,climat

3、e change,water pollution,Relevant expressions,1.establish a special fund organization,2.draw up some rules on,3.publicize the importance of porpoise conservation,sentence patterns,Causes and effects: Human activities have greatly affected . , causing /which causes a striking decrease in.,sentence patterns,Offering suggestions or solutions:,It is our duty to do / It is high time we did /we should do It is important/ of great importance to do It is suggested /advisable that Doing something is bene

4、ficial to What needs to be done/matters most is that We are supposed to do/should do,sentence patterns,Expressing thanks: I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/account. I will be grateful if you can take my suggestions into consideration/account.,How we performed in the Exam,Proof reading,共性高频语法错误修改,智学网智批报告,Lets have a competition! Extraordinary Group VS Unbelievable Group,Classification of Mistakes,Part of speech (词性误用),It is of great important to finance a s

5、pecial fund organization.（10 points） Shipping and over-fishing are the mainly reason why these fish die in a large number.(10 points) Nowadays, shopping, fishing, climate change and water pollution have made their live condition worse and worse .(10 points),Group Competition: Find out one mistake in each sentence,Collocations (固定搭配 介词错误),In my point of view,the WWF can found a special fund organization.(10 points ) So Id like to write the letter to draw your attention on this problem.(20 points

6、) For instance, WWF can build a speical fund organization to appeal more attention.(30 points),Sentences（句子成分 连接词错误）,According to a study, Yangtze Finless porpoises are in danger,which affected by human activities.(20 points) Humans owe an apology to them, we need to take action as soon as possible.(30 points) Chinese Yangtze Porpoises are influenced by human activities so much as they are going to die out.(20 points) It is high time we stand out to protect them from harm by human beings.(20 poi

7、nts),Proof reading,个性语法错误修改,智学网智批报告,Lets check our own mistakes!,Presentation of personal Correction,Proof reading,学生优秀范文展示,智学网智批报告,Lets learn from each other!,One possible Version(范文学习),Dear Sir or Madam, Im a student from Anhui, China. I am writing to tell you something about Yangtze Finless Porpoise. Owing to lack of human protection, the number of Yangtze Finless Porpoise is becoming smaller and smaller, only less than 1000 left. Whats worse, the living ones are likely to die out as well wit

8、h the terrible condition remaining the same. The main causes include shipping, illegal fishing, climate change and water pollution. Therefore, its high time we took immediate measures to change the situation. So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoises by setting up a special fund organization or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you! Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Summary,Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. of studies by Francis Bacon 读书使人充实，讨论使人机智，写作使人严谨。 弗朗西斯 培根论学习,Be exact in writing!,

《高中英语复习北师大版必修三《Unit 7拓展写作智能批改讲评课》 课件 (共22张PPT)》由会员ha****o分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《高中英语复习北师大版必修三《Unit 7拓展写作智能批改讲评课》 课件 (共22张PPT)》请在金锄头文库上搜索。