高考英语写作之建议信分段分析及示例讲解
A letter of giving advice,建议信写作的注意事项： a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。 b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。 c.人称为第二人称。,假设你是李华，你的笔友张明刚去美国上学，他来信说他在交朋友上遇到一些困难，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助处理好人际关系。 内容提示： 1. 和同学友好相处，对别人微笑。 2. 多和别人沟通交流并且试图了解别人的爱好。 3. 多帮助别人和别人分享你的快乐和悲伤。,别人会觉得你很友好，会更愿意和你交朋友,这样你会更多的了解别人，交到更多的朋友,这样你才能交到真正的朋友,三个步骤,第一段：写出写信目的 ；,第二段：列出所提建议以及这样做的好处,第三段：写出写信人的希望,建议信写作步骤,Dear Zhang Ming, I am glad to receive your letter, I am sorry to know that (你在有困难)However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly,it's important for you to do sth If you do this, Secondly, you should/can That way, Thirdly, it would be a good idea if By doing this, I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours, Li Hua,Outlining,Dear Zhang Ming, I am glad to receive your letter, I am sorry to know that you have trouble in making friends.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly,it's important for you to get along well with your classmates and smile at them.If you do this,they will feel you are friendly and will be willing to make friends with you.,Secondly,you should communicate with others and try to know about their hobbies,That way,you can know more about others and make more friends.Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you often help others and share your happiness and sadness with your classmates,By doing this, you can make more true friends. I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours, Li Hua,写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句,A建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1I am very glad to hear that you want to 2I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 3.I am writing to you for the purpose of - 4. I am writing to share some advice with you,6 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认为， 如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。,B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议，井然有序。 第一：first,firstly, first of all ,to begin with. 第二：second,secondly,what's more, furthermore,moreover,besides,in addition 最后：third,thirdly,finally, eventually,at last，last but not the least,2.it would be a good idea if 3.youd better do sth,给出建议句型： 1.it's adj for sb to do sth,假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。 内容提示：1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 3. 课后认真独立完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习 5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量,建议信结尾常用句式,1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 2.I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。,提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。,give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English,I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.,Here are my suggestions/tips on .,做好课前预习,preview,Prepare/ make preparations for,Look through,课堂上认真听讲,Listen to the teacher carefully,Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully,记好笔记,Set / write down,Make/take notes,课后认真独立完成作业,每天进行英语听说练习,Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/dont copy,Practise listening and speaking every day,加强课外阅读扩大词汇量,Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.,注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： First, second, third.Finally Firstly, secondly，eventually to begin with/ to start with, at last 递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only.but also.； not.but.；, besides； in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.； meanwhile； at the same time；,点睛之笔：,Nothing is impossible to a willing heart! Practice makes perfect Never give up/lose heart If you have any trouble, please turn to me for help. Id like to share my methods with you. Only in this way, can you learn English well read novels, magazines and everything to do with English,改错,1.Ill help you in your English 2.My English is not very well. 3.Finish it on yourself. 4. There are some advise. 5.Dont afraid of English. 6. Set up a learning aim, go ahead to achieve it. 7. Set down the knowledge in the class 8. You must listen carefully and follow teachers said. 9. Only if you read about it ahead of schedule, you will learn it better.,with,/On your own,is,be,and,what,advice,will you,Well -good,On-by,I am sure youll be success. You can set down that you think is important.,successful,You can set down what you think is important.,all,Beautiful sentences in you compositions,1.Here is some useful advice for you about how to learn English well ( class 2 Jirun Ze) 2. Hearing that you are in trouble with English, Id like to give you some advice on how to get along well with English.(Class 1 Maguo Qin) 3. No one can fail to notice the fact that listening and reading are playing an important role in learning English.(Class 1 Han Xu),4.I will give you some necessary advice which can improve your English.(Class7 Xie Shuang) 5. No one can deny the fact that it is important to listen to the teacher carefully. (Cass 7 Liuxin Yan) 6.Only in these ways, can you have a good command of English.,Dear Zhang Ming, I am glad to receive your letter, I am sorry to know that you have trouble in studying English.Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly,it's important for you to preview the lessons before class.If you do this, you will u
