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高考英语冲刺卷1.【2019届黑龙江省牡丹江市第一高级中学高三上学期开学摸底考试】假如你是李华，你的父母最近计划生第二胎。给你校的外籍老师Lucy写信谈谈你的看法。要求：字数120左右；参考词汇：sibling 兄弟姐妹。Dear Lucy,I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Lucy,I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made. They plan to give birth to a second child. How exciting it is!Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health. However, things will change from now on. I am going to have a sibling to play with and share everything with. I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.However, I am afraid that I know little about how to take good care of a baby and how to set a good example to my future sibling. Could you give me some advice? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：你的父母最近计划生第二胎。给你校的外籍老师Lucy写信谈谈你的看法。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：sibling（兄弟姐妹）；give birth to a second child（生二胎）；psychological health（心理健康）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子如：“I cant wait to tell you the decision my parents have just made.”使用定语从句；“How exciting it is!”运用感叹句；“Being the only child in the family, most teenagers like me grow up lonely, which will do harm to our psychological health.”现在分词在句中做原因状语，同时使用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句；“I will help my parents look after my sibling when he/she is born, ensuring that he/she grows up happily with love and affection all around.”现在分词做伴随状语。2.【重庆市第一中学2018届高三下学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，你们学校下周将举办一场以“关爱动物”为主题的宣传活动，学生自己设计海报并展览。你的朋友Lisa对此很感兴趣，请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括: 1. 时间与地点； 2. 活动内容。注意：1. 词数100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Lisa, Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you. It is probably clear that animals are our friends, sharing the same blue planet with us. The activity aimed at protecting animals is scheduled to be held in April in our school. At that time, it must be a time for you to enjoy yourself to the fullest. At that time, a wide range of splendid activities will be held, thus catching your eyes. Wed like our students to design their own posters and exhibit them, thus arousing students awareness of animals protection. I would appreciate it if you could come to the scene in person. You are highly welcome to our school. A prompt reply is much favored. Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文的话题“关爱动物”，只有部分的文字提示，所以给考生自由发挥的空间较大，对于考生的综合能力要求较高。因此要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。要弄清题意，确定文章的主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。接着要认真构思，列出简单的提纲，安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾，最后扩展成文。扩展成文时要选择自己熟悉的短语，句式要灵活多变，同时也要选择恰当的连接词，把各个部分连成一个完整的整体。【点睛】本文结构完成，以简单句为主，辅以省略句，非谓语，同时还运用了常用句式“I would appreciate it if”，句式较为灵活。句中既有主动语态，又有大量的被动语态，相互衬托，丰富了表达形式，从而增加文章的可读性。高档词汇和词组，如“ be aimed at; be scheduled to; a wide range of splendid activities; to the fullest; catch your eyes; arouse students awareness of” 等增加了文章亮点。本文第一段用一个非谓语作状语的省略句式：“Having known that you take a great fancy to our activity called “Animals Protection”, I am writing to you with the aim of introducing it to you.” 既简洁又具体地点明了文章的话题“Animals Protection”。第二段中运用了名词性从句“It is probably clear that animals are our fri