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高考英语书面表达写作指导,Tasks:,1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing,议论类,Group work （1）:,1. share your essay with your group members 2. raise the difficulties you had when writing it,读图,1.漫画的画面 细节 2.漫画的文字 观点 3. 漫画的夸张 寓意,读图,画面 文字 夸张,读图,The underwear ( shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isn't a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!,夸张,解意,1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度,夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？,解意,. 联系生活，明晰主旨,Imagination!,解意,注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！,夸张,寓意,The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.,Dont be too confident in real life. Be honest and modest. Dont judge a book by its cover.,谋篇,3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon,Part 1 Describe the picture,We can see in the picture The picture is talking about/shows As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture In the picture, there are/is (are) doing Let look at the picture above first.,1. In the picture we can see a bottle of less water whose label is written full.,2. From the picture we can see that there is a bottle. It has two hands and tries to put an label written “full”on its body. A smile is on the neck of the bottle. Inside the bottle is there a little water.,Lets practise!,Describe the picture,The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”,Lets practise!,Describe the picture,We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.,Part 2 Interpret the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of The picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,Part 3 Give your opinions,I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,should It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,2/3,must have to Do/Dont,Group work （2）:,Join your group and rewrite the essay together, using the expressions youve learned.,Polish up your article!,1. To use linking words if necessary 2. To use complicated structures if possible,1. To use linking words,表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also. 表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to.,表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion,1. To use linking words,(五三),2. To use complicated structures,People suggest that the conference be put off.,It is suggested that the conference be put off.,She walked out of the room and many students followed her.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the room,To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things.,What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.,被动语态,非谓语动词,从句,The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,倒装,So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.,强调句,It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began.,Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.,虚拟语气,But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.,My version: For most of the parents, its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children-hardware, software and underwear.,It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someones underwear, but it de