一、申请信

写作申请信,贺楠 ，胡晨光，解佳琪， 林森森 ，宋立勇,写作 2012年全国卷1/新课标,贺楠,一、试题-2012年全国一/新课标卷,第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。,一、试题-2012年全国一/新课标卷,注意: 1.数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好. Dear Sir or Madam, _ Regards, Li Hua,二、试题解读 申请信,1.写作的体裁属于应用文-信件类之申请信，在写作题的命制上，不刻意注重形式，而更加注重内容。 2.对于本篇文章，文章的格式不是重点，对于这样一封申请信信，题目只给出了三条简单的内容提纲，并没有过多细节，这就要求考生们能够联系生活实际、充分发挥合理想象力来完成一篇字数有限制而又言之有物的文章。 3.写申请信的三个步骤是：你好我好大家好的过程。即：除了要涵盖题目要求的三个要点：1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。还要从实际角度出发增加相关细节。（具体见写作思路）,三、申请信写作思路,第一步：自我介绍+获取信息途径+夸赞对方，表示兴趣(即介绍参加意图) I am Li Hua, a 16- year-old boy from China, presently in my second year of high school./the chairman of the Students Union. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. As a senior high school student, I am very interested in the camp and eager to participate.,三、申请信写作思路,第二步:我的申请资格（列举自己的优势，即“我好”） 此处总分结构，注意列举时句子之间的过渡 总：General acknowledgement is very good of my personality and the knowledge capabilities. I am a suitable person to do I have several reasons to do 分：I am good at / excel at I regard as a golden opportunity for me to do . I believe I will be a nice helper in the team.,要有过渡：also/besides /meanwhile/ whats more/ moreover/ furthermore/in addition,三、申请信写作思路,第三步：希望获准+畅想获准后的好处（即“大家好”） I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. I hope I will get admitted to your camp and I cant wait for it.,四、官方范文,Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their cultures as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua,五、优秀范文,Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a boy of seventeen, a middle school student from China. I learn from the Internet that you are organizing a summer camp in Singapore, which welcomes students from all over the world. As a senior high school student, I am very interested in the camp and eager to participate. General acknowledgement is very good of my personality and the knowledge capabilities. I have been learning English for more than 10 years, and I can communicate with people in fluent English. Meanwhile, I regard this camp as a golden opportunity for me to introduce my motherland, China, to my overseas counterparts and get to know about their countries as well. I hope I will get admitted to your camp and I cant wait for it. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua,六、课堂练习,注意：1词数不少于60。2可根据需要适当增加细节。 3信的开头、结尾已给出。 Dear Harry, Im writing to apply for the photographer for Our Steps. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua,姓名：李华 性别：男 年龄：16 年级：高一 兴趣：摄影、写作、户外运动 其他：活泼、开朗、精力充沛； 曾获北京市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖 应聘目的：参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活,六、参考范文,Dear Harry, I am writing to apply for the photographer for our steps. I read the announcement/information on the school publication and I am interested in it. I am Li Hua, a boy of sixteen, presently in my first year of high school. And I am outgoing and energetic. I believe I am the right person of this position.am interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Last year I won the second prize in youth group at Beijing Photography Competition. Besides, I am good at writing, which might be helpful for the work. Taking part in all kinds of outdoor group activities is also one of my hobbies，which enable me to be an team-work star. I would like to work for Our Steps since it would be a great opportunity for me to join in social activities and enrich my life. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely Li Hua,七、课后练习,2012全国1 写作,宋立勇,假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。 注意: 1.数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好. *,相关重点词句总结,常用语： 开头 I have learned that you are hiring- I would like to apply for- I am interested in a -position in your firm. 结尾 Thank your for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.,例题,假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。 注意: 1.数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.,官方范文,五、One Possible Version Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the anno